FF 'TheUnWanted Feeling' UnChaaha Ahsas Updtd Pg 5 - Page 3

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Sash your FF is Superb,loved reading it...please do continue....Thanks 😊

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Amazing..............

pls continue soon

awww thank you Ill update soon.......😳😳

Originally posted by: tinsel

Sash your FF is Superb,loved reading it...please do continue....Thanks 😊

Awwww thank you so much I was actually not hoping for so much appreciation 😛😳😳

Im glad you liked it 😊😊

Ill update soon

PART 3

Maan is fuming........... He is walking towards da big door of da mansion thinking angrily as to why he even came back to the mansion he was juz doing so well in da outhouse

Maan self talk acha hua jo main kahi waha se saman nahi shift krta Ye log mujhe jeeney hi nahi detey................

Before he could leave there is another voice which calls out his name

Maaaannnnn''.!!!!!!!!

But the voice that uttered his name was not that of Savitri.......... It was the same voice due to which he always used to come back to the mansion the voice of his mother

He turns in shock if he cant bear one thing in this world than it's the teary voice of his mother' He knows she is in pain

Maan: Maa.............

Divya: Maan tum phir outhouse ja rahey ho............ Kya miley ga tumhe apna ap tanha kr k

Mujhe peta hai k tum Shruti ki shadi ki waja se pareshan ho but iska matlab ye nahi k tum apne ap ko takleef pohanchao

And apne sath sath mujhe bhi............. Main tumhe is haal main nahi dekh skti

a tear juz strts making her way down her cheek

Maan maa!!! Maa ap hi tou hain jo mujhe samjhti hai phir..............

Mujhe kuch wakt k liye akaila chor dein Main akaila rehna chahta hun..............

She looks into his eyes and Nods a yes......... She knows her son too well........... If she would have exageerated Maan would have become more stiff...............

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Maan at the out house

He lays down on the bed looks at the clock it 6 a.m

He still has 2 more hours before he can leave for office he thinks' and indulge in work and forget about Shruti finally getting married...

Maan not able to get any rest gets up to take a shower'

He undresses himself and opens da shower even the shower pouring down on his bare chest Shrutis wedding in his mind and the thunder outside make the shower water pouring down on him feel like hundred needles striking his bare chest he lowers his eye brows and closes his eyes in rage nd pain'

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Maan is getting ready infront of the mirror... The butler comes and knocks at his door

Da Old Nakul: Sir Divya Madam ne ap k liye nashta bhejwaya hai

Maan in his same style nods his head hmm Ata hun

When he gets down to the breakfast table in his kitchen he is shocked....

Shruti is sitting their with a glass of juice in her hand looking kinda depressed

She is wearing a jeans and a pink top... She has short Italian cut styled hair... She knows whats waiting for her and she is confused as to how to handle the whole situation...

Seeing Maan she stands up puts the glass on the tale and tries to look away as she sees maan in full anger and with a stiff jaw line

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woow daying fot the next part and thanks for pm

Originally posted by: lody

woow daying fot the next part and thanks for pm

Your are mostly welcome hun I have actually written a few parts m wondering if I shud upload dem all together 😛😉

Part 4

When he gets down to the breakfast table in his kitchen he is shocked....

Shruti is sitting their with a glass of juice in her hand looking kinda depressed

She is wearing a jeans and a pink top... She has short Italian cut styled hair... She knows whats waiting for her and she is confused as to how to handle the whole situation...

Seeing Maan she stands up puts the glass on the tale and tries to look away as she sees maan in full anger and with a stiff jaw line

Tum yaha kya kr rahi ho Shruti

With force he applies on saying her name and the way he was saying it sent shivers across her body and the sudden sound of thunder added to the whole situation

Shruti stammerrriinnnng Mujhe samjhaney ka moka tou dijiyeee

Maan Bus main kuch sunna samjahna nahi chahta tum yaha se ja sakti ho

Shruti gets angry of the way maan behaved and the way he is talking to her... She is also juz like him stubborn to the core...

Main yaha se kahin nahi jao gi ap ko meri baat sunni hi ho gi

Mujhe naa sunney ki adat nahi hai.....

Maan looks at her with a raised eye brow.....

Agar ap Maan singh khurana hai tou Main bhi kisi se kum nahi....

Maan is just shocked at her words and says

Tum ab mera mukabla karo gi

Shruti Aur ni tou kya Big B ap ajeeb hai.... Ap ki behan ko pyar hua wo itni khush hai us ki shadi honey ja ri hai and app kya Romeo buney phir re hai

Ap mujhe hamesha khush dekhna chahtey the na

Tou a bap ko kya hua Meri khushi main ap khush kyu nahi hai a teary voice.....

Maan anger vanishes

(Yes shruti is Maans sister the daughter of Savitri. Dhara from amber dhara I chose her to play ma shurti.. dun knw her real name... Maan loves Shruti a lot she is da closest to him in da family knwing that maan hates da word love and marriage she wasn't able to tell him about Dev ahinav shukla ofcourse he is very loving and loves Shruti a lot he would do anything for her Maan got to know about their relationship when the family actually started to arrange a marriage for Shruti. He was hurt that Shruti didn't tell him where she knew him inside out. Deep down inside he knew why she didn't tell him but he wasn't expecting that from her. Dev going to take her to Canada was the thought that was actually killing him.. After Adi shruti was da only frnd MSK had so thinking about Shruti leaving was tearing him apart... Moreover he didn't belive in love and marriages from his experience you end up alone and have to survive alone in this world so its better not to let anyone come close to you rather than going or fearing da pain of losing the person)

Maan nahi nahi Shruti he wipes her tears rona nahi Tum tou meri sub se ladli behan ho... Mujhe nahi lgta k pyar jaisa ahsas hota hai and shadi..... shadi sub se bari arbadi hai aur shadi k liye tum mujhe apne bhai ko chor k chali jao gi ye main har giz bardasht nahi kr skta

Again a stiff jaw line

Shruti Bhaiyaaa betiya paraya dhan hoti hai unko kabhi na kabhi apne ghar jana hi hota hai and Dev tou hmara itna puaran dost hai phi rap ko kya aitraz hai

Wo bhi mujhe bohat khush rkhey ga ap kyu nahi samjhtey

Maan hold her ear tightly and asks ye itni bari bari batein kon se magazine se seekhi...??

Shruti bhaiyyaa ohhh aaaaaa bohat dukh ra hai plz chor dey Maan lets go of her ear

Maan tumhe waqeyi Dev se bohat pyar hai

Shruti haan bohat pyar hai

Maan sighs and puts his hand on her head phir mujhe kiya aitraz ho skta hai phir bhi tum ek bar soch lo

Shruti main ne socha mum ne socha bari maa ne socha hum sub ko theek lga na bus ab ap bhi haan kar dijiye nahi tou main main phir se ro dun gi....

Maan smirks haan g ap 3no ka favorite hatheyar ansu theek hai theek hai

He hugs her and she gives a thumbs up to divya and savitri who are juz peeping thru da door and are relieved to see the whole situation going there way

Savitri mujhe peta tha Maan kahi bhi Shruti ko rota hua nahi dekh payee ga

Divya idea bhi tou mera tha shruti ko maan pas bhejney ka

Savitri beti tou wo meri haai na

Divya juz smiles at Savitri Savitri hates losing

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Sid

heyy...thanks alot for the pm..u gave me a slight releif..haha shruti was the sister..:)...like the way u sketch the character..continue soonn..i like it!!!

ty for the PM thats amazing :D update soon xx