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sana

@Sananya09

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#31

*Phew* Im so glad you thought of the last lines and didn't make this tragic cause i just read a tragic one shot of yours 5 minutes ago 😆

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Tressa

@Tressa

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#32

hey jaz... awesome ya... Loved it... Thanks for not making it tragic else I wud reallly hit u wid dandas... wudnt spare u at any cost..

but no... u hve made my day... please continue writing... love ur os..

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queen_ali

@queen_ali

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#33

thank god u united them in the end, i couldnt eve read that letter

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sweet cherry

@sweet cherry

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#34

wooooow that was awesome

it was amazing

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-Urvi-

@-Urvi-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#35

That was heart-breaking, yet so beautiful, and to such an extent that it almost got tears to my eyes! Thank you!!

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#36

Well the OS was senti but wit happy ending Maan was stubborn in knwing the truth frm her but all went ulta she hurted him but was she hurted herself more than him

Maan culdnt make that geet was telling lie how culd he yaar

He jnew Geet so well but it looks lik he trusted his ears more than her feelings n wat her eyes said

Jus loved the way Geet let out her emotions in frnt of him wen she faced the fear of loosing him

Loved it

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Soni

@soni-zee

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#37

Just love ur OS Jaz🤗, Geet split out that she cant leave without him😍, sometimes this kind of situation bring us to know that the person with whom you have relation whether is good or bad when something like this happen it shakes you a lot, it gives lots of pain and make think of yourself what kind of talk did you do, what have you done.... kya pata Kal Ho Na Ho😊
😊

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ruchi

@macho_muffin

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#38

TWIN!!!

yayyyyyyyyyy....finally they are united and its a happy ending!!!😃....i guess i might not need my bulldozer after all but someone still owes me more stories!!😉....pretty pweez?...plus, since i m sick, due to the twin contract you are bound to cheer me up with more and more OSs😆....ya i think a million might do it haha....but on a serious note, i lovedd this one!!!...my fav parts were Geet's kaise samjhaaon monologue and omg the last paragraph was killing!!!....i swear every story of yours always manages to give us all dhak dhaks!!😳....and i will just comment more on your next shot cuz i can't wait to read it!!😉

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flowergirl_O

@flowergirl_O

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#39

OMG fuppi...i can't beleive i'm commenting so late...i don't know if you'll even read this comment...there are so many things i have to say...first of all i love how your 4 oneshots are based on really nice songs...i always listen to the song while reading...the ending of all 4 even if some were tragic were good because the very last lines were like the title of the song...i already told you what i thought about it but i'll still put it just incase you don't remember...the order of the oneshots i like were 1. truly...madly...deeply 2.o re piya 3. bleeding love 4.tere liyeh...i still can'r get over my top 2 favorite...eventhought its been a while i still enjoy it the same as i did the first time i read it...as i already told you i loved this one but i agree with you that something about it just made it not the best...maybe the middle fo the os...i'm not sure...but when i read maan got into an accident i thought it was going to end with him being dead but i was so happy it was a happy ending...now i can't wati to read your fanfic...your new os...and the other story

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Sarita

@AnonMSK

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#40

In case u r writing a painful ending, plz mention it at d start. Although this one had a happy ending.. Bt i guess i read one of urs sad ending 2:-( loved dis os:-)

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