FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet.Part 48..pg190 - Page 25

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Posted: 15 years ago
Muskan... well written....you know wat now dayz am more edicted to ur FF..than geet serial..plz update the enxt part soon...only hope which makes me lively for two dayz
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi muski,

lovely update honey....!!!! 😛 maan hurts geet???😡 so mean of him...!!!! and that witch sasha ... why does she have to keep following maan everywhere?? but i liked how both sasha and maan were speechless looking at geet dress so elegantly and beautifully!!!!!!

and the precap... omg maan fires geet...!!!! will he be able to stay away from her??? 😉

thanks for the PM sweetheart...!!! and keep updating...!!!! 😊

Soumya
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: 1kaarzoo

<font color="#ff3399">maan khuran needs to be whacked!!! am gonna do tht now.......... oye it was 21/2 years na.......... did i miss sum part ???? yayyy pinnning wall session......lol make sure he's paid bak 4r hurting her !!!!</font>

<font color="#ff3399">nice update!!! awaiting next part............</font>


Yaar it is 3 1/2 yr now...
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Muskaan,

Lovely update but I have one doubt .. Does Maan know that he was married once again????? or he forgot about it???
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: febinyusuff

Hey Muskaan,

Lovely update but I have one doubt .. Does Maan know that he was married once again????? or he forgot about it???

nothing happening around him to remind him about it..
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Great narration. Thank god that the meeting was not a mess only the dinner part was messy. When will Maan wake up from his false sleep and realize Geet is his wife. Or is it that he can't accept the fact that someone else is trying o take his priya's place in his heart is making him harsh towards Geet? anyways please update the next part fast
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Posted: 15 years ago

geet goes back home ..wondering..maan bhi na puri baat bhina jane naraz hojathe hain..

Part 16

maan leaves early to office..
geet looks for him..asks the maid...shab jaldi chalengai kya?
geet - itna bhi kya gussa?

geet rushes to office..looking for maan...she pushes open conference room door..
geet - aap yanha hai..ek min..she goes out makes a call and then walks in ...
maan - wat..!!! geet!! yah kya tarekha hain?
geet - walks inside..towards him..
mana ki aap kal ki baat kay liya naraz hain..
mana meri galthi nahi thi..
she is still walking close to maan..maan has not moved from his place
he is just wondering wat is she saying..geet is really close to maan now
maan can feel her breath..and he is falling into her eyes..
geet says - yah kya baat hain..aap khna ka gussa khna nikalathe hain..?
maan wonders if she talking about firing her..
geet - aache chalo..sorry..abh to kuch kha loo..
khal bhi dinner kyia bina chalegayetha..
then she asks breakfast kiya?
with her eyes questioning..at such close approxcimity..
his head just turned left and right saying a no..nahi na..geet says
she holds his hand drags him to the couch and makes him sit..
maan shouts GEET...
there is a knock at the door.. she tells boy to keep the food on the table next
to couch.. maan is standing furious..after the boy leaves
geet sits on her knees..on the floor..and pulls maan down
opens the food and serves it on the plate..
geet tells maan to have his breakfast properly..nahin to u will get head ache..
maan is speechless..and not sure wat to do or say..he starts eating..quitely
sasha walks in..suprised to see the sight of maan eating and geet sitting next to him
sasha - Mk geet ka termination letter. aap ka sign chaiya tha
maan gets worried..how will geet react to that..he just closes his eyes..and thinks,,
sasha ko bhi abhi yeh kehna tha..?
geet gets up in anger..knotting her dupatta..walks to sasha snatches the letter..
and looks at maan..he could make out she wanted sasha to leave..
maan - ok..aur kuch kaam tha??
sasha - nahi MK and leaves
geet keeps the letter on the table..maan was about to take the letter..she stares and says
finish ur food first..after he is through ..geet and maan get up togather..they
keep looking at each other..geet slowly moves her thump to tip of his lips
to wipe off the crumbs..maan holds her hand..
geet - nahi nahi..woh!! crumbs ..
maan comes back to senses.. wondering wat was he doing all this while..
he get very angry..snaps his hand back..
takes the letter and signs and gives to her...
geet - pur maan ...meri koi galthi nahi thi..
maan - every thing is wrong..now because of u..i will lose the deal..
the phone rings..maan picks his call..
Mr. sharma - I am realy very sorry maan
maan - no actually..(geet knowing it is Mr.sharma's call shuts maans mouth with her hand)
maan feels those soft fingers on his lips..and looks at geet..
geet - nodes her head and her eyes convey him to pretend as if he knows wat happened..
maan just follows her eyes..
Mr.sharma - actually i had a sudden trip lined up so..had to rush..luckely geet was there
early..so we discussed with her..she updated us with the new terms..
we even tried calling you..
maan - umm
..(since geet fingers were closing his mouth)
Mr.Sharma - we are ok with new terms 9a & 9b..and we have added c from our side..
so we where waiting for ur response
geet lets go his mouth..and quickly shows the file with highlighting those parts..
maan is looking at her..and still feeling those warmth on his lips..
geets eyes tell him to look at the highlighted part.. he snaps out and
then he looks at part 9c..
Maan - ummh..yes mr. sharma we are ok with it..thanxs
after the call maan looks at geet..she was arranging the files..
she turns and about to leave..maan holds her hand..
geet looks at him innocently..
maan - woh woh.. I am ..muth jaaoo please..
geet - ji ..
Maan - nahin woh! i am sorry about last night..
geet is shocked to see maan saying sorry..ji ji teek hain..main jaaoo..
maan - ummh
geet - main jaaoo...

maan - geet jaaoo..kya bar bar pooch rahi ho
geet - aap mera haat chodengi to jaaooghi na..
maan just leaves her hand turns around..
geet smiles and walks out...


precap
maan and geet dinner at mansion
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hope u enjoyed the update..thanxs for all ur messages

love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Nice- this Geet is soo much sensible thn our Geet in the show.

comn hve some more passionate scenes.. waiting for the next one .
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Posted: 15 years ago
Geet and Maan coming closer. Maan still has no idea she is his wife. What did he think, the girl he married just vanished in to thin air. Arrogant Man. I can't wait for his realisation.

Please continue soon. i love this fanfic.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awsome. Plsss update soon. Dying to read futher.

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