#*Devil's Den#*DangerouslyInLove(PLEDGE/INDEX Pg1) - Page 16

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Shobha.... 🤗

and Hiiiiiii Tanu, Adits, Jyo, GF and allllll 🤗 🤗 🤗

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: remosalsa

Girls help me pls😳

Hey dear...well i m not all that gud wit th analysis bit..but basically u can write abt how u felt abt either the epi...or say a significant moment in the epi...like the jhumka scene..or the dinner discussion scene or the precap...😛😛
If u hv specific issues/observations abt the epi....or the characterisations....u can mention that too...😊
N dear..once u start writing i guarantee u will manage to do a great job...so just...hit the keyboard...😛
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Posted: 15 years ago

Arghhh my net is very slow tonight!! 😡

@Tanu: Thank alot darlin'.....🤗...as for the KANK vid...i loved that song so much..and whenever it came to that SRK and Rani bit i used to fast forward the song..and i just rmbered it was the exact same moment..for Maneet today..😆😆😆...i think what i'm saying is crap..but you may nvr know..it might just happen...😆😆😆... and will be reading your take now..having really bad net probs...my page takes so long to refresh.......😭
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Armu4eva

Hey dear...well i m not all that gud wit th analysis bit..but basically u can write abt how u felt abt either the epi...or say a significant moment in the epi...like the jhumka scene..or the dinner discussion scene or the precap...😛😛
If u hv specific issues/observations abt the epi....or the characterisations....u can mention that too...😊
N dear..once u start writing i guarantee u will manage to do a great job...so just...hit the keyboard...😛

Thks a lot Tanu😳, for start guidance😳😳, i am going to try it now😃😃....i will go for whole epi😳, cause i felt many things, but, will try to put that on here something at least😳😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
Ok I have to sign off soon, have lots of work!! Was wondering is it safe to drive in this absent state of mind??? Dream, drool & drive is a deadly combination! But am helpless, have to finish my work & at the same time my mind & brain is not functioning at all, all I am seeing is this blurry vision blocking everything! Fire & water playing its game, they r at their best! 😃
Nissar today I blame u big time 😆 but never mind do keep me dizzy like this, I won't complain ever!
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Posted: 15 years ago
I WILL RESERVE THIS ONE FOR ME😳, HOPE I AM NOT LATE FOR THAT...😊
Hello friends, first of all, for welcomg, me in ur den🤗, & allowing me too, to write something, which i never tried before😆, & ur all analysis made me to try my hand also on it😳😳,
Just bear with mine, i won't be able to make a good one like u all, but can do, very lil one😳😆
the start scenes, was, lil bit ok for me, but didn't like Pari jumping again & again😆, on seeing Maan that way😆.
Maan didn't like pari com'g near him😳, frm his expressions was very easy to know abt that😆, when she brought rose to him, & Geet was burning with jealousy😡😆, & the way he suddenly changed his expressions frm angry to taunting smile, jut loved that😳😳...never thought that maan will change so suddenly frm angry MSK to Lover boy image😳😳, which i am liking more of him😊😊
for a sec, i felt bad for Pari😆, as Maan was just using her😉, to get close to Geet, & acept her feelings for him😳😳, it doesn't matter, if he doesn't accept them, BOys always remains boys, they want girls to move first😡, this thing only i don't like in boys, but maan is acceptance😍😉😆...felt bad for Geet, too, ...that when she brought rose for him, that time rose place was directly in dustbin, & now, its on Maan's table😳😆😆, all over it😆😆
But still i am confused with Geet's expressions, when her mouth was wide open😃, & Maan told to close it😆😆, y was she shocked, when pari, asked for Coffeee & told the meaning of her name😕😕{can anyone tell me this }
just loved all the taunting smile Maan was giving, when he sae Geet was feeling jealous😳😆😆
Loved the colour of Geet dress, dark navy blue one😳😳, & her always talking with her Babaji😳😳, .
but guys, its Pari means angel, & she called Geet an Angel😳❤️, & once maan mentioned if Geet is pari😉😳, so all indications shows that finally our Geet is only Maan's Pari😳😳..
for once i liked this role reversal, btw pari & Geet😆, today Pari was chapar chapar, & eating Geet's head to full😆...& made her friend😆,
& wants to be in arms of Mr Hot😆😆..
Geet trying her best with pari, to avoid her with Mr Hot😳😆, but pari is just so adamant😡😆..& my fav one in all now🤣
Geet...Pari tumhara naam pari hai naa😆
Pari...hmmmm
Geet.....{indicating her hands as flying}😆, iska matladb yeh nahi, ki tum sach much hawa mein udati raho🤣
Poor Geet, trying her level best to bring Pari, frm sky to earth😆, but as she is pari, she wants to remain so😆😆...Geet unwillingly ready to help Pari...aww, poor Geet, thr😳😭😭..& Maan spying girls talk frm outside kitchen door😳😉😆😆, bad habits\ to listen to girls talk thr, isn't it girls😳😆😆..& his brain😳😉😆, starts for another plan to make jealous for Geet😆😆😆..
I am now woried for future khurana constructions😉😆😆.i can see clearly its going to Dev-nt hands😲😆, & here Maan, full busy for how to make lady love jealous, with help of anther cartoon😆😆
Now com'g to the kitchen part, just so dreamy in Pari's language😆😆, so frm whr did Maan got those jhumkas from😆😆, seeing Pari's style, he thought she's the girl who will wear it😳😆, may be she could, as it was given to her by mr hot😳😆, he never had intention to give it to her, at all, just brought them to make Geet jealous😆😆, & poor his plan backfired on him😆😆, when Geet purposely showed no reaction to his planning😭😆😆...water was poured by Geet, of him day dreaming😆😆😍...just love this new Maan, with a complete change❤️, & Khadoos, title gone frm his name
& here both trying to prove whose idea is superior then whom😆😆 ...first of all i am shocked😲, Maan has idea for disc😲😲, i never thought a serious person can ever think like that...Pyar mein behcare ko kya kya karna pad raha hai😭😭🤗., the moment he held her so close😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️, omg omg omg, i fainted, & my mouth wide opened front of my pc😆😆😆😃..for a sec, i thought , he will ask her,
Geet tumhe koi farak nahi padta , agar mein pari ke saath jaon toh😳😳
but, he asked abt dance with Pari😡😆, but that passion was so intense, when both were so close to each other arms😳😳, Geet's hands on his waist😍, & so intense eye lock😳😳., i thought like always he will again back off, thinking, yeh tu kya kar raha hai Maan😲😳😳, but no😲😆, he was like he already accepted his feelings to himself😕😕😕, did i miss them somewhr, whr he accepted his feelings for himself😕😕,, cause without accepting his feelings towards himself, this scene at end was lil confusing for me😳😕😕, but still just loved the loverboy in Maan😳😳.
but i like 1 thing in him is❤️😆, suddenly he's back as MSK angry Maan😆😆, frm deep lover boy, i just loved his line, here
Thks Geet, mera kya hota agar tum na hoti😳...but the way he said was, not good😭
Dev-Nt, scene i will skip it🤢, cause these don't do anything except fighting or doing jasoosi on each other😎
i expect only 1 thing frm Dev here, that when he will give 1 tight slap to NT😆😆, & give her divorce, if he dares to do that😉...& hire a detective back of NT now😆😆...
Both grandsons, just take their any complaints to their nataunki dadi, is very funny🤣, i found😳😳
next scene Maan-Pari🤣🤣, he was least bothered what she was talking & getting irritated with her😳😆😆, she was in her filmy style of , Maan as SRK❤️🤣, & Pari as kajol🤣🤣...he was not at all enjoying Pari's co.😆😆, & wanted to be with Geet for sure😉😳😆, & sudden u-turn with his expressions, once Geet was front of him😳😳😳
Pari gave new name to Maan...frm MSK to SRK😆😆😆
when Geet came with 3 cup of coffee😳😳😉, i liked how Maan ran towards her to tell her to tell Pari, to behave in proper way, & not to irritate him😆😆, but out Geet, she instead supported pari😆😆, poor Maan😭😆, that she is saying right,, Maan thought, may be Geet will understand him, but here Geet too was in teasing mode😉😉..
coffee scene was nice & funny😳😆😆, Maan asking Geet drinking coffee, & she almost spills the beans😳, which brought thandak in Maan's heart😎, but coffee is not good for pregnant lady, Geet should avoid it no😲😲😆, but our Geet's baby is super baby, nothing will happen to it, when it can survive fall, & intense dance, then coffee, is a small thing for it😆
another funny moment 🤣Maan-Geet, fighting over coffe issue😆😆, , Geet was so scared, almost being caught by Maan😉😳, cause of him, she too loves coffee 😳😳......& they ignoring Pari fully, who thought, Maan's talking to her😆😆, & to get her attention towards her, the way she fakes her fainting, looked fully nautanki😆😆😆😆, good companion for Dadi in nautanki😆😆, but only Dadi is best for nautanki😆😆
didn't like that part, whr Maan carried Pari in his arm, in that deadline time of 4 hrs😡
Geet was full of jealous, at end, 😆😆, but y Maan wanted Geet to help him😡😆, to make another plan for making her jealous i think😆😆
Precap.........omg, just no words left to describe it, the song😳😳, KANK😳😳, like here many of u have said, abt the dance, the song part was of SRK-Rani's😉😉😉....my eyes were blurred my seeing the precap, i can't describe it well😆😆..sorry girls, i have all xxx rated thoughts on that, don't want to put up in open forum, this way😆😆., i may get banned for it then😆😆😭
uff, finally done with my first time analysis😳😳, hope u all like it, & enjoy it., & pls tell me how it is, & what more i should add next time, & what more changes I should do next time for it 😳😳, & will try to do more better next time😳😳
& feel free to comment on it😳😳, may it be good or bad, sportively i will accept it🤗
Edited by remosalsa - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Doddle - Love your analysis. Always look forward to it!

All you gals - I am totally hooked to the Den...
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Posted: 15 years ago
edited my post on pg 6 and its very long since it was 2nd hehheheh
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: NaughtyNihu

edited my post on pg 6 and its very long since it was 2nd hehheheh

ll def read it nihu dear....😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: adits7

ll def read it nihu dear....😊



thanks pedaaaaa🤗
bahut likha hai aaj...more dan i wrote in eco papers🤣

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