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Posted: 14 years ago

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Maan grovelling bhi style se kartha hai.. But I loved her response!! She puked on him !! 😆😆😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

hey.....it is really good...

me loved it

keep wriiting 👏👏👏👏

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Posted: 14 years ago

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thankkkk you guys for loving it....😳

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Pickachu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Interestingggg os.
Plzz pm me next time.

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LVraaz alvi

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Posted: 14 years ago

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last part is specialllyyy dedicatesss to all Maneetsss mahi veeee mahiiii gang...idiotss zoobi doobi~ 500++ silent readerss... not baddd!! 🤣

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LVraaz alvi

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|||~. .❤️. .. Last Part .. .❤️. ~|||

MAAN: Geet'Are you alright?(he said,sitting down beside Geet ,handing

her a glass of plain water and he runs a finger gently down her face

and Geet flinch..

GEET: Nahii..(she said,rubbing her cheek) Since you ask,I'm not

alright' Kyuu Maan..Kyuu?? Why can't you just leave me alone !!?

(her voice starts to wobble) It's just been' awful!Today were

supposed to be my day' Aur tum.. Why did you come ?? (she cry

frustratedly)

For a while they sit in silence' A bird is wheeling round and round overhead, and in the distance they can hear the band playing 'Bin Tere' (IHLS)' There's a part of Geet that wants to sit there, making small talk for as long as they can' But another part of her is thinking, what's the point of putting it off any longer?,There's only one thing she wants to know' Geet feel a spasm of nerves in her stomach, but somehow force herself to take a deep breath and turn to him....

GEET : What do you know about love?? What love means to you?? (her voice

is suddenly serious) Why me?? Why you chose me?? (her voice is

suddenly serious)

They staring at each other for a long time without speaking'

~The Famous MAHII VE MAHIII play along the way as sound B/G~

MAAN: (sighed, in husky voice) People who love each other end up reuniting

(he said at last)..and no matter how far apart they are, they will

reunite in the end' Love is something that returns' (his dark eyes

search Geet's face)

Suddenly, Geet feels her face flaming red, she was speechless,out of wordss... She look at him in surprise at the same time feeling ridicolously shy' Maan reaching out a hand to pull Geet to her feet... As he pull her up, she feels a slight swooping in her stomach'He smells nice too' Some expensive aftershave which Geet don't recognize' For a moment, neither of them says anything' Then, he takes both of her hands and squeezes them tight and continue saying, ...

MAAN: Perhaps he may have loved her more than I did... However, this does

not mean that I loved her any less".... Geet'. I loved you to death, I

still love you to death and I'll continue loving you to death, until we

meet again... Leaving you for 3 months was the biggest mistake of my

life but at the same time make me realized that my life is incomplete,

full of emptiness without you, Geet' (his eyes expression are full of

regrets and guilty) I'm already used to you , Geet'..

For a moment Geet too taken aback to speak, unable to speak' She blush furiously and had a little tears..It's as though something heavy is slowly lifting from her' She is not sure what to think or feels'

GEET : Geet'(she took a deep breath).... But what life will you have with

me??

For a while longer they're both silent.... Maan reaches for Geet's hand, she let him take it... Maan gives Geet a long look and Geet stare back helplessly....

MAAN : We will creates new memories, Geet'. Life has memories and there is no

life without you,Geet' We will not let our past harm and jeopardize

our present and future live again..(in deep voice) Geet'No matter

how our tomorrow is, we will make it beautiful together (he cupped her

face lovingly) But if you are not with me then' I have no today or tomorrow

(he said after paused,had little tears in his eyes) ' So Will you give me my

tomorrow?? .....

Geet look at Maan for a few silent moments, feeling rather cold, it almost hurts.. Geet doesn't know what to do or what to think at that moment' By sending Maan away from her life would be the right thing to do she thoughts' But Geet feels bad at the same time, as she doesn't want Maan to leave either' Suddenly they saw lightening and hears a thunder' After few minutes later, it started to rain and Geet tried to run away inside but Maan held her and made his grip tighter on her' Maan's fingers on her waist were making Geet shiver more than the cold rain' Geet was looking even more beautiful with raindrops covering her face and her wet hair he thought' Maan gazing at Geet with his an instense eyes expression, and Geet stares back at him nervously and feel her heart begin to pound' Geet throat grew dry and she swallowed hard' The air crackled with electricity, and Maan's dark brown gaze locked with hers'

A slow, sexy grin eased up the corner of Maan's mouth, and for a second Geet wondered if she'd be able to handle this temptation and desire' The noise of thunder and lightining faded and time stood still'Maan moved closer, so close Geet could feel the warmth of his body and inhale the spicy scent of his cologne' They were face-to-face, his mouth a mere heartbeat away' Geet sees Maan had tears of pain in his eyes' As if he's trying to say something to her through his eyes expression' Geet just cant afford to be weak in front of Maan... She doesn't want Maan to see her weakness but somehow Maan's tears make her even more helpless and restless'...

MAAN: (in deep voice) Bolo naa Geet' ( he said at last) Will you give my

tomorrow??

An ache of wanting wrapped itself around Geet, surprising her with its intensity' Maan breathed her name' Geet paused and blinked, shaking her head slightly as if to clear it' Her eyes took on a distant look, and when she moved back, Maan knew he had lost her' His heart fluttered like a trapped butterfly' There's shocked awkward silence' Maan stare helplessly at Geet, feeling his face turn slightly red' For a moment, neither of them says anything' Then Geet says calmly, ......

GEET: I don't want to be hurt anymore' Besides, we're engaged because of

a contract.. It was a wrong start... (long paused) Let's just end it

here... Let's just end it... I want it to be over' (tears start rolling

down her cheeks again)...

Slowly Maan walks towards Geet, until he's standing just in front of her' Geet can just smell the scent of his aftershave, and hear the crisp cotton rustle of his shirt as he moves' Geet whole body's prickling with anticipation' He stops, and there's a sharp, waiting silence' Geet heart's thudding in her chest, her hands are twisted in a nervous knot' She don't dare look at him for a second' But when she looks up, meet Maan's eyes, and something fearful starts to pound within her'

GEET : I don't know, Maan'(she said at last) Everything happens so

quickly'I never stopped loving you ' (she said after long paused)

I'm just scarred' (she said in crying tone)....

MAAN: Of what, Geet?? (confused)...

GEET: Of loosing you' I can't imagine myself waking up everyday

without seeing you again' (crying even more while saying this)...

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LVraaz alvi

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Geet still love Maan even after what he did, he said to her during the whole truth confessions … Neither of them was sure about their feelings… Geet just closed her eyes, she just too scared to see what's coming and she could feel Maan's face coming closer with each breath… He kissed Geet tears, wiping it off with his soft lips and slowly whispered in her ear... Maan says in a deep husky voice that sent shiver up her spine,.....

MAAN: I'm not going anywhere..Kabhi nahii, Geet.. Maan needs you… Haa,

I need you Geet...

GEET: Nahi, Maan.. Everything has changed… I would never be able to give you

what you called life…happiness… I'm not pure anymore…I'm not good

enough for you… Aur...rr.... (stammered)...

Maan scooted closer to Geet.... His hand found her chin, and he tilted her head so that she would meet his innocent, childish dark brown eyes...

MAAN: (whisper tone) Chupp!....Bilkul chupp....(running his finger over her lips)

This is not the thruth, Geet…....

Geet felt her face turn pink from nervousness.... Her face always changed color when she was nervous, embarrassed, or feeling overly shy.... Her cheeks made it hard for her emotions to be kept a secret....

GEET: (moving away from Maan) Then what is the thruth??...

Sach kya hai,Maan?? ....(her voice raise higher than before)

MAAN: (in soft tone) Sach yehi hai, that I Love you and Destiny

has brought us to be together!!... Sach yehi hai…(he paused) Maan's

life is Geet aur …… I do not know when I fell in love with you, God

has given you in the form of a gift to me... Our lives are united and it

is my promise in every janam Maan will be only Geet's… (Maan

offers Geet his hand and she puts hers in it and he continues says)…

Will you give your life to me, your sorrows and happiness to me??

Will you give me a chance to be a father to our kids and grows

older together?? (he said after a paused)... Bolo na Geet…. ??

~Tere sang ishq taari hai,

Tere sang ik khumari hai,

Tere sang chain bhi mujhko,
Tere sang bekraari hai....
Tere sang ishq taari hai,

Tere sang ik khumari hai,

Tere sang chain bhi mujhko,
Tere sang bekraari hai.... ~

Geet moved closer and kissed away Maan's tears… Their faces were really close and their noses were almost touching and Maan could feel the smell of Geet's hair… She hugged Maan tigtly to let him know how much she loves him too and will never let him go anymore… Soon as she realized it, Geet quickly broke the hug and moved back, there's an awkward silent… Geet feels sick with nerves as she looks up and meeting with Maan's gaze.. But at the same time she was mesmerize, just one look at him gives her chill.. Geet couldn't explain it or fight it with this burning desire inside her…

~Tere bin jee nahi lagda,

Tere bin jee nahi sakda,

Tujhpe hai haare maine vaare do jahan,

kurbaan, meharbaan, ke main toh kurbaan,

Sun le zara, tera kurbaan…~

Reaching out, Maan touched a single fingertip to Geet's bare shoulder, then slowly dragged it down Geet's arm… Goose bumps beaded her body, completely at odds with the inferno his feather soft touch ignited… Capturing her hand in his, Maan turned it over and placed a kiss in her palm… Maan's hands slipped down to the small of her back and pulled her closer… Geet's heart thumped hard in her chest as her body came vibrantly alive… And they shares their first ultimate kissed with so much loves, passions ….

~Mahii...Ho ho hoo hooo...

Mahii x3O hooo ho hoo x2...Mahiii ve mahii...

Mahi ve..Mahiii...Mahiii~

|||~. .❤️. ..Maneet Luv MessageSss.. .❤️. ~|||

[I].. GEET: Some love have good endings.. Some love didn't…

MAAN: Aur some love has been decided by fate ,destiny... Like hum..

GEET: Never finds love…Lets love finds you... I believe that God has

created a partner for each one of us to shares all our past,

present and future...

MAAN: But only time will tell when it happens...

GEET: Aur yeh Hamari pyar ki kahani..

MAAN: Geet aur Maan pyar ki Kahani~..

|||~. .❤️. ..This is just the new beginning of ... till then,

don't say alvida, phir milenge, chalte chalte.. ..❤️. ~|||

p/s: This part is specially written for all my pyariiiss idiotzz zoobi doobi ganggg...!! hope i managed to send yu guys to mahiii vee mahiness land and plz keep supporting by hit the Like button also feel free to commentsss as it will give me more excitement to write manyyy moreee in the futuree...☺️🤣
And not to forget to all my silent readers...It would be soo cool if you guys can break the silent sometime by showing yourself through your post.. would really loves to know you guyss who have been appreciating my FF!! 😳 😆 😛 Anywayyy have funnnnnnzzz!!😍🤪

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