os-tit for tat---part 1&2 edited

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PART-1

MAAN was sitting ALONE IN THE DARK.
ye dadi bhi na...........
she has to choose THIS DAY for having PARTY for him........their argument ended with the usual Natak
AAP HAMARI KOI BAAT NAHIN SUNTE,
HAMRE BHI KUCH AARMAN HAI.....


though he knew her well........BUT still
THERE WAS A UNHEARD PAIN ..in the last line,which pierced MAAN'S heart.
then adi called
''HAME MEETING KE LIYE PUNJ OVEARSEAS KI OFFICE JAANA PAREGA..sir,.....,
nervously continued
.''SIR I KNOW AAP BAHAR JAKAR MEETING NAHIN KARTE,BUT MR. CHOPRA KE DEAL KE LIYE ITS a MUST........
.SAIGAL'S LAND IS IN THE MIDDLE OF THE PROJECT.....WE NEED THAT.......IT WILL BE THE BIGGEST
RESIDENTIAL SOCIETY IN DELHI,HAMARA,''

maan cut him out saying

''I KNOW ADI I MADE THE DEAL REMEMBAR,TELL THEM IM COMING WITH MY BROTHER DEV...........''

the deal was done very easily.........mr.Sravan Saigal was a efficient honest guy........
they understood each other in just an hour....which was really rear for maan.....
now he was sitting in his office,excusing himself from the lunch saying he had some last min detail to sort out......

......................
its my birthday....still i m so frustrated with myself............
the whole year i can mask my pain frustration with my anger but this day always seems a like a curse to me reminding me my dark past

,he looked up not actually looking at the ceiling more like complaining silently to god..............
god was in a good mode that moment he sent his angel right away..................
two hands slip in his chest softly,a angel tongue whispered to his ear............................
why you worry so much,the whole world isn't on your shoulder you know,have faith...........i AM here with you NA,always
happy birthday...................

then a soft kiss landed on his unshaven cheek...............like sealing the deal....................
maan was lost ,memorised at what happened................the hands were slowly withdrawing now ........the time he got back HIS sense the creature was leaving the room..... he spun ed at once,pulled her towards him with all his force.......still sitting on the leading chair of the room
..OH!!!!!!!!
the creature landed on his lap....................
just then som1 lit the light ................he looked at her she was sitting eyes closed ,lips parted........her beauty was simply divine...................but her clothes were really earthy..........
she was wearing a sleeveless white top.......and a denim short skirt ,her thighs were naked touching his hands...........

let me go.......you..pervert.......

her voice wasnt so soft now.............

P.S---I KNOW THE WRITTING IS AWFULL
........I MEAN TO SAY THE FRONT.........😆
BUT I HAD SO MUCH FAN WRITTING THIS ONE.....😃😃
I WANT TO CONVERT THIS IN TO A SHORT FF--😳😳
SHOULD I CONTINUE.........😕😕😕...




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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART-2
GEET was shouting in her own thought
AAAA...................WHAT HAVE I GOT MY SELF INTO..............THAT BHARAT I WILL KILL FIRST....CHACU SECOND.......................
her cachu C.E.O of punj ovearseas was only 7 years older then he..........
they were best buddies...........AS LONG AS SHE REMEMBER HE ALWAYS CELEBRATED HIS BIRTHDAY WITH HER..........this time also he was coming to mumbai
.............BUT DADASAIB SENT HIM TO DELHI FOR SOME GODFORSAKEN REASON.............
AGAR PYESA KUA PASS NA AYEE TO KUA KOI JAANA PARTA HAI............na.....
she tried to give him a surprise now she was traooed in a stranger's lap.........

he let her go..........
.she was running for the door when maan once again got hold her wrist........she was kicking punching wildly now to get free..she was strong just no match for maan....
pinning her to the wall with her both wrists in his hold...he told her stop fighting its no use.......
she thought about shouting ,but that will be no use soundproof,it will only proof how scared she got.....
soch...kuch...soch...

she look at him terrified..........unable to think
....tell me who sent you?
what???????(what the hell he is saying)
i said who sent you......who was dare enough to play a prank on me..........tell me
his anger knew no limit now.................how can he the great msk belive that she was some divine.....ohh!he felt cheated.....
plz let me go,her eyes were full now you cant behave like this with a girl
i dont care you are a girl or not,just answer me

its a misunderstanding........its not what you think.....i was.
let me guess you thought i was som1 else............. .
yes,thats what exact...... .
save your breath........tell me what i asked or else......
or else???what?

geet was getting her fight back,eventhough he was realy angry scary...
.(greek god+angry young man)........
but her instinct told her he wont hurt her....in her own office she add to herself he wont be spared alive hah!!!!!!!!............

or else you will eat me alive!!!!!!
she adeed with a confident smile.............
he got a little impressed with her return of the sherni angel spirit........
well,thats a good idea i am sure you will be very teasty to eat

he got even closer to her face...........trying to scare her
i have no problem,with anything
besides i am the one used to kissing strangers,and you are the one who flippe out with just a kiss..........
...on a cheek that is.
.she reminded
he was speechless
,shameless girl.......besharam larki.........she is pinned to the wall,her hands are in my hold she is still smiling and passing comments.teasing ...
she was watching him when he was thinking of his next move......
in her mind
(ohh! if there was a scale on looks i would have given him 20 on 10,he look so good on those sleeveless gajni style suit) ..... ...he suddenly said in a husky voice
so you dont mind mine doing anything
absolutely anything to you

........having a evil smile😈
she knew he was trying to get the upper hand so she kept quite
i guess thats what you are hired for kissing
well,you know
she cut him
i do like to kiss good looking people but i guess beggars cant be chossers .........now

that had done it....
really!!!!!!!!
he came so close to her there was no distance between their lips....almost touching.......
those lips trembling lips was really tempting maan.....
to act

(it just a game of push and pull geet you keep your cool you win) she was telling herself....
she didnt how long she can keep this up
he was so close,too cloze she felt his breath in her face

maan suddenly come back to earth
what the hell i am doing arguing with a strange girl in someone else office............
if someone saw them in this state......in his mind
(..juthe parenge...juthe ,,aur izzad jo jayyegi wo alag
no one will listen to you.maan beta hosh mein aja)..
.... he realesed her hand saying...
...i will give you more mone............
someone spun him around and tried put punch on his face.........
his first reflex save his face the punch land on his shoulder...........
how dare you do that to geet...........
Sravan was breathing heavily,raising his hand again.........MAAN WAS STILL ON THE FLOOR.
geet and maan both stunned to see him there ,they were so lost in each other they didnt realize third person's presense......
looking sravan's raised hand maan realized what he was thinking......
(honestly i cant blame him....what the hell i will tell in my diffence...that the girl kissed me so i pinned her to the wall)
that even sounded funny to him.......
maan tu to geya.......
sravan was coming towards mann again with intend of hitting
(abb keya.....shall we will fight wwf in this office....).maan closed his eyes...seeing no way out of this situation
ohh cut it out you two!!!!!!!!!!
she came infront of maan like sheilding him..........
GEET!!!!!!!!!what the hell,he was trying to....

scare me....
SHE COMPLETE THE SENTENCE.
........relax it was just a misunderstanding....... .
maan was looking at the girl amazed........so she did know exactly what i was doing......how could she read my eyes???

oye!!!!!!!!!!what kind misuderstanding can cause WHAT I SAW .....
still not convinced sravan was boiling
the one were i kiss som1 so paranoid that he thought i was gonna kill him by lipstick poison.........
(wow!!!it coudn't be put better then this)👏
maan was getting more impreesed by the girl
what,why,when!!!!!!!!!!
Sravan's face was sight to watch
him,here,by mistake
geet answered
when did you start kissing random stranger without EVEN.......
..
uff!!!i thought he was you..ok.
...SHE CUT HIM OUT....
.its all your fault...anywayz..
mine
how the hell its my fault ???
he was sitting on your chair........
so anyone who will sit on my chair will get


ohh!!!shut up....... you dont shave that beard of yours you look like complete junglee...........so i can't differ between you and other jungless ..........
samjhe aap...
geet entered her final argument

her cachu look at them with complete disbelief......maan was standing up now....... unsure of what to do.......
oo!!the thing is.
..he tried telling
Looking at their state
shravan started laughing holding his stomach..........
uncontrolable
the whole staff was out side wondering...........but they can watch but cant hear anything...thank god
geet starting to feel embarrassed now of everything shouted.........
dont you have something else to do then watching us or we have so many watchman in this office......
and you..... pointing at Sravan... i dont see anything funny in this........
the joke is.......
dusro ke liye gadda khodne wale aksar khudhi........
he couldn't complete started laughing....
i wasnt digging any gadda,mein to sref apko birthday wish deneki koyshish.........aur aap
you were trying to give me a heartattack.......like always
remembar you gifted me a snake previous year..and a
what happened?????????
(saved by mr chopra.........)
dev,mr.chopra,her daughter pari.........rohan was there standing...........they got back from there launch........
nothing..........in his mind(. aaj pehli baar jaaise ko taaisa mila..........tit for tat you know..........)

lets ressume meeting........
atlast maan got his tounge back....
are you sure mr.khurana......... .sravan asked modestly.....you know i am......
its okay,i understand.......lets finish this........
as quickly
as possible................

next part :after math of the collision

Edited by PIYA12KA4 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice start i will b waiting for d next update.......looks interesting.......

hey i was waiting for d other story...............whn r u going to update??????
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice i am waiting for other part..
part1 was cute
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Originally posted by: maanmeet1

nice start i will b waiting for d next update.......looks interesting.......

hey i was waiting for d other story...............whn r u going to update??????


hopefully like in 1-1/2 hour or maybe more.......😃..will sart writting...now ...😳............


Edited by PIYA12KA4 - 14 years ago
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was funny and amazing...continue soon...waiting for the next part
Edited by sonnal_17 - 14 years ago
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wow......2nd part was coooooooooooooool.............loved it........somehow i always love maan-geet close and fighting a lil.......m big fan of dis scene........thnx for recreating it.........
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Posted: 14 years ago
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This is now in the Media Centre.😊

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Originally posted by: maanmeet1

wow......2nd part was coooooooooooooool.............loved it........somehow i always love maan-geet close and fighting a lil.......m big fan of dis scene........thnx for recreating it.........


thank you 😳
i love when they fight head on too😊.......miss those scene in reel life😭

😳😳
Edited by PIYA12KA4 - 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sonnal_17

was funny and amazing...continue soon...waiting for the next part


thanx.........
.i am glad you like it 😃
i realy had a lot of fun writting this os😆
not sure about the next part though....... 😕

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