Invisible Bonds-Short Story(Complete)

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Opti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: iqbals4ever
speechless! the storyline is brilliant can't wait to read more!👏

Thanks. Have posted the next part on the first page itself.

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Opti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: NoorFatima
wow opti it was really nice
can u PM the next parts?

Will be posting the next two parts tomorrow. Will let you know when I do.

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Opti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: yasu09
hey,
this is absolutely marvellous.....

can't wait for the next part......

I don't know if you will feel the same way when you read the next part which will be posted tomorrow.

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Sonali92

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

update soon yar.... i can't wait....it's a cute story

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smiliey

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

hey opti, i luv ur sthort stories.. i lluved ur 'strangers'..pls add me to ur pm list n let me know when u update...

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Opti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: sonnal_17
update soon yar.... i can't wait....it's a cute story

Thanks Sonnal.Well, the cute parts are over. The next part is not going to be pretty. I think it is better you wait for a day and relish this cuteness before you get to the next part.

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Opti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: smiliey
hey opti, i luv ur sthort stories.. i lluved ur 'strangers'..pls add me to ur pm list n let me know when u update...

Thanks Smiliey. Will let you know when I update tomorrow.

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hapinezz13

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Oti.....I think u shud convert all ur fics to Maaneet ones!!! They r lovely......n as I don't konw who Michi are.....I wud love to read Maaneet versions!!!

Oh.....this is so interesting.....the moment I read the last line of part 2....I knew good days were over.....but I know its gonna be a happy ending....so can't wait 4 ur update!!

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sweet cherry

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

wooooooooooooow jst read da three update

cant wait for da nxt part

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon

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Opti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: hapinezz13
Oti.....I think u shud convert all ur fics to Maaneet ones!!! They r lovely......n as I don't konw who Michi are.....I wud love to read Maaneet versions!!!

Oh.....this is so interesting.....the moment I read the last line of part 2....I knew good days were over.....but I know its gonna be a happy ending....so can't wait 4 ur update!!

Thanks Hapinezz. Michi are Milind and Prachi of Kayamath. Don't know about converting all my Michi fics. A couple of them run into several parts and involve quite a few characters, not all being relevant for Maaneet. Depending on the reception here, maybe I'll think of converting the short stories (there are a couple of them).

Yes, happy days may temporarily be over for my Maaneet here but I don't believe in sad endings. I don't know how you gals will take it at the end though.