#*Devil's Den#* Ateet ki Dastak [INDEX Pg 1] - Page 29

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: rdfan

@All- My take today ....hope it does justice 😳

Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't mean they don't love you with all they have

It's tearin' up my heart when I'm with you
And when we are apart I feel it too
And no matter what I do I feel the pain
With or without you

A rose without thorns is like love without heartbreak; it doesn't make sense.

Ok maan trying to get the message to geet thru Pari while Pari trying to assess the situation '.and the Lipstick mark ''.which geet see's and tries to tell Maan abt it but MSK being MSK ''just shuts her up

Bebas hai insaan apni kismat ke aage,
Bebas hai sapne haqiqat ke aage,
Koi ruki huwi dhadkan se puche ,
Kitna tadapta hai dil mohabbat ke aage..

He gives Geet the shock of the day by saying that last night and its happenings don't matter as he was drunk '..The pain of rejection quite evident '.and as for Geet she was confused with his answer

Dev telling Maan about the lipstick mark 'now I remember he was the one who first asked Maan about any new developments and that's when Maan remembered Geet ''.so I am now wondering will Dev always make Maan realize what Geet means to him

There are times when I cant decide whether to see you or not, I want to see you because I miss you but there are times when I dont want to see you because every time I do, the fact that you dont see me the way that I see you hurts me even more ...

Ok Maan decides avoiding and staying clear is the best policy ''.but how ever much u try to move apart what can u do when that someone stays In yr heart !!!!

Ok now over to Pari and Geet '.like I said before Geet is a technically weak batsman and Pari the otherwise un assuming bowler looks like Wasim Akram on prowl ''.and with her little game she managed to showcase Geet's lack of defense 'ultimately she claimed her wicket as well

Dadi was like the umpire reminding Maan the rules of the game '.and Maan was like the worried skipper

You pulled the sunshine out of my day, Now all I'm left with is skies covered in gray.

The last bit was beautiful '..his despair and loss of faith in happiness '..and that for every time he smiles he has to pay back in tears ''.his thing with the bike fall '.and she saying that u cant always know where a particular way is headed ''.and them coming face to face

Love is so very special
Yet can make you feel so lost
It can arrive just like the springtime
And melt away like morning frost

You must find ways to nurture
Always grow your love with care
Never ever take for granted
The love that you both share

Mistakes are bound to happen
You may hurt each other's heart
Yet don't give up to easily
It will tear your love apart

Love resembles a bright flame
That lights a dark starry night
Never ever let this flame burn down
Rekindle with all your might

Take a moment every day
Look deep into each other's eyes
Never hesitate to show affection
Small gestures will keep a love alive

Talk openly about your feelings
Take time to show that you care
Treasure each and every moment
Because to find true love is rare

Precap: Dekho ruth ke kis raste wo jaate hain 'saare raste wapas mere dil ko aate hain!!!!

P.S- Dev- TNT - New movie has been launched with them as leads titled Mujhe Meri Biiwi Se Bachao



hey i dn't knw ur name buh dis is th best i hv read so far..hatts off so well expressed!!

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti06

@Adits:Mindblowing analysis with those emoticons which makes the reading all the more special😳...I m happy Pari is donig finally what she is suppose to do😆..but still I find her character a bit OTT..I mean one day she is all dreamyyy ...next day she is acting a bit sensible..next day she becomes a cupid doctor😕😆...if she is planted by Dadi..her actions r justified..but if she is just a dreamyy girl,then I will say I could never understand her character😕😆...



thanx jyots😊

true.....i too thin OTT...bt nw m mre lk...if shez doin her job well...like cupid n all......toh i can kinda ignore dt OTT part.....😆

n hw abt dat aakasshwani......thou i loved d entire store room part.....lk cycle n photo frame .....👏

Edited by adits7 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Pooja love your take! 👏 Nicely written, i love how you weaved in the lyrics and the poems..just one problem..i'm totally clueless when it comes to cricket..so that reference to cricket had me thinking hard...😆..Kidding..LOVED IT!
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Posted: 15 years ago

@Adit............what we need pages to express.....u do it wit ur emotis... 👏👏👏👏👏 excellent stuff...n i agree wit Nihu...that 'Samay' one was ..............................CLASSY ..me on the floor..🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Superb..n hey...i knw..Geet just meant that..'Nahi chahiye azadi..'
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Posted: 15 years ago
@All........oh ok...me useless DEVIL...gotta make a move now..... U guys hv fun........CON-analysing.....🤗
Gud nite..n sweet dreams...to all...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Armu4eva

@Adit............what we need pages to express.....u do it wit ur emotis... 👏 excellent stuff...n i agree wit Nihu...that 'Samay' one was ..............................CLASSY ..me on the floor..🤣

Superb..n hey...i knw..Geet just meant that..'Nahi chahiye azadi..'



glad u lkd it.😊.......i ws in two minds whethr 2 write dat akkashwani thing or nt..😆....coz i lkd d part n out of d box kinda store room scene.....👏

bt dt voice modulation of maan....dunno jus reminded me of main samay hunn....🤣


yeah nahi chahiye azzadi....hum aapke gulaam banke khush hai.....thou she is nt gulam actually rulin maan's heart....😳

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Posted: 15 years ago
Anjana: So you finally getting back in form ... 😊 Loved your take as always I did 😊 Btw, my prize, stop eying my Devil's Crown 😆😆😆

Enjoy Tanu: Good Night and Sweet Dreams 🤗🤗🤗

Even, I'll call it a day here ... Enjoy Everyone 🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: adits7



thanx jyots😊

true.....i too thin OTT...bt nw m mre lk...if shez doin her job well...like cupid n all......toh i can kinda ignore dt OTT part.....😆

n hw abt dat aakasshwani......thou i loved d entire store room part.....lk cycle n photo frame .....👏

Yup as long as she is playing a cupid ..even I don't hv any problem😆
Your Aakashwani wala emoticon had me in splits🤣🤣🤣🤣...Even I loved the store room part..very touching nad symbolicEmbarrassed
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Posted: 15 years ago
guyz 1 mre thing i forgot 2 mention in dt analysis.........


d photo frame part ..camera wrk......👏

geet ws actually witnessin 2 different Maans...1 d Maan who hd dat smile on his face....n other MSK.....in dt reflection.....

i loved hw she ws tryin 2 touch n kinda caresses his face...as in symphathy..love..attachment (CONection )



Edited by adits7 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
@anj:Not loving Mr. Dreammy or DhakDhak, but loving Dus Sir Wala Ravaan and understanding Y he is a beast. Its not about hugging the Bubbly Geet, but embrancing the lost child-woman. agar u would have been somewher near na..i would have hugged u for these lines..really out of the world.. Ok now hello all..sorry people me anj fan..so..U dont know how much i love the way she writes and then she gives me names over that,..wow..but i love that too..

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