OS - Out comes the Truth...part 2 page 3 - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
#21
I loveeeeeeeeee ur os.
Veryyyy well written.
Loveee the song at the end.
Waiting for more maneet os.
Thanxx for the pm.


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Posted: 15 years ago
#22
OMG thats Awesome
Loved it
Each and every line is so well written and so touching
Thats a Lovely ending
Thanq so much for the PM
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23
Thanks pickachu and .sireesha.. Hope it lived up to your expectations 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24
awesome update really made me cry.👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25
touchy
you portray emotions beautifully
loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26
Thanks vinithaa, naddiya26 and smiliey.....really appreciate your comments 😊
Edited by dolphinUSA - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27
Thanks jennifer and deniac. 😊

It was pure pleasure continuing for you guys. Thanks for urging me to complete this.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Beautiful ! i really do hope Man's response is like this.......when the truth is out..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
Thanks Dhara_s

@ Chaudhrytm - I so hope he takes it positively. I mean I shudder with the thought of him leaving Geet. She will be shattered. All this while I thought Maan is sensitive inside whereas Geet is stronger of the two but I feel when it comes to her past, Geet is VERY vulnerable.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
BEAUTIFUL!!!
Do write more!!!
n plzzzzz pm me wenever u write

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