SS: Mere Yaar ka Pyar!(Last part:pg 57) - Page 23

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Posted: 14 years ago
NOTE:I'm soooooooo sorry for late update!!!!!!I'm veryyyy busyy nowadays.I have added those who have requested.Please check ur IDs in the pm list on page 1.BTW Thanxxxx for ur wonderful comments.I hope u guys also like this part.Leave ur comments even if u don't like the part and One more thing i'm sorry for not replying on ur comments.Its just that i'm busy b/c of studies but i read each and every comment.Its gud to know that u guys like this story.I have made this part longer.Thanxx for reading the note.

Recap:Maan and geet met.Maan remembered about his revenge.

SS:Mere Yaar Ka Pyar!
Part 9

Suddenly his smile faded from his face when he remembered about his revenge.He went to his room.He didnot want to go to office.He couldnot decide whether to choose his love for geet or revenge for his mother.

Maan(Thinking):Meray saath aisa kyu ho raha hai??Why i have to choose between my mother and geet???I love both of them too much.How can i see geet in pain???And how can i deceive my mother by not hurting her murderer??I'm tooo confuse please help me out.

While praying to God,Maan fall asleep.

Maan was standing in the jungle.He saw geet crying and his mother came to him.Indicating her finger towards geet and crying constantly while pleading him for something he couldnot understand.

He woke up with a jerk when nakul called him for lunch.He told him that he would come later.

Maan(Thinking):Maa khawab main roo rahe thi aur geet ke taraf ishara kar rahe thi.Iss ka matlab hai ka main Madhavi se badla loon.(Tears came from his eyes)Iss ka matlab hai ka mujhe geet ko dard dena ho ga.I can't hurt her but i have too.I'm sorry geet tumhi apne maa ke wajah se dard sahena hoga.My revenge will start after you will fall in love with me.First i have to make u fall in love with me.


(Sorry i'm not writing whole wedding sequence b/c already in many ff this sequence was written perfectly.Soo sorry i can't write as much good as other writers have written.Now i will write the scene after their marriage.From the night time)


(Geet was wearing this)


(Maan was wearing this)

Meera,Madhavi and her friends had taken geet to maneet room.The whole room was decorated with candles and red roses.

(Sorry i can't find the exact picture just imagine this room with these candles and red roses)


Meera:Di,Mujhe pata chala hai ka maan jeeju ne yeh bedroom khud set kiya hai.

Geet was irritating.Her entire family along with her few friends attended the wedding.Her friends were teasing her.She didnot know why she was feeling shy.She was not understanding her feelings.

Madhavi:Chalo!Ab hum chalte hain.Geet bhi aaram kar le.
Pinky(Geet 's friend):Haan ab hum chalte hain.Geet ko tu ab maan jeeju ka intezar hoga.
Meera(Whispered in geet's ear):Takecare Di! By the way jeeju itne handsome hain intezar tu nahi ho raha ho ga(Geet's cheeks turned red).Bye(Meera Kissed her cheek)

When everyone left.Geet started to think what to do she did not want to face maan.

Geet(Thinking):Geet kuch soch iss se pehle ka maan aa jaye........Idea kyu na main jaldi se so jao.Haan theek hain per main bed per nahi couch per so jate hoon.

(She was wearing this night wear)

Geet quickly changed into her black night wear and slept on the couch.Maan entered in the room.He saw geet sleeping on the couch.She was looking very pretty.He controlled his feelings and picked geet and took her on the bed.He changed into white shalwar kameez.He slept on the couch.

(He was wearing this)

Next day,Geet woke up but when she saw maan staring at her.She again closed her eyes pretending like she was sleeping.Maan knew that she was pretending and for irriating her.He played the song 'Pehle Nazar mein' from the movie race on the music player with full volume.Geet knew that he had done it for waking her up.She came out of the bed lazily pretending like she just woke up.

Maan:Sweet heart tum bathroom tak khud jana pasand karo ge ye mere bahoon mein.
Geet(Quickly said):Main chale jao ge.
Maan(Teasing her and coming closer to her):Jaan kal tu tum jaldi so gaye thi aaj main soch raha tha Late night tak jagein ge (Emphasizing on bold letters).What do u think?

Geet quickly entered in bathroom and closed the door.

Geet(Turning red):Idiot!

Maan smirked.

Maan(Thinking):Tum mano ya no mano per khahein na khahein tum mujh se pyar karte ho and i will make u confess ur love.


Precap:Maneet going on the dinner.



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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it.......plz do cont soon.......
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely update! Has maan interpreted his dream wrongly? Plz cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
lool maan is on a mission to seduce his wife. me looking forward to the next part 👏👏👏👏.

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Posted: 14 years ago
very sizzling update dear......😳
plz update soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it .......Maan can take revenge.impossible.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice part---Maan is goin 2 try n make geet fall in love wiv him
Cont soon Xx... 👏 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesomeeee bt hope d dinner goes fine
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Posted: 14 years ago
First of all don't worry work does get in the way same with me college and it's work take up most of my time so don't fre education comes first and now back to the ff poor maan his stuck in a dilemma his mum or his love and I'm thinking that he must have interpreted the dream wrong but I'm sure he'll realise that soon and awe maan teasing geet and her feeling shy and embarrassed shows that she may feel something for maan anyways great update and can't wait to read more 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
short but sweet update
i don't think maan will be able to hurt her
con't soon!

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