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Posted: 14 years ago
wow.....that was just awesome....reallly loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
Liked both the parts
The marriage fun was fab
Liked the jealosuy they felt seeing each other in different person's arms
Their talk nok jhok was fab
Atlast Maan purposed her
Good i thought warna they will seprated
Loved their love n romance
It was jus fab
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow amazing yaar....just brilliant
proposal was so very lovely
loved it a lot
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Posted: 14 years ago
aww no maan go get geet
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome
Superb
Dont End IT
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was amazing for a second i thought they were lost
and then he proposed aww
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Posted: 14 years ago

Epilogue:

"Maan stop it, sharam karo!!" she said slapping his hand away.

"Kaisi sharam jaaneman? Jab pyaar aur shaadi kit oh kya darna!!" he said biting her earlobe.

She looked at him annoyed.

"Mujhe aise dekhne ki zaroorat nahi hai! Apni friends ko dekho!!" he said pointing to the side where the two couples were seated.

She looked at him giving up.

"Haan toh hum kahan the?" he said sweetly pulling her closer.

She pushed him away now.

"Aur koi kaam nahi aata na bas yehi sab….har waqt ek doosre ke andar ghusse rehna!!" she said now slightly louder.

"Tum dono ko yahan pe bhi lardna zaroori hai?" Rosh said leaning forward to have a look at them.

"Haan jaise tum dono ko ek doosre se fursat nahi hai!" Maan said equally.

"Oh my god I can't believe this tum log MOVIE THEATRE ke andar bethe huwe ho movie dekho!!" said Mehek shocked.

Rohit pulled her head on his shoulder.

She snuggled closer.

"Tum kyun iske jaise chup chaap meri baahon main nahi aa sakti?" Maan said questioning Geet.

"Mujhe movie dekhni hai!" she said ignoring him.

"Oh my god hum lardke movie theatre is liye aate hain to be all romantic in a dark place and tum, your not normal!" he said turning away.

"Tumhe toh main ghar jaake theek karti hoon!! I can't believe your doing this right here" she said glaring at him.

"Tum dono chup ho jaao humme bahar nikal dain gay!" said Varun.

"Acha Varun don't be all innocent we all know what you're doing with Rosh in that corner.

Varun looked down while Rohit laughed uncontrollably.

"Atleast tum log lucky ho atleast their letting you do something Geet here has gone into touchmenot mode" Maan sad disappointed.

"Please can you guys go argue at home" said Mehek.

Before Maan could say anything someone from the back spoke.

"Tum log khud movie nahi enjoy kar rahe mujhe toh karne do!" a chubby man with glasses in his early thirties spoke hissing.

"Listen we all understand the fact that your jealous because your single and watching Dostana alone! But it's okay you'll find your match!" Maan said sarcastically while the rest covered their mouths with their sleeves holding back from howling in laughter.

The man looked like he was about to cry and just sat back into his seat.

Maan now looked at Geet kissing her cheek.

She just nodded and looked away resting her head on his shoulder.

"I win" he whispered into her ear.

"Maan kuch toh sharam karo, we have been married for 5 yrs now and have a 2 year old daughter! And your acting like a teenager in love!" she said kissing his cheek giving up.

"Kya matlab!? I'm only 31 years old okay, and your only 27!!" he said pulling her closer.

"Kya karoon tumhare upar baith jaaoon, you keep pulling me closer and closer" she said annoyed.

"This is not gunna work I now you PMSing so sweety just stay calm, we will go home and I'll give you a nice massage" he said smiling.

She smiled giving up, he always made her laugh.

He then slowly moved closer to capture her lips into his. Her head rested on his shoulder and he leaned in kissing her with such softness that she melted.

"Movie achi thi na?" Rosh asked Geet smiling.

"Yeah I loved the outfits!" Geet said.

"How much longer until Shrek is done?" Varun asked Rohit.

"Uh just about now" Rohit replied.

Just then the kids came running out.

Varun and Roshni hugged Aaryan.

Rohit and Mehek hugged Alisha while Maan kissed Arun on his cheek.

Alisha and Arun were Rohit and Mehek's twins.

"Maan uncle Sneha ghar pe Rano Dadi ke saath so rahi hai?" asked Arun cutely.

"Yup, and you can play with her when we get home" he said smiling.

At night Maan came and pulled Geet into his lap.

She pecked him smiling.

"You know Geet look how far we have come, five years of being married and 2 years of dating" he said speaking to her neck.

"I know, remember when you had come to New York with me and stayed there to complete your MBA, we always met at lunch and it was a time I'll never forget. EVER!" she said kissing his shoulder.

"I love you! Every moment spent with you is something i cherish and wait for. I love you more than you can imagine and I can't stop loving you!!" he said kissing her, and nibbling her lips.

She had tears in her eyes and hugged him. He kissed her chest his head resting on her chest.

"Acha can I go change now?" she said holding his head into her hands.

"No! I can do that for you" he said biting her shoulder.

She giggled.

She tried running away but he caught her wrist and pulled at her pallu.

"Maan!!" she said giggling.

"Ab saare fasle tod do jaaneman" he said nuzzling her neck and holding her wrists behind her back.

She arched her back and her now pulled her lip with his teasing her.

He then took her onto the bed and took her pallu into his teeth and unraveled it.

"Uff you and your new ways of seducing me everytime" she said softly panting.

"You and your new ways of moaning and reacting to my touches make me go crazy!" he said pulling her skirt down bending.

He kissed her stomach working up.

She panted her chest rising, driving him crazy.

He pulled her blouse off.

She then looked into his eyes naughtily.

"Ab tumne meri aadi izzat utar hi di hai I should get to do the same?" she said smirking.

He smirked.

After she stripped him.

He picked her up and lay her on the bed.

She pulled his hair and crushed his lips into hers while he pulled at the string on her bra.

She broke apart saying….

"I love you!!"

And pulled him back………….

After an hour her pager rang.

"YOU HAVE GOT TO BE KIDDING ME!!!" he said breaking apart.

She picked it up smirking.

"Oh no Maan emergency I have to rush!!" she said pulling the spread over her.

"Yaar the only disadvantage of marrying a doctor!!" he said covering his face with his hands.

"Pehle sochna tha na!!" she said picking her clothes out.

"Tum waapas aao na phir tumhe batata hoon!! Gin Gin ke badlaa loon ga!!" he said annoyed that she had to go.

He went and pulled his trousers on and went over to where Sneha's crib was kissing her hands and smiling at his angel.

She came over running out of the shower her hair wet.

She kissed Sneha on the forhead and kissed Maan quickly.

"When you know I loose control seeing you like this!!!! Why do come out only with a towel wrapped around!!?" he said kissing her again.

She smiled and went to change quick.

Before leaving she turned around to hear Maan whispering something to a sleeping Sneha.

"Agar meri tarhah ka koi lardka meri angel ke paas bhi aaya toh mujhe batana! Beta aise lardkon se nahi milte…" he said explaining to a 2 year old sleeping angel.

Geet laughed walking out as he furrowed his eyebrows.

"Aaj kal ke lardke bade ******* hote hain!!" he shouted behind her.

Then he got back to admiring her.

And they lived happily bickering and loving each other!!


COMMENT PLEASE!!! AS this is the END!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

Wow amazing ff loved it 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

This is the end 😭😭 I enjoyed reading every single bit and i hope u carry on writing wonderful ffs 😃
this ff is sooo amazing and perfect ending 👏👏👏
Edited by maaneetfan123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
will comment l8ter :)

heyyy
luved da ending
but u ended it soo soon :(
also with that u started a new ff which is good :)

luv harneet
Edited by Harneetluvesksg - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wat an end yaar wat an end! The theatre bit was funny haha aww and the ahem ahem interruption from pager haha

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