Chicken soup for cynical soul (Upd:Page #11,07Dec) - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
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I totally luved it. Couldn't stop laughing though. Geet is so innocent and cute.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62

loved all four shots....

from the 2nd shot onwards i was 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 God bless the man or woman who invented google 🤣🤣🤣🤣 i particularly like Geet in this fic....
love her dialogues 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@dreaminvincible: Thank you. You know life kinda gets in way and work doesn't help much to tone the day down. :-) Am here for a while and till am here, I will write. Oh, and there is no continuation for this one. What happens in spa stays in spa. :D

@blueflames: As always, you are very kind. Thanks a bunch :-)

@samijan: Thank you :-) New OS soon!

@Lady D: Yeah, ain't he cool gal? :D I like him here too because he is yet another guy and not a guy with a superhero costume underneath. Geet, well, Geet is naive to an extent. Or she is too shrewed to make Maan embarassed.

@nikipuki - Thank you very much! Indeed? :-) Glad you liked this one :-)

@Sur: Actually no irritation. I have way too much of inspiration for office related blunders. So this was one which I could write without getting myself banned permanently or scarring poor girls :D

@Nanthini: Yep. That she is!! :-) Thanks a lot for dropping by.

@Yasu: Thanks a lot girl! :D You read all four of them? Well they weren't very long, was it? Yeah, Geet is something else; self assured and naive at the same time. Deadly combination, is it not? :-)

Thanks to everyone who stopped by to read it (and liked it, in some cases :D)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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I have a lot to say....but i'l put it in one....

WOW!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
Innocent and self assured paradoxically
a putty in her master's hand ironically

Google is her best mate
But her master holds her fate

is she too obtuse to see
or too wise to be trapped by thee

a disaster area that runs havoc with him
blown away to smithereens on her whim

a cat and mouse game ensues
sometimes making us forget who pursues

what a fabulous repertoire you have created
a love story more unique you have narrated

enamored with your humor and wit
has made follower of this twit

love it Sookie..

long time...but then even i am kinda out of the circuit...

keep on bringing them...love to read them...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ Sookie: Reeeeeeeaaaaaaaally long... so please be warned and be prepared for a rather rambling post 😆😆.. instead of a few lines on every story, i am just writing down 4 episodes worth of emotions 😉
So... i happened to come across this post by sheer chance... was a li'l surprised at the 'format', didnt know whether it was an FF or a 'virtual den' for your gang...
wasn't too sure what your 'experimental' style of writing was...
was a little confused about the link with the title of the post....
and was SPECIALLY confused 😕😕 till about 3/4th of the first chapter.... so where was this going? i mean, had you started in the middle, or was there an earlier post i had missed?
Hmmmm.... i'm sure you must be wondering where this is going...😆😆
But then... i stuck it out... And now.... i am hooked 😆😆
Dont know how to explain it to you...but let me try... so here goes, 6 things i loved:
1. I LOVED your style of writing... and i understood the link to the title... 😳... unlike other FFs, these were heartwarming little episodes, complete in their seeming nothingness... and while the next one is a step forward, you can just be in the current one and enjoy yourself... pretty much like a hot chocolate and a 'one-story-at-a-time', the way it is in the original 'chicken soup' series itself
2. I LOVED the fact that you didnt spend time setting up the characters, the situations again, knowing fully well that like the Harry Potter or any ongoing series, these have evolved into an independent eco-system which ALL of us are very well-versed with.
Instead you focused on the part all of us fell in love with... or at least i did... but that is my third point...
3. I LOVED the fact that you focused on the BEST aspect of the Maaneet relationship - that of the funny, cute, intense moments between a reluctant philosopher cum guide and his naive yet eager pupil who has a mind of her own...
where he is torn between his natural abrasive self, his better side which wants to help her and a third wicked side which seems to enjoy her discomfiture, in the process often ending up at the receiving end himself as she unwittingly makes him uncomfortable...
4. I LOVED the fact that you kept Maaneet such 'flesh & blood' & consistent characters with their natural quirks... and that their reactions when placed in different situations were completely in keeping with their characters
5. I LOVED the fact that you gave us simple, day-to-day yet endearing Maaneet moments, pretty much like sitcoms internationally... so their life progresses like our own, learning and evolving like ours.. loved the whole 'google-bad word-denied google', 'spa-new concept' episodes... could feel Maaneet learning, growing and adjusting to newer ideas together... and with us.
6. In all, I LOVED the fact that you filled the gaps (which i have felt of late) that at times the CVs left in terms of small instances about Maaneet's natural interactions (which people popularly call their nok-jhok); gave more time for the natural progression of the relationship; and gave us back what made Geet imminently watchable and enjoyable at the end of a long day....
So (phew!!!!), have completely emptied out my feelings on the same 😆😆... PLEEEEEZ do pm me when you post the next episode....
And....
Thank you 👏👏
PS: Again... reallly sorrry for the horribly long post....
Edited by deejayaqueel - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
I realy likd ur transduce n transduction, was laughin n gigglin all d while tat was realy very funny.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
Rush absolutely brilliant verse from you =))
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69

@jazzerette: Thank you so much!

@Vrush: Nicely done Vrush. And many thanks for your words and comment. :-)

@deejayqueel: Man!!! I really don't know how to respond to this one!!

This thread will have one shots where most stories will be set in office environment. Also, humor is going to be element I will be experimenting on. I have recently started writing humor and mostly with Maan-Geet fandom only.
Inspiration comes from my own work environment and useless discussions that I generally get into.

Don't worry about length of comments. I love reading long comments. It kinda makes me feel nice and wanted :-) Sure, I will PM you when I update next. Till then you can read other stuff from me. (There is a link in my signature which might give you an idea.)

Nah, I still don't understand the concept of den. :-)

@chubzy - Thank you very much. :-) Glad you found it funny :-)

@Bri: Thanks mucho :D

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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
it was good! lol...nobody can be as naive as Geet 😆

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