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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice ss
Liked all parts
Geet is too hyper
She shuld atleast give a chance or calm down n thk all thgs but
Maan lost it
He is madly in love wit her
Bechare pyaar ka mara
Liked Yash's decision
Good that he had brains
Dadi's decision was also good
Lets c wats aage
Upadte soon n plz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sorryyyy for the late update.Actually i was having problem in my neck.This update is kind of boring!!!Because there is a twist in next part.I think so u guys will like the twist.U can suggest and also criticize b/c it will improve my writing ability.BTW thanxxxxx for the wonderful comments.Sorry for not replying to them but next time i will try to do.Keep on commenting.I will try to update next part soon.

Recap:Geet broke her engagement with Yash.By geet's call maan came to know that geet was Yash's fiance.

SS:Mere Yaar Ka Pyar!
Part 6

Maan(completely shocked):WHAT?????
He couldnot hear any more.He cancelled geet's call.
Maan(In his thoughts):Yeh maine kya kar diya???Woh Yash ke fiance hai.How could i do this???Woh mera best friend hai aur main iss ke mangether se pyar karne laga.............Oh.........Maine yash ko geet ka number bhi diya tha.Woh kya soch raha ho ga mere bare main??(Tears started to form in his eyes and he went in his car towards his home).Oh God yeh mere sath hi kyu hota hai.Jis se main pyar karta hoon woh mere sath nahi rahta.Pehle maa nahi rahe,Geet bhi mujh se pyar nahi karte aur Yash ..... woh bhi mujh se dor chala jaye ga.Main iss duniya main per se akela rah jao ga.

Yash was trying to contact maan for a whole week but he was not picking his calls.He went to his home but maan was not in his home.Atlast after one week,when he came to maan's home.The servant told him that he was in his room.Yash went to his room.Maan was lost in his thoughts.

Yash:Atlast....... tere ghar ka maine itne chakar laga liye hain ka koi sensible mehboob bhi nahi lagaye ga.Tu kahan tha??Na koi call na koi message.Itna busy ho gaya tha ka dost ko bhool gaya.
Maan(feeling ashamed):Nahi bas woh mera project tha iss main busy tha.
Yash:Tu tune devdas jaise shakal kyu baniye huwe hai??Main tujhe ache tara se janta hoon.Koi tu problem hai.Acha kahe tumhare without name lover ka tu koi masla nahi hai??
Maan(Couldnot stop himself):I'm sorry yash!!mujhe nahi pata tha ka iss ladke ka naam geet hai aur woh tumhare fiance hai.Iss din agar iss ke call nahi aate.Plzzz mujhe maaf kar do.Aur geet ko galat mat samijna iss ne kabhi bhi mere baat ka reply nahi kiya.She is very nice girl and very lucky to have u as her soon to be life partner.
Yash:Sorry yaar woh tore se nahi lucky balki bohat lucky hai jo mujh se shadi karne se bach gaye.
Maan(Shocked):Matlab??
Yash:Matlab yeh ka iss ne mujh se engagement thor di hai.Humare engagement tu tum yeh samijh lo arranged thi.Maine iss se kabhi pyar nahi kiya na iss ne mujh se.Maine dadi se tumhare bare main baat ke hai.Woh kha rahein thi socho ge.
Maan(Smiled):Thank u sooo muchh.U r the best of the best friend.
Yash:Chalo atlast devdas bhi hansa.Haan jee best tu hoon ga hi afterall mission mere yaar ka pyar ko is se milo jo kar raha hoon.

Maan and yash laughed.Yash prayed in his heart for maan's happiness.At Handa's,Geet entered in her home and meera came to her.

Meera:Geet woh tumhare mother aayein thi.
Geet:Kab???Woh mere liye roke bhi nahi.
Meera:Thore dar phele aaye thi.Jab inhe pata chala ka tum apne friend ke taraf gaye ho tu woh wapis chale gayein.By the way geet dadi kuch dar pehle tumhare bare main poch rahein thi
Geet:Ok main inka pas jate hoon.(While thinking)Month main aik dafa hi tu mom aate hain mujh se mile bina hi chalein gayein.

Geet went to her Dadi.Geet hugged her.

Dadi:Geet beta humne aap ko iss liye bolaya hai ka hum maan ka bare main soch rahe tha.
Geet:Dadi plzz main iss ka bare main sochna bhi nahi chahte.
Dadi:Per beta woh bohat acha ladka hai.
Geet:Plzzz dadi mujhe aap pressurize na karein.Mujhe iss ladke se shadi nahi karne hai.Mujhe woh pasand nahi hai.
Dadi:Jaise aap ke marzi beta.Hum aap ko force nahi karein ge.
Geet:Thank u dadi.U r the best! Loveee u.

At khurana Mansion,Madhavi was in anger.

Madhavi(Thinking):Bohat ho gaya.Iss Maan ka kuch tu karna pare ga.Agar mera koi beta hota tu yeh hi dolat mere pas hote.Per iss dolat per raj woh maan kar raha hai.Bas ab mujhe kuch karna ho ga......Mere pas beta nahi beti hai (She remembered her daughter from his first husband).......That's it yeh khayal mere zahan main pehle kyu nahi aaya.Mere Pari ke shadi agar maan se ho jate hai tu main isse batao ge ka dolat kaise le jate hai.Lets see Maan singh khurana tum mere Pari ka charm se kaise bach sakte ho.She is very pretty.I'm sure that u will fall in love with her in first sight.



Precap:Sunil trying to convince maan abt marriage with Pari.

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Posted: 14 years ago
Great update hate the mother... I hope geet agrees to marry maan. Update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
ohhh ... Please make Geet marry Maan and then Geet will stand up and talk to Madhvi in Madhvi's language! :D
Btw.. loved it ;)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great update
Man Maan;s step mum is such a vampire oh wait thats an insult to vampires she's such a %^&^$
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome..
Loved it
Please add me to ur PM list
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Posted: 14 years ago


nice updatee ....continuee sooonnn..
and thank for the pm😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update.Plz convince geet to marry maan.plz takecare of urself.
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi, really nice update..
love yash.. maan's mom is so mean..
waitng 4 d nxt part.. do cont soon.. thnx 4 d pm..
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved da update
do continue
it was amazing

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