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Can't help laughing! Geet comes to the office with 2 huge suitcases packed for their trip. Yet, she's wearing his shirt and he's back to his awesome black T!! How'd that happen..
Car breaks down? and bags? or maybe they crash and can't get bags! or they are on a plane trip and luggage lost?
Not that I'm complaining! In fact looking forward to their sizzling scene with the all time hot song..roop tera
However, there's just too many gaps and missteps nowadays. CV's have to know that we don't watch the episodes just once and move on..We watch them again and again and again and AGAIN!! Right?
We are so critical, analytical and full of Maaneet that nothing, just nothing escapes us. They just have to live up to our expectations as we are the craziest fans of all!
Too funny the way we all just devour the scenes, rip it up if it falls short at times and go crazy and enjoy when it satisfies our ogling and drooling! We don't want our favorite show with our fav actors to fall short. We want romance and the plot to be cohesive, the scenes to flow into each other seamlessly. Many times I feel like the scenes are being shot so they have stock for when actors are away. So the flow is being lost as they are not used to doing this in the Hindi serial industry. Read about shows ending, because they did not have enough material shot and ready when something happens to the stars etc.
Anyway, This is how I'd have liked today to be:
Geet feels the tug on her dupatta and closes her eyes in pain..she cannot bear to leave him but how can she stay. He was right, he deserves someone without a past like mine. She turns out reluctantly and realizes no matter how she will try, she cannot escape him. her duppata is all tangled up with his watch strap. he lifts his hand up slowly also surprised and she sees the taveez also in his hand at the same time. Geet maine kaha tha na, tum mujhse door nahi jaa paogi, kyunki main hamesha wahi rahunga, tumhare bilkul paas. He brings her close to him pulling on her duppatta , ever so close and looking deep in her eyes asks for her forgiveness one more time.
She stops him putting her fingers on his lips and says, you know me more than I know myself and main sirf tumhari hoon maan. Kal bhi, aaj bhi aur Hamesha tumhari heen rahoonge. He lets out a deep sigh and holds her tight. The cheering of the crowd startles them and they start to leave the noisy station. Maan not letting go of her hand walks to the vendor with the roses and removing a bunch of notes from his wallet says I will take all these roses. He takes one single rose out of the bunch and gives it to geet who is lost in his eyes. He remembers how he had wanted to give her that rose months back and had not been able to. Her eyes start to fill up and he shakes his head. They walk to the car and the phoolwali brings all the rest of the flowers and puts it in the back seat.
In the car, they steal glances at each other and are impatient to get home, as Maan drives fast eager to get home. He is excited and lets her know he wants to marry her without any more delay and is going to talk to Daadima tonight itself. For once Geet is lost for words and cannot believe that she is with Maan and his love just envelopes her warmly. She smiles as he talks like the dams have bust open and he can't stop himself and his happiness from showing. They reach the outhouse and Maan holding her hand leads her to the garden. He removes the ring from his pocket and kneeling down tells her, Geet you will make me the happiest man ever if I can be part of yours and our baby's life! He puts the ring on her finger yet one more time and she says it will never come of my finger now and she pulls him off his knees and he hugs her as she turns to look at the moon in the sky, witness to their eternal love and promises. His arms are around her and he hugs her close over her midriff including their baby in his embrace.
He takes her to her room, tucks her in gently and says I want you to sleep in and then you and I will go see the doctor and make sure everything is fine with you and our baby. No, not one word, remember I have to go on that business trip in a day? She looks at him questioningly, well I am not going alone as planned, you will join me. so I am going to make sure you can travel and then I can have you all to myself. But daadima says Geet? I'm going to talk to her now and you don't worry. As soon as we return, you and I will be getting married or maybe we should get married before we leave??! In the morning? he says with a twinkle in his eyes and Geet covers her face with the blanket in a hurry. He starts walking towards Daadima's room and Maan cannot believe he was talking more than Geet, in fact he hadn't let her speak at all he thinks with a big smile pasted on his face.
Hmm, Like this version??
Car breaks down? and bags? or maybe they crash and can't get bags! or they are on a plane trip and luggage lost?
Not that I'm complaining! In fact looking forward to their sizzling scene with the all time hot song..roop tera
However, there's just too many gaps and missteps nowadays. CV's have to know that we don't watch the episodes just once and move on..We watch them again and again and again and AGAIN!! Right?
We are so critical, analytical and full of Maaneet that nothing, just nothing escapes us. They just have to live up to our expectations as we are the craziest fans of all!
Too funny the way we all just devour the scenes, rip it up if it falls short at times and go crazy and enjoy when it satisfies our ogling and drooling! We don't want our favorite show with our fav actors to fall short. We want romance and the plot to be cohesive, the scenes to flow into each other seamlessly. Many times I feel like the scenes are being shot so they have stock for when actors are away. So the flow is being lost as they are not used to doing this in the Hindi serial industry. Read about shows ending, because they did not have enough material shot and ready when something happens to the stars etc.
Anyway, This is how I'd have liked today to be:
Geet feels the tug on her dupatta and closes her eyes in pain..she cannot bear to leave him but how can she stay. He was right, he deserves someone without a past like mine. She turns out reluctantly and realizes no matter how she will try, she cannot escape him. her duppata is all tangled up with his watch strap. he lifts his hand up slowly also surprised and she sees the taveez also in his hand at the same time. Geet maine kaha tha na, tum mujhse door nahi jaa paogi, kyunki main hamesha wahi rahunga, tumhare bilkul paas. He brings her close to him pulling on her duppatta , ever so close and looking deep in her eyes asks for her forgiveness one more time.
She stops him putting her fingers on his lips and says, you know me more than I know myself and main sirf tumhari hoon maan. Kal bhi, aaj bhi aur Hamesha tumhari heen rahoonge. He lets out a deep sigh and holds her tight. The cheering of the crowd startles them and they start to leave the noisy station. Maan not letting go of her hand walks to the vendor with the roses and removing a bunch of notes from his wallet says I will take all these roses. He takes one single rose out of the bunch and gives it to geet who is lost in his eyes. He remembers how he had wanted to give her that rose months back and had not been able to. Her eyes start to fill up and he shakes his head. They walk to the car and the phoolwali brings all the rest of the flowers and puts it in the back seat.
In the car, they steal glances at each other and are impatient to get home, as Maan drives fast eager to get home. He is excited and lets her know he wants to marry her without any more delay and is going to talk to Daadima tonight itself. For once Geet is lost for words and cannot believe that she is with Maan and his love just envelopes her warmly. She smiles as he talks like the dams have bust open and he can't stop himself and his happiness from showing. They reach the outhouse and Maan holding her hand leads her to the garden. He removes the ring from his pocket and kneeling down tells her, Geet you will make me the happiest man ever if I can be part of yours and our baby's life! He puts the ring on her finger yet one more time and she says it will never come of my finger now and she pulls him off his knees and he hugs her as she turns to look at the moon in the sky, witness to their eternal love and promises. His arms are around her and he hugs her close over her midriff including their baby in his embrace.
He takes her to her room, tucks her in gently and says I want you to sleep in and then you and I will go see the doctor and make sure everything is fine with you and our baby. No, not one word, remember I have to go on that business trip in a day? She looks at him questioningly, well I am not going alone as planned, you will join me. so I am going to make sure you can travel and then I can have you all to myself. But daadima says Geet? I'm going to talk to her now and you don't worry. As soon as we return, you and I will be getting married or maybe we should get married before we leave??! In the morning? he says with a twinkle in his eyes and Geet covers her face with the blanket in a hurry. He starts walking towards Daadima's room and Maan cannot believe he was talking more than Geet, in fact he hadn't let her speak at all he thinks with a big smile pasted on his face.
Hmm, Like this version??
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