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Posted: 15 years ago
i like it
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago

soumya 🤗🤗

wow suspence part ha 👏
really loved it alot 👏👏
for this it is sure that mk is not mk 😉
how naughty he turned out wow😆☺️
maan wants geet to stay with him that too in front of his eyes so he is making all these things wow kitna possessive hai hamara maan 😳☺️ really too good soumya😳
geet is irritated by maan 😆 challo geet aadat dal lo maan ki aadato ka😆
imagining she is strangling maan singh khurana's neck 🤣🤣🤣 geet geet control ur frustration i know u cant withstand ur anger but control yaar😆😆
loved this part alot soumya❤️☺️
maan is reading geet ki janam patri yaar🤣🤣
or he is pretending to read but file contains geet photos😉🤣🤣
but soumya i read the topic that maan was hurt his right hand shoulder😭 and doctor adviced him to rest but he is still shooting yaar😲 how determined guruji yaar really hopiing that he will get well soon😃
really enjoyed and loved it though it is small update but full of suspence😊
really loved it alot❤️😳
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Edited by sravani899 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Oh dear!

Geet's bad dream was indeed bad. Wish Maan could share her pain. I love the cat-fights between Sasha and NT.
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Posted: 15 years ago
hahaha i wonder wat maan is staring at .. ? and by the way i love this line by geet ""yeh insaan sach mein pagal hai. Kabhi kabhi ghoor ghoor kar dekhta hai, kabhi dekhta hi nahi. Mujhe tuo lagta hai, inke na dekhne se zyaada behtar hai ki yeh mujhe ghoor ghoor dekhe.kam se kam dekh tuo leta tha" you are a genius for sure 😉 😉 ...soo i love maans reverse psychology.. and oh god.. lol u have soo many mysteries happening at the same time.. geets message... dadddiii phones calls.. i can't wait to read next update to figure out wats happening!!!
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Why do you want to reserve your comments. I would love to read your comments. They are very lively. Please post your comment
Jaya
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG!

Maan being so flirty and sweet?! That seems so unimaginable! I was guessing all along that Geet's gonna confide in Pinky.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: deejagi



Why do you want to reserve your comments. I would love to read your comments. They are very lively. Please post your comment
Jaya

hai deejagi
well time to lagta hai na comments type karne keliye isliye
aur mein fast type nahi karti isliye pehle reserve karle baad mein apni puri comments type karti hoon😆
hope u understand me
well i update it😳
hai jaya
with love
sravs
Edited by sravani899 - 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sravani899

hai deejagi

well time to lagta hai na comments type karne keliye isliye
aur mein fast type nahi karti isliye pehle reserve karle baad mein apni puri comments type karti hoon😆
hope u understand me
well i update it😳
hai jaya
with love
sravs



Yeah read your comments. They are as cute as they can be. Love them.
Jaya

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Posted: 15 years ago
Aw, this confession update was really heart-touching! Geet finally seems to have realised that Maan holds ahuge place in her life. A place of great importance. Wonder wen'll she confess to Maan.
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Posted: 15 years ago
alrite people, this update should end the suspense about the file maan was looking at and the message geet got....!!!!

here we go- part 17- A surprise dinner


Part 17: Surprise Dinner

Khurana Mansion: Daadi is furious that maan will not shift back to the mansion despite asking him again and again. She decides to have dinner with him in the outhouse itself hoping he would atleast melt then.

Back in the office: Geet could not believe what she just saw. She drops the file immediately and moves back. She looks up at maan questioningly who looks at her very composed. She decides to leave.

"geet mera kaam ab tak complete nahi hua" he says picking up the file.

"main jaungi" says geet almost opening the door to walk out but maan pulls her in and closes the door.

"geet kya hua?" he asks concerned.

"aapne jaan bhujh ke woh land ke papers padh rahe the na? mujhe nahi pata ki aapko mujhe dard dene mein itni khushi milti hai."

Maan moves away angrily from her and responds in a low angry tone, "geet, tumhari aane se pehle hi main woh papers padh raha tha. Isiliye maine tumhe andar nahi bulaya. Lekin tum khud yaha ayi thi.aur rahi baat tumhe dard dena ka geet, tuo main tumhe batadu ki maine woh land phir se tumhare naam pe transfer karna chahta tha. Lekin ab nahi karunga.kyunki tumhe dard dene mein hi mujhe khushi hai."

Saying so, he tears the papers and angrily leaves from there. He was upset that she misunderstood him and thought that he could hurt her intentionally. Geet was standing there clueless. She realizes she went a little too far today. She felt irritated that she jumped to conclusions without trying to understand what maan was doing with those papers.

He gets into his car but realizes it is pretty late for geet to go home. But he also knows that geet will not come with him. He simply calls the watchman and asks him to get a cab for geet. He drives out of the office premises and parks to the side so that geet does not see his car.

She runs out of the office to apologize to maan but finds him gone. The watchman tells her that there is a cab outside so she can go home. Geet goes to the cab-driver and tells him to take her to an address other than pinky's, keeping the message in mind. Maan see her get into the car and starts his car to follow her but stops again seeing daadi calling him. "haan daadi, ghar, bees minute mein pahoonch jaunga."

"maan aapko hume outhouse mein milna hai. Hum dinner wahi karenge."

"kya, outhouse mein?par daadi…"

"see you maan-In your outhouse."

Maan is confused but daadi has a victorious smile on her face. "I am loving this..!" she says and walks to the outhouse.

She enters the outhouse and asks the maids to set everything right in the living area and the kitchen. She moves around the house and sees pictures of geet all over his bed and couch in the bedroom. She simply laughs and puts them all neatly under his pillow. She hears the watchman talk to someone and quickly walks out.

"aah, here's the surprise maan. You might or might not like it" and goes to greet geet. Geet is little uncomfortable and smiles faintly. She was not ready for this-not atleast after fighting with maan. Daadi leads her in and asks her to be seated. She notices the discomfort on geet's face and tries to lighten the moment.

"aapke DD nahi aaya?mujhe laga aap maan ke saath ayenge."

"nahi maa, woh actually unhe koi kaam tha tuo main aagayi."

"koi nahi. Aur batao. Kaha rehte hai aap?" and geet starts describing about where she stays and talks about pinky and her dad. She starts blabbering and daadi is enjoying her company. Geet is so into her talking that she does not even hear the sound of maan's car in the parkway. Maan gets out of the car frustrated for two reasons-first, because geet misunderstood him and second, because daadi will never stop torturing him to come back to the mansion.

He wished to stay alone for some time but daadi would not agree. He walks into the outhouse and pushes the door open only to find geet and daadi sitting there. He walks in slowly. He thinks he must be hallucinating about geet sitting there. But when he sees daadi also look in geet's direction and smile he realizes it is no dream. While on the other hand, geet looks at him with mouth wide open. She wanted to run away from there and never look back. She hated the situation she was in.

Maan slowly goes and kisses his daadi on the forehead and sits beside her. He turns to her and expects her to say something. Daadi understands it and responds, "maan humne aaj geet ko dinner pe bulaya."

Maan responds carelessly staring at geet, "woh dikh raha hai daadima." Geet looks around the living room tensed.

will be back with part 18 soon......!!!!!!

soumya

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