FF A Moment Lasting a Lifetime Pt 6 Up Pg12 22/11 - Page 2

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great 1st chapter Pooja, you left me wanting more sign = sign of good writer

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Coming up Second Part...

Melbourne,6^th July 2009 8am

It was a bright morning and Maan was on way to work when something inside made him change directions and head towards the very coffee shop he had visited with Rohan yesterday .

Maan ' 'One Cappuccino 'and a blueberry muffin'..he said to the girl with the specs behind the counter ''the father wasn't around'.or he wud be the one taking the order he thought while his eyes continued to search for the object of his intrigue 'so much that he was here instead of being at work.

Once he had his order he found himself an apt seat beside which'.. was a small mirror but big enough for him to observe the service counter .Sipping the coffee he waited and waited and then finally the moment arrived when he saw her ''.she was busy organizing stuff behind the service counter and seemed oblivious to his gaze which was a good thing and as for the girl in specs besides her ..well she was oblivious as well to what he was doing '.so after gazing for what seemed like a few minutes to him he looked at his watch only to realize he was late for work , he made his way out in a hurry' looking at her one last time before he headed out.

The buzz of his cell phone made Maan realize that it was evening and it was probably time to head home , seeing Rohan's number flash he picked it up '

While talking to Rohan he made his way to the office window and started to look outside and much to his surprise he saw her 'well it wasn't so surprising since her shop was close by but still ''she was in deep conversation with Mr Singh and his daughter 'and once they were done talking Mr Singh left with his daughter while she took out her white cane /walking stick to find her way thru the crowded streets'... suddenly he ended the call with Rohan and made a dash for the spot where she was.

Panting and trying hard to catch his breath he stood at the very spot where she was 5 mins ago ''she was there but had moved quite bit down the street 'so he decided to follow her for a while '.he was successfully doing the stalkers job when she stopped to talk to someone ..and that's when he gained on her reducing the distance between them and infact overtaking her 'and he finally stopped beside a lamp post leaning onto it for some support.

He saw her finish the conversation and soon she just walked past him leaving a small smile behind on his face

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Melbourne ,9.30 pm '.6^th July

After Dinner Maan Singh Khurana was once again at his fav place in the apartment 'and even after a tiring day with all the stalking he had done he still felt energized 'infact in the last 7 months i.e since Sameera/Sam left '..today for the first time he had smiled from the heart 'and was feeling all light inside '..He continued to look outside '..it was a beautiful night 'with the moon and the stars brightening up the sky '..and the river water shimmering below '..the view outside was mesmerizing 'but he was busy staring at the steady waters '.but little did he realize that a certain emotion was creating a few ripples already in his heart

"You can close your eyes to things you don't
want to see, but you can't close your heart to
the things you don't want to feel."

xxxxx

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-Pooja

Wow Pooja, tum to bilkul chupa rustum nikli. I loved this part. Very much.

She took out her walking stick. Is this hinting whatever I am thinking it is?? And Maan smiled after ages. Cool.

I loved these lines:

"You can close your eyes to things you don't
want to see, but you can't close your heart to
the things you don't want to feel."

Beautifully said. Waiting for more. Update soon please.

Love,
Ash