OS: One Life to Love (Part 2, pg 5) - Page 4

this is too good... please add me to your pm list.. thankyou😊

awesome OS yaar add me to ur pm list and send next part soon

Ooooh you did a part 2!! Yayy! :DD

Loved it. When I read the first sentence, honestly the first thing I thought was 'Crap! Has Maan just missed the train?' I got so scared! But thank God it was only Brij. Y'know, the things you've written here are a lot of my queries with what's happening in the show. Does Brij honestly not miss his sister? Does he really not care about how she's been for the past however many months? Is he not happy for her, that she's found her love and is about to get married to him? When he sees her smiling and happy does he not feel content that his little sister is happy and well? It really bugs me. But I guess you're right with what you've written. He does care. He must! Somewhere, very very very deep down LOL.

As for the rest of it. WOW! Maha-cute! Got a big fat grin to my face!

Hoping there's a part 3, and loads more after that. By the way you've ended your second update, you could potentially make this into a SS or even a FF, but it's all up to you. If you do update again, do PM me!

Brilliant!

Urvi 😊

Great story...!!! Pls do pm me the next time u update...!!!

loved it!!!

Fantastic OS!

oohhh cool thanks alotttttttt please update soon:)

great

lovely O-S!