ott maaneet madness 4TH update

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Posted: 15 years ago
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heyy guys loved you lots response thank you soo much keep reading and commenting thank you 4 ur love even if this is my first ever ff on maaneet

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1461788 - part 1
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1461833 - part 2
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1462241 - part 3

part 4
(doorbell rings) "i'll get it" geet shouted. geet opened the door and saw a man with a white suit and a white hat he was holding a black bag. "huh aaj laundry day hai kya?" geet asked confused "hello ma'am mein pari ma'am ka driver hoon aap ni yeh saab mangwaya hai, mein yeh sab kaha raak ho?" the driver said "oh waha kamare mein raak do please".

"geet kapre aage kya" said pari as she came from downstairs. "hah lekin pari mujhe samaj nahi aa raha ki inko pehenti kaise hai" geet said as she took a strapless dress out of the bag and held it up, she looked at pari through confused eyes. pari put her hand on geets hand, "dont worry geet i will get you dressed and by the time im done with you nobody will recoginse you" "ok, now im scared i just wanna look like one of you so that nobody will say anything about my class" geet replied "are you ok geet? dont worry you are already one of us even if you dont wear the same clothes as us because we are all indians come on geet its independence day a proud day for us indians so now come on because once i give you a makeover nobody will be able to say anything about your class"

two hours later when the chopras had arrived and were seated on the sofa downstairs maan called geet to give him the deal file so that they could sign it.
"geet where is she now" maan wispered to himself. Suddenly he saw geet but he couldnt help but leave his mouth a little open. he looked at her in admiration and amaze. all he could see was her it was as the whole world had disapeared. He couldnt bare to take his eyes off her, she was looking like an angel from heaven, like the most prettist girl on the earth, in fact the universe. she was the only one he wanted to look at forever. He wanted her to be his forever so that they would never part. Ever.

"mr khurana, excuse me, mr khurana" mr chopra said interupting the eye lock between the two. "ermm hai woh hum.. mein kya ker raha tha haan woh file geet tum geet hi hoon na?" maans voice slowly turning into a mumble.

hope you enjoyed and please doo comment i really love it when i read ur lots comments so i know if you lot like what im writing so please do comment 😃


HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY FRIENDS love you lots

link to geets dress - http://www.irenelim.com/fashion/2009/03/25/polka-halter-dress/


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Posted: 15 years ago
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aah!!! so he cant takes his eyes off her... the dress ka link refused to open!!
lemme know when you update next!

love,
niha

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