Maaneet Scene-Wishful Thinking & Mo Upd 9/09 p147 - Page 73

you know i enjoyed every moment of their encounter in the lake...and now i feel guilty about it. i hope the truth was out before any such thing happened. i feel really bad for maan.

nonetheless, your writing is marvelous.

HI DI!!!!! ❤️ Missed u.....and ur wishful thinkin!!! Finally i caught up......i don't know but every time i think of Maaneet this one song plays in my mind "Na woh inkar karti hai.....na woh ekraar karti hai.....humay phirbhi yaakeen hai woh......humise pyar karti hai!! From maan's pov i think of this song all the time! Geet has neither denied nor has she admitted that she loves maan.......😆 ok that was random.....also because i was just listening to it 😉

Part 1

Ok so......wow......um after that first part today i had to literally go out of my room to get fresh air......omg omg....i could not breathe after that first part.....they kissed....and then it was as if nothing happened 😆...geet didn't say anything nor did she throw a fit for maan doing that??? Of course why would she since she herself some what enjoyed it 😉!!! U know every time i feel for this poor girl....she loves him so much......but her life is so messed up that she can't even accept the love she has for Maan 😭.....i hope to god that no girl ever has to deal with what Geet is going through....because it is like being in hell! 🤢

Btw.....i loved every bit of the first part....it was amazing.....i saw those old flash backs of geet flashing through my eyes as if i myself had become geet for a second 😛.....beautiful di....just amazing....just mindblowing......my mind has simply once again been blown away with ur writing.....wow wow...magnificent!! 👏⭐️

I also loved how u had described how Maan felt when he found out that geet had left for Hoshyarpur without telling him......it was beautifully written and described di.....loved every moment of that part!! I can soooo see maan being upset that she had gone without thinkin of the consequences.....it is beautifully portrayed of how well maan knows geet now!! It was also amazing that at the same time he had took the time to understand that she has gone because of him!!! Also i loved how u mentioned how he figured out where geet would be 😳....that was brilliant on ur part......so it just wouldn't look like he just showed up by geet out of no where!! It is sooooo realistic di......just soooo perfect!! 👏
Wow di.....amazing....u always blow me away 👏.......while i was reading this part i was thinkin that watch Maan forget at the moment that he is mad at geet and just stares at her beauty....and that was exactly how u had put it as well!! 😳 Loved how u had described that he lost himself for a second when she walked out of the bus....and how he could spot her anywhere even with that Dupatta on her face👏....really just wow!! Finally if not in the show at least in ur scene Geet told him that she had in fact stood up to her family and had send her brother jail!! 👏 That got me soooo excited.....and what almost a confrontation of her pregnancy?? But i loved how Maan told her that he is with her 😭 brought tears of happiness for me! 😳 Oh thank god there was no rooms in that nightmarish guest house or whatever it is....Geet at least didn't have to stay there!! 😳 The best part i am hoping they show this in the show as well.where Maan made a guess on geet's character....how she was always dependent on everyone....family and then husband....i remember geet had told him that he doesn't know anything about her....and yet again it makes me think even now....maan really "does not know anything about Geet" (meaning her past)ironic huh? how easily maan had told geet that she is 18, parents found her a guy for marriage...she stopped school 😆 all lucky guesses huh??...then finally the line i remember when i heard it for the first time geet "that no one either never loved someone like u...nor will anyone ever!!!" at that time i had said....geet babes u will love this guy more than anything!!! Now i read this in ur part and i remembered it and i was sooooo happy that Geet remembered her sayin that.....and how funny it is now!! It is wonderful goin down this memory lane di....thank u so much!!! it is like i am seeing maaneet meeting all over again accept this time everything is different.....no more hate....but instead love and care for one another!! Every place they met in HP will remind us and even them how the tables have turned from then and now!!! Wow i am soooooo excited....i am gettin ideas in my head 😆
I also love the trust that Geet has on Maan now.....remember the knife scene di?? Now....she doesn't even think twice of Maan in that way meaning "after all he is guy" kind of thing.....she feels protected now 😳 omg omg!!! I am going crazy.....i need water!!! 😆 Worse of all today is Sunday so miss Shivani does not go to the gym on Sunday's but after reading this part i wished i did 😆
Oh my the lake!!! I love that lake di.....i really do....i wanna go visit that lake 🤣....i seriously do! 😉 hmmmmmmm.......memories of Maaneet flashing again.......geet drowning......Maan carries her out 😍memory lane once again di 😍...yeh kya karahi hai aap mere saath?? Yeh meri Vrush di mujhay pagal kardegi!!!🤢😆 Now even geet goes down memory lane....not only me.....wow she gots the hots for Maan!!! Don't we all?? She splashes water on her self....she cannot handle Maan shirtless??? Di.....can we?? No of course not....we can't either!!! Why oh why.....u r sooooo wonderful with these descriptions....i see Maan shirtless....and now i have to go splash water on my face 😆😳......loved the whole lake scene di.....it was just full on paisa vasool!! 👏⭐️ Maan and geet for once let loose....and have fun!!! Wow.....memory lane again.....geet pleading to maan to help her from the goons.....he pushes her away 😲....remember di?? Oh jeez of course u remember stupid question 😆....i was hell shocked when he did that....i was expecting him to help her.....but he pushed her away from him 😲....but of course he heard her screaming once she had fallen in the lake......and ta da....he saves her....and then once again just drops her on the ground as if....she was not human but just a toy that he found in water and it got in his way and he just threw in on the ground!!! This time....they were playing around with each other!!!😳 What a change!!!

Part 2

Ahhhhhh di.... omg omg....the duppata.....when he saved her he threw that duppata on geet's face so harshly not even lookin back at her even once he just cared about his pepsi...coke or whatever....and this time ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh he gently covered her with it!!! Wow wow.....my heart beat is racing......i am going crazy with these wonderful thoughts.....di......di....u r toooooo good!!! love u for posting this up!!! Ahhh the weekend is finally flying by thanks to u!!! 🤗 Sorry i can't say anything about that kiss ☺️
except the fact....it was sooooooo romantic......and sooooooooooooo hot.....and soooooooooooooooo sizzling!!!! ⭐️
I love the confident geet has....the old geet had no confidence at all....she was this poor girl who was always pushed down by her darji and brother....this time she is complete different woman....and i am glad that she is confident and strong....and also glad that she is this way partly because of Maan......i already see a wonderful relationship ready to grow like a flower!!! 😳⭐️
The scene when geet see's gurvinder and her sister was just sooooooooooo beautifully written di 👏.....wow it was sooooooooooooo emotional.....u writing has always touched my heart di....it always has....and this time once again ur writing has touched my heart ❤️.....wow.....i just loved how Maan was there to support geet....and loved how he wanted geet to face her life....and her family!!! Maan and geet have become each others strength even more before falling in love with one another......i can't wait till their love blossoms......then they will be even more stronger than ever! 😭😳
Oh damn.....we are soooooo close for the confrontation....i can see it coming from this part! the questions rajjo throws at geet.......Maan is there....omg omg! excited and yet scared at the same time!!! I feel like i am getting my geet episodes on the weekend because of u di!!! thank u! 🤗

Part 3

Jeez...geet still trying to avoid Maan from hearing the truth 🤢.......although she is not wrong....Maan finding out like this would be sooooooo horrible!!! bad....it would be real bad!!! I hated to see Geet in soooo much......u know di....i can never stand drashti crying in the show....she cries sooooo real......her crying looks so realistic........and u feel sooo horrible to see her in that state....omg the time when the stupid Dev left her at the airport.......oh gosh just thinkin about Geet cryin then gave me the goosebumps!!! I hate it when Drashti cries....it just looks so damn real......and when she cries....she has the extremely innocent look......and u can't stop urself from crying....i remembered i cried soooo much seeing her in that state at the airport!!! Gosh what will happen when the truth will come out.......i will cry my heart out! 😭
Wow.......i felt for geet a lot.....especially when she tried to avoid answering Rajjo's questions....and changed the subject....even i would not want to ask about a family that either never stood up for me....and tried to kill me......but i would still be so attached to my parents.....it is sad that Geet's mom and dad loved her soooo much....and could only help her run away......😭
geet is not wrong in not being able to forgive her mom and dad.......now this conversation just reminded me of my mommy.....and it just makes me feel soooo thankful that i have a wonderful woman as my mom! Ok ok.....no more crying now 😆 tooo much emotion in one night is not good!! Especially for somone like me that is soooooo positive and always happy! 😉
Di.....u r writing has sooooo much love.....so much feeling.......that it can make anyone goooooooo whacko.......u r truly are an amazing writer!!! I am truly proud to have a di like u!!! U really really deserve all of the love u get on this forum.......because u realy really write so well.....and u work hard when u write these......it is not easy to put ur thoughts in words.....and u put them on the computer for us sooooo beautifully!!! I give u a standing ovation.....i have not yet come across a good author like this......not yet......i am glad that this place has give me u!!! Also all of the other wonderful friends on the geet forum!! 👏
Poor maan.....he looks confused from the conversation.....but at least he understood that there was something that he did not know......and it is about damn time that poor guy knew.....i think he has every right to know about geet especially now.....he has give his heart to her.....and i hope that soon even in the show they show Maan knowing.....but i hope that maan supports geet all the way!!!! I really hope he does.....because if he doesn't then i will never see Maan in the same way i see him right now!! I am madly in love with Maan....his character is beautiful....so i hope that we all keep seeing this man this way!!! 😭😳
Oh man.....not even in ur wishful thinkin did the truth come out 😆 i was kind of hoping to read more!!.....I guess u have spoiled us di....u really have.....we all ask for more every time we come to the end of ur scenes.....and today i got to read alll three parts one after the other!!!! So i was left disappointed and dying for more!!!!! I hope u continue soon di!!! But first i want to thank u for giving us all this wonderful treat of 3 parts!!! I loved every part today....i enjoyed it a lot....and thanks to u my weekend has become even more wonderful! 😳


U r the queen of writing di.....u r extremely wonderful....and i love the work u present to us.....i just love it!!! I am so happy that i finally got the time to reply to ur post......it feels like its been ages since i came and replied to u!!!! thank u thank u....once again for this wonderful treat u have give to us all!!! u made my weekend.....and thank god that today is sunday......and it is night where i am....and in soon Monday will come....and so will Geet....our favorite show!!!

Sorry if i yapped tooooo much di....but u deserved every bit of the compliments i gave to u.....u really do!!!! Also because i had to make up for the three parts right?? 😉

Love u di!!!
-Shivani😛


Also sorry for the mistakes on my post if any.....i was just soooo excited to reply.....and so many thoughts were jumping in my mind....i just had to say it all....so sorry for the mistakes!!
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Now that i checked out how much i have written.....all i have to say is....have fun readin this 😆

to all

hi just came home..will write...detailed replies..tomorrow morning..or later...

but thank you so much....loved your comments...

Omg soo lovely part plzz pm for the next part plzz

Originally posted by: lody

Omg soo lovely part plzz pm for the next part plzz

sorry lody i had not sent any pm for the 3rd update.. i had to go out...but i will surely send a pm whenever i update....

Vrush.

That was a short scene but nonetheless as usual awesome......

din get the PM this time.... 😭😭😭😭

Hey Vroom,

I come back and see 3 updates!! What a bounty for the weekend!! Thank you babes 😃....

Originally posted by: deniac

Vrush.

That was a short scene but nonetheless as usual awesome......

din get the PM this time.... 😭

Just saw page 94 updated in my index so tried checking.... please do send the PMs.....

Gouri..

i had not been able to send the pm..after i had posted.., i has sneaked in the update at great speed before i left..though i could not complete it anyway...and that left no time to send pms as well..

but i hoped you all would just stumble upon it...which you did...

will definitely send pms...

Originally posted by: sukklover

yea bengali word hai.....

it means....supab.😛..

kya update yaar....agar aysa sach me ho to maza aa jayega.....haina.😊..

lov,❤️

Tama

thanks so much sukklover

hmmm now what CVs will show only they know..but..i am sure whatever they do ..will be smashing..