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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Plz tell me that we do hav 2nd part for it

Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

I jus loved the way u showed Geet's view in the whole OS

She really loved him a lot

She left him for his happiness

I wanna c Maan's view now

Plz continue soon

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Bulbul

@Bul3

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#22

it was fabulous..very beautiful and touching..the entire situation of half love marriage and half arrange is very well thought of..I mean I loved the idea of the story a LOT..plz dont leave this at this point and complete it with a happy ending for Maan and Geet..plzzzzzzzzzz!

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ramahesh

@ramahesh

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

it is soooooooooo sad pls change the end....i am crying...gosh i am so sorry for her....and she leaves him...my heart is broken...but you wrote it really good...and described her feelings and love well...i liked it a lot...but its really really sad😭

complete with happy ending.........

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Trisha

@Tishuu

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

i had tears in my eyes - nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

im sure he has a valid reason for his actions - i knw he chose geet....plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz u have to get another part to this plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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Aatiya

@PaintedSky

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Please continue... and add me to pm list :)

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nehaahmad

@nehaahmad

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

it touched my heart. to be able to do that, to be able to set someone free, to show that kind of strength and character. i am in love with ur female protagonist. please develop her further. please let her go to america/harvard wherever and please let him come after her and pine for her just like she did for him. but also show that she has seemingly gotten over him. she has moved on. let him try and win her grace. let there be a man -a loving caring man in her life - a friend if u may. let her and this man try and teach a lesson to maan. not in a funny way, but in a way where he comes back into her life and she is unwilling to put herself through that heartache again and requests her friend to play this engagement game. put him through the agony that he has put her through. woawwwwwwww!!! good luck i look fwd to reading more.