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Posted: 15 years ago
hope u r feeling better....plz cont as soon as u r better....take care also plz add me to ur pm list if i m not in it already....thanks
Edited by dhrashtee - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey dear how r u??
take care of urself
we can wait 4 the updt
n the updt was amazing
dev deserved it after what he done 2 maneet
i hope now maneet come together soon
n their misunderstandings will vanished
i hope so!!
continue when u can n want
see yaa
love uuu
take care!!
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Posted: 15 years ago




thanks dear...

one dear...

thanks 4 pm me....
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Posted: 15 years ago
hy reet

how r u dear. hope u r fine.
waiting for next
plzzz conti soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sarita21992

hi reet,
hope u r fine by now.😊
misd ur update yesterday.

luvin tis update, d way geet felt shockd on maan behaviour, gr8.👍🏼
so dev regretting, he better shud.⭐️
n tht NT shud defo rot in hell or anythin lyk tht.😡

so d letters r coming soon or wat??
itna to bta do yar😉

hey sarita

yup ,...m fine now ...
aww m sorry ...i just cudnt make it ...but glad u missed the update hehehe...devils grin
yup ....now its his turn to shock her sometimes na...why he will always run after her affection !!!!
about devtara ...lips sealed
letters ...well....no comments ...as u are a good guesser ...and i love to keep the mystry unfolded hehehheheheheh..)
don beat me up honey
(actually decided to two types of continuation .....still not sure which one i will put down ....)
love u
reet

Originally posted by: pickle6586



hello 😛

hope ur fine now????? and yes, that was another breath-taking update.... 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

like, i've said before, even separation seems to be nice sometimes...!!!! gosh, i had goosebumps when i was reading the update....!!!!!! lovely lovely loevly..... update.....

now coming to the dialogues and scenes i like,

geet not arguing abt maan dropping her to the hostel.... i was as surprised as maan was.... 😆

Maan was silent ... and softly said.. there are some things that you yourself wont be able to answer if I will question about it ....isnt it geet ? . i loved this dialogue... omg omg omg...!!!! it was so good....

i guess the whole car scene was fabulous...their feelings, emotions and dialogues, wonderfully written.... amazing...!!!!!

and dev, considered geet his wife, because things were not good with naintara...wat a 🤬.....

but i'm glad he atleast realizes she is love with maan...!!!!!

and daadi making maan promise and maan thinking of geet... awwwww........ that was so cute..!!!!

lovely yaar.. so in less than 6 months i'm assumiing they would get married. but how will the truth come out???cant wait for ur next update.....!!!!!!

soumya


hey soumya
thank you so much dear ...
yup m doing much more better ...but ghayel in gurmeet's loveria..!!!lolz..
ahhh....separation of minds with souls blended with each other ...thats not separation.....thats love ...the devine desire of human beings
thank you .....i love ur comments
well....about the dialouge u quoted...its maan's way to take out things from geet ...he was right ....dies she hav any answer y she kissed him back that day ....why she is still intersted how many drinks he is taking ....
she loved him without showing it ....
and about dadi n maan secne...u dint get the real meaning ......what i meant ...he has to marry someone else.....and forget geet ...so he remembered her face for the last time to give dadi his words
i hope u check this reply to u and get the correct meaning or else u will be having prob understadning the next episode
thank you so much ...stay tuned
Edited by maanmeet8 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
i think i have heard in if no thread can be longer than 150 page ..is it true....some one tell me please..
aneway...
m back here with the update ....
i m unsure how will u find it out .....i m overflowed by ur replies and support ..thanx a lot dearies !!!
part 37

sir..... yeh log hamara bag khol ke dekhenge ..?? geet was nervous seeing the security system of airport security officers.....she had never seen any airport ..that was her first experience ......

maan was enjoying her nervousness with a mischievous smile.....he kept his serious attitude plastered on his face ....and informed her ...that they will search everything .. even each person also......and women will be checked by man.....

geet was not able to see any lady security checking as her vision was hindered by a pillar ....she could only see how the men are getting checked by security officers....

she clutched maan's hand tight ....and almost hided herself behind him.... "sir...mujhe nahi jana pune ..wapas chale..???."

maan concealed a devils grin ..... and retorted ...aise kaise...woh dekho hamare bags bhi chale gaye....he indicated to the baggage ..

geet : oye...ruko...oye........she tried to stop them but ....didnt dare to leave maan's hand.......so her bags were vanished inside....

"sir...apne unhe roka bhi nahi...." ...she was perspirating poorly thinking of how the men are going to check her ....

Sir.....!! she gasped....

maan kept his hand on her grip over his arm ..slightly patting it assured her .....bas 2 min geet ......!!

Nahi sir.....!!....please wapas chaliye ....she clung to his hand like she is going get parted for him forever ....

Maan enjoyed her proximity ....her being dependent on him...it felt like a proud ___ he smiled and let out a contended sigh....he was happy he couldn't restrain himself from being happy ....he teased her ....made her panic stricken .....and be with him ....he enjoyed her being dependent on him....

But they had to move on....and the sight of women security guards attracted her sight ...she was confused ...looked at his face....when he was trying to conceal a smile....

Aap mujhe chidha rahe the ...hai na...?? geet pulled him to her and made him see in her eyes.....

He gave her a killing smile....bending his head to her face....whispered ... "jab janti ho ....to chidti kiun ho...??"

She was lost in his eyes.....the eyes adored her always... his sinful lips....his mischievous smile....

They were lost in each other's eyes.....

The world spun around them.....and they were same..like the first time they met ....first time he picked her up in his arms and walked through the water...she was still so innocent .............so adorable...so serene...still her eyes spoke a big volume of emotions..........

Still his eyes are same...big almond eyes....like god created him with a special care....his sharp nose...his untrimmed stubble gave him an extra appeal ....still his eyes were same passionate ....but the arrogance was missing ....it was something different ...... his cravings...for her sight ...

Mam..!! come here please.....mamm...!! hellow.....!!!!! the security guards were confident that this newly wed couple is going for their honemoon....

mam....surely u are going to miss ur honeymoon ...!!

maan's daze broke....he broke the trance....so as hers.....she soon parted herself from him ...but when she saw a lady security guard with gun tied on her waist coming close to her and indicating to enter a veiled cabin for checking ...she was dead frightened ...she clasped his hand tight again .....and her another hand was pulled by the security guard ....so she had to leave him ...and follow her...

but her eyes were stuck on maan...the scared look in her eyes was making maan uneasy ...he felt like protecting her ..assuring her...he smiled at his feelings....m I being over possessive ? he had no answer...

don't worry mam..!!! ur husband is fully safe n sound ...and u will join him soon.....a guard commented ..as she checked the longing looks on her and maan's eyes....

geet was hell shocked by that ...she regained her composure ...she understood she had forgotten her actual strategy ...

he waited for her to join him .....and as soon she arrived ...he asked her ...are you fine...

giving a little nod she started walking away....maan didn't understand her sudden behavioral change ....he took her hand in hers ....when she shrugged it off and said..m fine..!!!

maan controlled himself...they walked silently with the other passengers ..untill they took the airbus....she was distracted again seeing so many types of people around her ...their dressing sense...some she adored ...and for some she prayed to babaji for her security as she predicted she will be soon teased by goons...after getting seated in the bus she started chattering again back to normal geet mode.....

sir ...hum bus me jayenge...? yeh lo.....fir flight ke lie itne paise deneki kya jarurat thi.....!!

aap na sir..pehle kuch pata wata karte nahi ho bus aievein ..!!!

sir....!! she kept on bugging him until he indicated his finger to the plane ....

she was so much excited that she again jumped and clutched his hand tight ...she kept her self talking with babaji ...while maan was amused by her kiddish antics...

he tried to stop her from hopping ...as he was afraid she might end up hurting her baby ...but she wasn't really in the mood to care....so maan..go up from the seat ...and just stood infront of her ...protecting her from colliding with others ...

he enjoyed every expressions of her face... her battling dreamy curly eyelashes ...her beaming face .....he was never tired watching her .... as if it was his favorite time pass....she twiched her little nose as she saw the hosteses with such loud make up....she was going to ask them if they checked themselves in mirror...but he refrained her informing its their job....she suggested to give them nakul's dresscode....saying it will look more civilized ..maan concealed his laugh at that....

geet was continuously chattering and asking questions about everything she saw until he made her sit forcefully in the seat ....

she was stopped looking outside through the window...when he tucked her seatbelt ....she was shocked as she felt his hand around her waist ....but didn't say anything ...

geet was excited when the plane started to run .....maan had cautioned her that it can make a hollow feeling in her belly ...so ..she was expecting the feeling of take off...!!

when the plane was about to take off ....he placed his arm around her ....

the person sitting in the seat beside maan....asked maan ...

ur wife seems to be very much nervous and excited...

maan looked at him awestruck....when geet pushed his arm around her ..

maan : naah..i mean..ohh.....!

the other person : ohh seems to be u r going to be a lucky father ...!! congratulation MR.....he fumbled...

cursing his keen eyes ....maan stole a quick glance of geet ...and spoke up.....: khurana ...maan singh khurana ...!! he licked his lower lip....not sure what to explain and how to....

geet broke into them..... thanx uncleji...but kya hai na....yeh mere "woh" nahi hai....!! ...without explaining anything else she pushed herself again to the window...

maan's face was drained....he had nothing else to cover up the situation....not only that her words has pierced his heart ...he kept mum...

the person didn't belive her though...he whispered ..

"lagta hai ....aapdono ka kuch der pehle hi jor ka jhagra ho gaya hai....!!"

maan managed to pass a weak smile.... u know "wifeys" sort of...

he didn't remember the last conversation she behaved politely with him ....caring him....he felt though she was sitting just beside him yet so far ....he decided to take a nap ..before the other person starts to enquire more .. he sank into the seat and closed his eyes...he hadn't slept last night ..he just didn't want to think more about it.....he sighed ..and soon dozed off....

she noticed him sleeping ...she held his hand softly ...she could bet ..!! he is in deep sleep now ..she knew him even by his breaths...she placed his head on her own head...and cuddled beside him to make him rest on her head ...

the person sitting on other side ...about whom geet had totally forgotten...smiled seeing Mrs. khuranas protectiveness ...and hided himself under the magazine..

maan woke up as the pilot announced ..

he found his head resting on her head ..while to his utter surprise geet was not at all sleeping ..busy watching clouds...

he wondered what the actual geet is....

geet felt him waking up and looked at him ....woh ..aap unke upar gir rahe the...to ..maine ....she left the rest incomplete ...situations had made her a good liar ...!!

he knotted his brows in disbelief ...but neglected it as the plane had landed ....

she was a silent watcher in the rest of the part ...

as they arrived in the hotel....

he asked for a room ...when geet rolled her eyes..and pulled him aside...

what are you upto ...?

geet don't be silly .!!! it will be large room and this is not safe for a woman staying night in a room alone ... don't you trust me...!!!

geet had the answer in her eyes.....

I trust you or not is not the problem.....the question is your reputation ...tomorrow morning everybody will come to know that u spent night with your secretary ....

maan chuckled.....u r not my secretary anymore !!

geet was embarrassed ....sometimes she could nt keep the series of things in her memeory that has happened in between them actually .....it feels like they are always together.

geet : I m serious ..!!

maan had no intention to argue with her so he just decided to take another room ...

they both signed and went to their respective rooms...maan took a shower and followed by a quick nap...

after sometime when maan knocked at her door...for lunch ..when to his utter dismay she said she has had it ...when for the past half an hour maan was waiting for her to call him...that she usually did at home..

first the flight incidence her bashing him up in front of the person...2nd room incidence ....and 3rd she had done her lunch without even asking or waiting for him.....

maan was irritated by her behavior ...so he too avoided her and went to the site ..without even taking her with him...

geet got ready and waited for him to pick her up....and the time went on..he didn't show up....

it was the 4th time the room service knocked at her door...she was frustrated and well....bit scared too....she called him up...he couldn't recognize the number...

maan : yeah .!! maan singh khurana speaking .!!!

geeet : " geet handa here ..do you remember ,...!!!!" she chewed the words..

maan was silent for some seconds.... "definitely you are not some one whom can be forgotten so easily ....!!" ...he taunted back...."and if I wish to do ...you wont let me...as u will keep disturbing me...what is it ....????"

Geet was feeling low at his rude words ...but managed...

I guess m here too for the project ..and seems like u have gone there already ..she retorted..

Maan: ohh really ...u miss geet handa !!!..being a self sufficient woman I presumed that u will come by urself ...!!

Geet : thanx (low tone) and hung up...

Maan had no mood to argue with the land owners after this conversation ...but still it was a burning problem in front of him ... he was able to get back his concentration after a good effort ...

It actually worked ...they somehow was not in that denial state ...but still didn't give a nod to his proposal...so they decided to meet up again ...

On his way back..her low volume thanx was bugging him....but he had decided to keep his attitude the same....

She was looking pale as he met her in the evening ..her exhausted look made him curious .....he called her up as the clients had invited them in a dinner ...to attend that she got ready and came down to the reception to meet maan...

Should I cancel the dinner ....you can take have it here .....maan suggested her

Thankx..if u wanna manage the client urself....which you are doing the whole day ...u could say it clearly before.......geet was not in good mood to reply politely ...

Geeeet ...!! he hissed her name....is there some fixed condition with you that you have to misunderstand me in every single matter ..??i didn't take u with me....as I felt u will be exhausted by the journey ...and ur condition....he couldn't finish as geet stopped him by her curt reply..

Ohh really ..!!! you don't have to be so much concerned about me.....tell me one good thing....when you urself told me hotel is not safe for a woman to stay alone in a room ...after that u didn't even call me up to check m doing fine or not ...

What ..? ??? in d same sentence u r telling me not to be concerned about you ...and complaining at the same time asking y I was nt concerned ...i seriously don't understand you girls...!!!

An unsocial person like you cant understand a woman....she smirked....

He was about to start a fight in the reception only ..when ...they informed their cab has arrived...so he decided to just let it go....

At the restaurant ....he introduced her to the land owner .. they started talking over some serious matter ...when maan got a call from dev........he excused himself...and came outside...

Mr khaneja the land owner wanted to order the dinner as the waiter came to have it ...

She gave the order for herself and maan....as she knew his choice ... she ordered his favorite Italian food one plate Friuli-Venezia Giulia and a Tuscany ..

Dev called up maan to talk about business....he tried to guess her presence but couldn't guess it either .... from him dadima took the phone to talk with maan...but maan had hung it up...

Dadima had a wide grin on her face ....even after he hung up the call....she was not disaappointed a little..which was very unusual of her......dev was amused to see her reactions ... and guessed its something about maan only ...he followed her to her bedroom to know what it is....

Back to pune

After sometime maan joined them and food arrived...as he questioningly looked at the dishes ...Mr khaneja explained him ....that she had ordered on behalf of him....

Maan pushed the dishes aside and ordered something else....explaining him he doesn't like them... Mr khaneja felt uncanny about their cold relation.....the awkwardness was clear on her face...she was trying to keep her calm out side...plastering a fake smile.

Geet was pissed off by the silent insult ...she had behaved in front of Mr khaneja ...like she knows maan's every choice when he questioned her whether she is sure maan will like them or not...she was confident enough saying she knows maan very well....at that time she didn't have any idea maan can do this kind of things....

She almost didn't touch her food...as she had lost the appetite...

Maan wanted to hurt her as she did before coming here ......but soon he understood that he has done too much .....he was not aware about the conversation between geet and Mr khaneja at the time of ordering the dishes. in his absense....so he didn't understand he had insulted her to this extent .....

She completely pulled her hands away and kept herself busy with the business discussion ...she was trying her best to convince Mr khaneja ...as she wanted to end the trip as soon as possible....she can show it outside that he cant hurt her ....but she cant fight with herself....things were getting tough more and more ...

He noticed her lifted her hand from the plate .....and food was untouched......he felt guilty as he knew its something to do with his behavior....checking Mr khaneja 's eyes busy with a document handed over by geet ....he pushed the glass of juice slowly towards her ..she noticed but pretended not to notice .... she didn't even look once to maan...

Maan touched her hand below the table....she pulled her hand away and kept it on the table....he nudged her leg...under the table....she pulled them away ...he was trying his best to draw her attention when geet deliberately avoided his eyes.... maan knew stubborn geet .....he knew she wont have a single piece of food ..her baby was starved too...

Maan gave in ....he pulled the Friuli-Venezia Giulia towards himself...and started having it ....requesting her to start by his eyes.. ...that only geet can notice...made a puppy face to please her....

She tried to ignore him ...but when he started taking large spoon full at a time she couldn't check herself .. she lowered her head hiding by her hand to conceal her face blushing hard...

She started having her food slowly....

Maan sighed breath of relief .....whispered ...batein manwana to koi tumse sikhe ...!!!!!! rolling his eyes..to which geet was silent.

Mr khaneja was very much surprised when he found maan having the dish ordered by geet ..

Maan grinned wide...he managed loudly saying on the 2nd thought ..i shouldn't waste food ...right Mr khaneja ?

Confused Mr khaneja nodded... yes right ....!!

The dinner was over ....and Mr khaneja was almost ready sell the land.....he asserted them...he will talk to his family members and confirm it finally tomorrow....

Coming back to the hotel they decided to buy the tickets of the day after tomorrow....wishing one another good night they went to sleep in their respective rooms....

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.thanx n love
reet
Edited by maanmeet8 - 15 years ago
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Wow.....like really WOW.....such a long part..thanks a lot

I really loved the entire update
My fav was the airport and plane scene...nice
then how maan was so concerned about geet not eacting and decided to eat...really love how he cares for her so much and his love never died even after all that happened,he silently trusts her...and stupid dadi and dev are getting him married to some pari...ewww....

please make him marry geet only...thanks
waiting for the next update

about the 150 pages thing,yes u have to open a new thread...to make things easier for your readers,you can put the link to this thread there.....congrats

bye..please update soon
Edited by desigurl953 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey hope u r fine this part was soo gud no maaneet close scenes plzz put them
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Posted: 15 years ago
one word fabulous update. U R THE BEST.....................👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
seems lyk maan ko chod k u hav started watchin saddi geet keenly, great description of hers, battling eyelids n stuff.

all i n all a mast update.
ur maneet behave so real

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