Meant To Be Together by Jake - *Part 2/Page 11* - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Heyybabyydolll

awesome plot! I love how you changed up Geet's character here.

And where ever you got the idea of you being a bad writer, i disagree with it.😊😆
Do continue soon!



Thanks! 😃

Dear ones. 😆 Well, you see, writing and art is in my blood, but I turned out to be a mathematician. 🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: desigirl_18

Jake!!! so great to see you back!!! was missing ur posts, always make the forum soo lively!!😃and wow what an entry with a super duper FF!!! Loving it!! and could totally imagine it!! ur dialogues are superb!! and wow the storyline is just awesome please dooo continue whenever, i don't mind😉, but do PM!!!

~Fatima



See. Whenever is the right word. 😆 Thanks a lot, bud! Will try! 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
hey jake...you're too modest!!! This is effing awesome!! I'm lovin' the whole she as the heiress and equally to him in every way!!! I can't to read more!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Jakefication


Meant To Be Together


Twenty-four year old Adi was in a huge dilemma. Maan Singh Khuranna was returning from London today.
It is not like he was scared of Maan Singh Khuranna or anything - Ok, maybe he was, but he simply loved working for Maan Sir. Even though Adi suspected if the man ever smiled, he knew that Maan Singh Khuranna was an impartial and a conscientious man. Adi respected that about him.
He must seemed heartless to the world, but Adi knew that Maan Singh Khuranna was definitely not what he wanted people to see.
He was an enigma, a mystery. He was simply Maan Singh Khuranna.
But right now, Adi was clueless on how to announce the news to Maan Singh Khuranna. He was pacing in frustration and occasionally mutterring nonsenses, when Pinky burst into his cabin -
"Adi! You're here! Great! Chalo Pizza Khane Chalte Hain!"
Adi turned to look at his friend. She was Pinky Chedda. Khuranna Construction's receptionist. She was short and chubby. They'd known each other for three years, and all these years, Adi has never known Pinky to think about anything else, but food.
"Not today, Pinky. Not in the mood."
"Not in the mood? Lekin Kyun, Adi? Please?"
"Kyun Ke Aaj Bohut Badi Problem Hone Wali Hai."
"Problem?"
"Yes. Maan Sir is coming back today!"
Gasping, Pinky squealed with delight. "DD is coming Back?!"
Adi smiled at the word DD. Every female in the office called Maan Singh Khuranna 'DD', meaning Dhak-Dhak. There was no doubt that the aloof Maan Singh Khuranna was indeed every girl's unfulfilled fantasy.
But too bad, Maan Khuranna simply loathed women. That's one reason why India's hottest and richest man was still a bachelor. Single.
"Haan. Lekin Ek Problem Hai -"
"Problem? What Problem, Adi?" For the second time, Adi turned to look at the doorway. Standing there was Sasha, his colleague, and right next to her was Tasha, her junior side-kick. They were like Devil's twin daughters, sent to earth by Devil himself.
"DD is coming back!", announced Pinky excitedly.
"WHAT!?", asked Sasha furiously.
"Oh my! DD is coming back! So hot!", said Tasha.
"Tasha!"
"Oh. Silly me!", said Tasha meekly.
Ignoring Tasha, Sasha pointed her finger at Adi. "MK Aaj Arahey Hain Aur Tum Mujhe Ab Bata Rahey Ho! Don't you think you're supposed to come to me first and inform!"
"No, because I'm not your s-servant, Sasha! Mujhe Waisey Bhi Abhi Todhi Dair Pehley Pata Chala Hai."
"Great! Todhi Dair Pehley! Listen Adi -"
"No. You listen to me, Sasha! We don't have time to argue today. We are already in a big mess. Now, we have to figure out, Yeh Problem Maan Sir Ko Kaisey Bataein."
"Problem? Kaun Si Problem?", asked Sasha curiously.
Adi sighed and looked at the three women in front of him. "When Dev and Vicky Sir left Khuranna Constructions, their shares went on market, right?"
"Right!", they replied in unison.
"Well. Those shares have been bought."
"Bought? So?", asked Tasha in confusion.
Because Sasha was listening, she frowned. "Iska Matlab - Oh no! MK has a new PARTNER! Already!? MK himself wanted to buy those shares. He will be furious!"
Always count on Sasha to hit the mark, thought Adi.
"Haan. Toh Kya Hua? Humare DD Ki Jaga Woh Todhi Le Sakta Hai!", said Pinky.
Adi was getting more frustrated by the minute. "Pinky, Yeh Koi Cricket Match Nahin Hai and plus, this is not it. There's more!""More?", asked Tasha. "Matlab Story Abhi Baaki Hai?"
"Tasha!", said Sasha.
Ignoring them, Adi continued. "M-Maan Sir's new partner, Handa, is in A-America "
"America?", asked Sasha.
Then she got it, "Oh. My. God! Handa! You mean The Handa Corporation!
Woh MK Ka Partner Hoga? They are ... they are ... Billionaires!"
"Wow!", exclaimed Tasha. "When is he coming?", she asked excitedly.
"This is the main problem." Adi swollowed. "Not h-he - Sh-She.
She is coming tomorrow. M-Maan Singh khuranna's n-new p-p-partner is none other than the heiress of H-Handa Corporation herself ... Geet Handa."

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Hey Jake...👏 👏 👏....What a TWIST to the STORY....SUPERB WRiting...I enjoyed reading it...Do develop the story ahaed whenever u get the time...😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Jakefication



I know! 🤣

Munni, Remember I wrote an AK FF once? I wonder what happened to it. Got lost somewhere on tele-chemistry. 🤣Is that site still alive? 😲

Sick. Took couple days off. 😊


Nahin TCC ko khatam ho kur morethan a year now....Jo forums kissi ko compeite kurne bante hain, woh zyada days nahin rehte...Koi bhi kaam aapka passion hona chahiye, kissi ko let down kurne ke liye nahin kurna chahiye....



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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
oooh sounds interesting!! please pm too 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: shrezzj

oooh sounds interesting!! please pm too 😃

Yeah add me to your PM list too 😊
PS does this continue off the current track or did you make an all-new plot? 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
^All new plot. Current plot? 😆 Nish, the guy is in a hospital bed! 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: LOLAnisha

Yeah add me to your PM list too 😊
PS does this continue off the current track or did you make an all-new plot? 😊



You have no idea how much I adore you. Current plot kaise hoga? Geet in America while Maan in hospital bed? That too handling Handa empire......hahhaha you have to be the cutest I've met. I think I've told you this already a million times, haven't I?
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: dolphinUSA



You have no idea how much I adore you. Current plot kaise hoga? Geet in America while Maan in hospital bed? That too handling Handa empire......hahhaha you have to be the cutest I've met. I think I've told you this already a million times, haven't I?

Haha 😆 Dols, yup you've told me this before 😆 😆 And thank you, adore you as well 😆 🤗 Well it could be, the way I imagined it. Like five-six years down the line, Geet starting off fresh in the US and climbing the corporate ladder, Maan being out of the office for a different professional/medical reason, all of a sudden Geet is super-rich and he and Sasha and Tasha are all 😲 😲 And then they get back together after more cute-ish conference moments (since they're partners now) where they avoid each other and pretend not knowing each other...shoo shweet 😍 😍 *daydreams*
Anyways whatever...it could happen 😉

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