FF*Simply love*(Maaneet)pt27at pg14(note at pg153

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

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Posted: 15 years ago

#211

nice update.loved it.
loved scene between maaneet.
continue soon.

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Nadia

@naddiya26

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Posted: 15 years ago

#212

Originally posted by: sweet cherry
like it that was bloody fantastic
AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING

PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ CONTINUE SOOOOOOOOOON

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😳 thanks thanks thanks

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Nadia

@naddiya26

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Posted: 15 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: Innocent02
<font color="#ff3399">nice update👍🏼 but does Geet know he loves her?
Did he confess?
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yup he did confess in last part while sleeping . Geet know that he love her . he does not 😉

Originally posted by: anufa
awsum!!!!

loved iT!!!

update sooN!!!!

thx

Edited by naddiya26 - 15 years ago

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Aleena

@cute-aly

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Posted: 15 years ago

#214

hey naddiya

great yaar kya pic fit ki he

Maan :just let her in his arms cage (geet was between both of his arms)she took it from his hand made a ball placed it on slab & try to roll it with pin roller Maan placed his hand on her's.... he was enjoying the scent smell and wet hairs .Geet try to push him back but he was not moving he placed his chin on her shoulder look her beautiful hands working.
Geet: see it is done she placed it in plate
Maan: snatch plate dekha how i made ? tum bhi kuch seek loo Geet
Geet: Maan aap bikul chota sa bacha hain

geet ka duppate se maan ka face clean karna 🤗

Geet: hold his hand gave a strange look " can i be your sectary again please " she made such a face that he could not say no👏👏👏👏👏

Geet: bilkul he DD hain
Maan: DD pinky wala ya tumhara wala? hmmmm
Geet blushed woh .....

Maan: who was standing behind her fixing his tie ..open her clip "leave your hairs open it look better"
HAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY MAR SUTYA G
Maan Dadi can we go now
Dadi yes but Geet one thing is missing beta
Geet:kya dadi ma?
Dadi: followed her a small box of (sindoor) ask him to place it
Geet open it and bring her hand in front of Maan he place a small pinch in her maang he saw her eyes was closed & a tear drop from her eyelid he quickly catch it .

aur kitna lamba comment karon yaar i think abhi k liye itnaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa kafi ho ga

all in all

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sravani899

@sravani899

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Posted: 15 years ago

#215

omg naddiya u r amazing dear

really nice update dear

i was just enjoying every line of u dear

really nice and baby part is too cute

baby saying her mama papa that she is hungry really nice

and maan at kitchen is too good dear

and every sceen of maan and geet i enjoyed esp the 1 sec sceen

on the whole the update is

with love

sravs

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Aleena

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Posted: 15 years ago

#216

Originally posted by: naddiya26

OH you made me wait alot i thought i lost a reader when i did not find your comments at 3 updated glad you liked it . thanks for tell me what parts you like

dont worry dear esa ho hi nahi sakta
1st k maneet ki ff ho ya serial chora hi nahi jata.jitna zyada ho utna kum lagta he
2nd your ff and you efforts for this ff 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

so dont take tension yeh reader kahen nahi jati jahan maneet wahan main😉

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suji

@suji01

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Posted: 15 years ago

#217

awesome part dear. the best part was the picture which matched your update very much

continue soon😛

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Nadia

@naddiya26

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Posted: 15 years ago

#218

Originally posted by: Ayesha_MSK
<font color="#ff0066">YAYYY 😃 You included the baby part ⭐️
Awww Maan is such a sweet father and I LOVE how you integrated the photos in your FF 👏
I also love how Geet keeps bossing Maan around and telling him to hurry 😆 😆 😆 Especially this bit:
<font size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Geet: picked up a spoon and fork started hitting the table top "mujhe ko bhook lagi ha jaldi kara "</font>
The kiss was TOTALLY unexpected but sweet 😳
Loved this update 😊 Now please hurry and give us the next one 😉

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thx dear for commenting........i am happy i made you smile & you liked it

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Nadia

@naddiya26

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Posted: 15 years ago

#219

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1
nice update.loved it.
loved scene between maaneet.
continue soon.

thx dear

Originally posted by: maanmeet8
<font color="#ff3399" size="3">Geet: picked up a spoon and fork started hitting the table top "mujhe ko bhook lagi ha jaldi kara "
Maan: trun back in anger stare at her " kar to raha hoon"</font>

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isse kehte hai boss.....!

lol...jaru ke ghulaam yeh banke rahega....!~

fantastic update...

plz update soon n pm me plz..