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Posted: 14 years ago
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oooo liking ur plotline.. plz add me to pm list!xx
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ROFL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! muah muah babe!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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When Are You Gonna Update??????????
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: xxJaSsIxx

When Are You Gonna Update??????????



after 2 days defo!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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can you please pm me?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow. intersting story. plz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Heyy guys i'm back..
Here is an update and i dont like it but it was important to prolong the story
so leave your wonderful comments and enjoy!😉

Part 3:

Geet and Rosh were out for shopping. Exams ended, so the girls always celebrated.

"Yaar, Mehek hoti to apne sexy-babe wale comments deti!" said Rosh.

"Hmmm, yaar Di jab se gayi hain itni yaad aati hain mujhe! The first 2 weeks I couldn't sleep. I was used to pillow fighting with her!" Geet pouted while flicking her dupatta back.

"Yaar what about that guy…Maan uska kya mila phir?" she said while entering a shop.

"He was just a random guy koi magnetic field humme thodi na attract kare gi, tu bhi na! Anyways, teri love life kaisi jaa rahi hai?" Geet asked teasingly.

"Awesome yaar Varun is too cute I love him soo much! He sent me flowers yesterday for no reason!" she said while picking a yellow dress to try on.

"Awwwww"

"Dad I will go personally and check on the work being done for the building in front of the plaza" said Maan assuringly.

He head for the plaza.

"Yaar I love this plaza it has the best designers!" Rosh said excitedly.

"Haan, by the way tujhay pata hai woh building ek naye plaza ke liye construct ho rahi hai?" said Geet while walking.

"No how do you know?"

"Uncle ne bataya he's into news and all!"

Maan observed the work and then decided to into the famous coffee shop, he loved the coffee there, and he was familiar with the atmosphere since he was 12, so he felt at home.

"Two iced capps please, thanks!" she said while leaning on the counter.

"It will be right with you maam"

"Hi, Anji auntie, can I get one espresso please, you know the usual…"

"Only if you give me another autograph…" the middle-aged cashier smiled.

"Sure thing Anji anything for you!" he winked.

Geet heard the same voice and while she was waiting on the other side of the counter she saw him again?!

"Geet, tu aise act kar rahi hai ke jaisay wo is shop main aa hi nahi sakta!"

She was about to pick the cappuccinos up when Maan walked over.

He saw her and froze….

"Maan, her again, this should be fun! But why should I talk first….dude just say hi…you know just for your courtesy" he persuaded himself.

"Ahemm umm hi!"

She looked up and her blue eyeliner complimented her hazel eyes which now took his breath away.

"Hi……"

"You come here?"

"Well I'm here now…." She said rolling her eyes.

He smiled then…

"Geet…hurry up before it melts!" Rosh was sitting texting then stood up.

She gave Geet a "ahaa" look then just as friends would do to other friends she did the same.

"Hi, your Rohit's friend at the wedding right?"

"Yup that's me! And you are?"

"Roshini"

"Nice to meet you.."

"Come and join us if you want to…..Maan"

He looked at Geet who had a blank expression that usually indicates you are either shocked or bored and in la la land.

"If it's okay with you…."

"Sure…." said Geet looking confused.

He smirked and then smiled at her and they sat down.

"I was here to check on the work being done to our new project"

"Oh the new plaza!" said Rosh.

"Yup!"

"Hum shopping karne aaye the…"

He smiled and looked at Geet who was drinking her iced capp.

"How's Mehek and Rohit doing?" he asked her.

"Ache hain, khush hain, they just got back from the honey moon so abhi tak sirf 3 times baat hui, as I didn't wanna disturb them" she said being bubbly.

He noticed the expressions she made when she talked.

"Heyy, guys I'm soo sorry magar Geet I'll send the other car cuz Mom's like come home now! Pata nahi kyun?" Roshini said genuinely worried.

Geet pouted …

"Fine jaao and it's okay main car mangwaa leti hoon, and tell me what happened later…"

"Obviously I will, kay bye!" she hugged her.

"Bye Maan!"

"Bye…." He said as she dshed out the door.

Geet felt a strange feeling in her stomach.

"Well, that's that for her!" he said smiling sweetly.

"Yeah, well I'm done….and I still need to go pick a few dressed I ordered so…."

"I'm headed the same way…"

"Challo phir"

As they entered the shop both were lost in thought.

She went and picked her dresses and decided to try them on…

"I'll just be back!"

"Okay take your time…" he said smiling charmingly again.

"Why does he smile like that…."she wondered while trying the sari her mother ordered for her.

"Sir could you please go give this to Geet, I totally forgot" the lady who seemed to be quite frank with Geet earlier, said so.

"Sure thing"he said as he left for the change room.

The lady couldn't help but lose her train of thought after looking at him just like practically every women did after looking at him.

"Geet…where are you?" he said walking into the sitting area.

The room was a huge circular one, with trying rooms around the sides and couches in the middle. The walls were all mirrored.

He looked to see and saw a reflection of her looking at herself.

He unknowingly walked over to her….

"Maan, tum yahan?"

"Wo, main wo yeh dress the lady told me to give it to you…" he said recuperating.

"Oh thanks waise ab tum aa hi gaye ho to you can help me…." She said smiling.

"Sure thing…"

"Does this saree……"

"Look good on you….no" he said stopping her mid-way.

She looked upset.

"Don't be upset darling it looks wonderful, it's perfect" he said winking.

She stood there looking at him like he was an Martian.

"Ummm, thanks" she said not being able to digest the words he had said earlier.

They exited the shop and it was windy.

"Oh god!" she said pulling her dupatta.

"Waise where are you going to go now?"

"I'm going home" she replied still managing to keep all the shopping material in her tiny hands.

He smiled at her actions then took the bags away before she could look over.

"Tumhe yeh sab karne ki zaroorat nahi hai….I'll manage" she said while walking beside him.

"No problem….and I'll drop you"

"No Maan it's really…."

"-Geet I have no problem please stop being that formal now" he said while handing the bags to the driver and opening the door for her.

She smiled at his gesture then sat down.

"Waise tum hamesha se aise hi ho…gentleman and flirty"

"Yup that's me…aur tum hamesha se innocently pretty but bubbly type ki ho"

"Haan mujhse raha nahi jaata I need to talk if I don't I start to get bored!"

"I can see that…"

They were interrupted.

"Sir…"

"Yes…"

"The traffic is blocked due to the storm, what would you like me to do now?" the driver asked politely.

Geet looked tensed and turned to him.

"Don't worry……." he said assuring her and slightly hoping he could get just a few more minutes with her.

They waited for 15 minutes and then she couldn't take it…
"I'm calling home…Maa is probably worried"

He blinked as a sign of go ahead.

"Maa I'm stuck in traffic Rosh ko jaana tha…..hmmm……..yes maa…….i'm safe naa……don't worry…..lagta hai bohat der tak jam ho gi…………….yup…..ji mama" while she explained he was staring at her.

"She is soo different…I like her!" he thought.

"Hmm, finally Maa ne agree kar hi liya."

"Geet it's been 25 minutes now let's walk back to the plaza and we can go to the shop"

"Haan theek hai"

They were about to enter when they saw that it was closed due to an emergency.

"Ab?"

"Ab kya? Tum bolo wo kya haina mere sir main dard ho raha hai!" she said putting her hand on her forehead.

He chuckled.

"Well, Geet don't take me wrong but there is the huge hotel…..we can go there"

She looked at him confused….not sure with the idea.

"I mean traffic dekho, this place is industrialized your house is far away and mine's is too…we don't have an option. And It's not like hum ek kamre main rahain gay?"

"Fine, challo ab mera moun kya dekh rahe ho?" she walked ahead.

He followed smiling at her sudden reactions.

"Two rooms please…"

"Sir I'm sorry we are booked except for one room….as you know this is the most popular hotels of Delhi"

"Well, we will take it."

Geet looked unsure now.

"Sir ek autograph mil sakta hai kya…." The receptionist asked while raising an eyebrow.

"Why not?" he said smirking and handing her the paper.

Geet looked at them…."Wow yeh lardkiyaan bhi na….."she thought.

"Challein?"

"Haan just our luck in stupid losers ke hotel mein sirf ek karma, hard to believe eh? But time to guzarna hoga so why not" she said annoyed.

Comment and i'll update fast any guesses to kya hoga hmm?? :P
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Posted: 14 years ago
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First of all thanks for the update....

started reading it amna...will update with my comments when done...


completed reading your update.......great going..............geet ek casonava ka saat in hotel room.......it should be some funny and romantic talk between them.....
Edited by puth - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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we got some connection going girl was just thinking about this gotta do a lab report but will read this first and comment😉

Loved it!!! hum tum ek kamray mein band ho eh??!!😉can't wait!!!! love Rosh hai reminds me of LNMDJ days!!😳
Edited by desigirl_18 - 14 years ago

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