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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awwwwwwwwww......thanks for your support guys....Part II coming very very soon
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K Guys...her's part II



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ReCap: Dadi comes to Geets room to tualk to her......Dadi come to know that it's Geet's b'day the next day.........Dadi wants to keep a party.......Geet wants to Hint Maan about her B'day....Maan in meeting.....Geet sneezes on the phone so that Maan comes home immiditely😳 (Gosh i have to say.....love Kya Kya karwa ta hai yarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr🤣.....Simple si ladki ko nautanki karne par majboor kardiya)

Hearing Geet sneez on the phone Maan Gets restless.....

Maan (addressing the people in the meeting): ahh..Gentlmen....who....ajj meeting...........(he is not able to think about the reason.....but he is just thinking of going near Geet ASAP)

Client: Mr. Khurana..appka presentation abtak tho achha hai......age appka kya proposal hai improvement ke liye....

Maan (Still thinking deeply about Geet's health): Doctor ko Dikha na hoga..........

Just after saying this Maan realizes what he said...

Client (confused🤣): DOCTOR ko..Improvement ke liye????🤣

Maan: Who.....who..Aaaaaaaaacheeeeeeee(Maan tooo sneezes not knowing what else to do🤣🤣)......Who meri tabiyath kuch thik nahi hai.......isliye...doc..doctor ke pass jana hai🤣(Gosh he makes a cute face that time....just imagine his cute cute expressions guys...MSK expressions.......or haa..Geet is his doctor na😉...who has cured him)

just saying this Maan calls Sasha and asks her to handle the meeting...and sets back to out house to check Geet

Maan(Now driving his car): ye ladki na.......apna kayal nahi rakh sakthi...........mei uusee kuch time kaliye dur jaoona tho ye ladki intni careless hojathi hai.....(He has a very very cute anger on his face....Typical MSK Istyle anger😍 )

Finally Maan reaches outhouse...he is running shouting Geet..Geet.....looking really worried and restless.......

meanwhile Geet is in her room looking at the beautiful moon form the window .....Just than she hears Maan's voice.......and turns back near the door.....

Geet ( A little tensed): intni jaldi aagaye..hai Babaji......situation ko sambhal lijiye ga........

she runs and sleeps on the bed.....with her eyes tightly closed🤣

Maan comes in the room.....running

Maan(Looking at Geet): Geet...

he goes towards her

Maan(Now standing near Geet): Geet...tum..tum thik hoooo

Geet (slowly opening her eyes....with lot of difficulty🤣 and doing fultoo drama): Maan sir......appp yahan........apki tho important meeting thi na........

Maan (trying fully to hide the reality): who...tum..cheeki na..thoooo

Geet suddenly gets up from the bed.........

Geet: thooo........(she suddenly realizes that she is not actually well🤣) i mean..(slows down her excitement) thoooo.....iske liye...apppp yahan aaye........

Maan: Geet..tum rest karo..tumari tabiyat thik nahi hai na.........

trying to make her sleep on bed again.....they are very close😳..MAHIIII music playing form the background........... Geet keeps staring at Maan

Geet: apko kitni fikar hai na meri......(she says in a romantic voice)

Maan: Geet..ye kya sawal hai.......

Geet: tho aoko path hoga na ki kal kya hai.........(she is asking him wanting to here YES)

Maan (Bichara...how would he know): Kal....Kal kya hai........(he starts thinking)

Geet: Maan sir.......Kal ek bohoth hi special day hai......(she is hoping that Maan gets the hint)

Maan(still thinking): Special......hmmmmmmmm(Awww...he is looking DAMMM cute while thinking like this😍) oh haa...he says

Geet is thinking that thank god he is not a dhakan..🤣..he got the hints....and she is blushing

Maan: Kal tumara checkup ka din hai na.......(he cutely smiles).....mei abhi doctor se appointment leletha huu.........

Geet is totally irritated with this answer

Geet (Thinking to herself): kya socha tha..or kya huaa.....ye kitne DHAKAN hai🤣)

Geet: Nahi Nahi......Checkup ka din special hota hai kya......mera matlab hai..hota hai.....lekin.......kal kuch or special din hai (She say..hoping that he'll get the point)..

Maan is looking fully confused.........

Just than Nakul comes with a COLD juice...

Nakul: Madam..apne juice magwayatha na.........cold juice......

Hearing this Geet looks totally shocked and again gets up form the bed with a jahtka......"isko abhi aana tha" she say's looking at Nakul...

Maan looks at Nakul

Maan: ye kya...Madam ki tabiyath thik nahi...or tum cold juice laye hooo..... (He shows his typical sher type anger..MSK Istyle😍)

Nakul(expression less like always🤣): Sir......abhi kuch der pehele tho inonehi bola tha juice lane ko..........or cold juice hi magwaya tha......unee gami lagrahi thi...isliye..........

Geet: ye kya....meine..kab bulaya tumei.....

Nakul:api ne tho bola tha madam..ki apko cool juice pine ka maan karraha hai

Maan now tries to understand all things....He gives Typical MSK angry look to Geet

Maan (showing MSK Anger): Tho..tumari tabiyath thik hai...kyu....(he say's in Angry MSK Istyle😍)

Geet just gives a blunt smile and thinks "meine intne hint diye kal ke bare mei..who nahi samje.....ye sabkuch samajgaye.......


Precap: Maan meets Dadi..who gives him the Birthday news......Maan is surprised to get the news.......and thinks that he will definitely make this a special day for Geet..which she will always remember☺️



Edited by Sh_ka_su - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey such a cute ff... plz add me 2 ur pm list n pm me wen u update this ff... thnx...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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HI

NICE UPDATE .... SMART WRITING .... LOVE OUR DHAKKAN ...(MAAN) ...KEEP WRITING ... PM ME WHEN U UDPATE ... THANKS IN ADVANCE... 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i loveee the beginning so farrrr... I loved the Maine Pyaar Kiya birthday sequence in the actual movie and now I cant wait to read up more on it with Maaneet in it ... please add me to ur PM list... and continue writing with all the more creativity and love.. Keep it up..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: seema05

HI


NICE UPDATE .... SMART WRITING .... LOVE OUR DHAKKAN ...(MAAN) ...KEEP WRITING ... PM ME WHEN U UDPATE ... THANKS IN ADVANCE... 👏



Awwwww..Thanks for the appreciation dear...............thanks a lot😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: niharika_87

i loveee the beginning so farrrr... I loved the Maine Pyaar Kiya birthday sequence in the actual movie and now I cant wait to read up more on it with Maaneet in it ... please add me to ur PM list... and continue writing with all the more creativity and love.. Keep it up..



Yup that is actually a very very classic B'day celebration from my POV.....u know..Chath pe..with all candles...and beautiful table set....

You can expect a lot for this FF..trust me......

I'll definitely try and make this celebration a very very special one 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Guys..to tell u all the fact..i'm so happy that you all are liking my FF.......AWWWWWWWW..

as i said..i'll definitely make the B'day celebration a very memorable one....

But i want ur suggestions....i'm planning for a song on Maaneeth..during the b'day celebration.......so if u have any romantic..tooo too romantic song suggestion..than please do PM me.......I'll be great full for all ur advices😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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👏awesome dear plz send next part soon and add me to ur PM list😊
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Originally posted by: sona-rai

👏awesome dear plz send next part soon and add me to ur PM list😊



Thanks yar...sure i'll update you😊

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