Your arms are my castle, maan. - Page 2

Originally posted by: sweet-and-cute

tum toh bohot ee aachhi tareke se lihk ti hoo...i must say its beautiful....

Originally posted by: rushtrip

fantastic, brilliant..awesome...

the inner struggle portrayed so well...well written...
the words are effective,evocative and emotional

he did see her tears even in the rain no? that is how Geet affects Maan
tremendous

Originally posted by: uzmakhan

not much of a writer?? are u kiddin me??!!

this is beautifullly writtteen!! very very very well done!

and ur subject line is so analysistic!!! soo much meanin to it!

buh the way u described the whole scene is simply amazing---the rush of emotions and confusion is realli nicely described!

do write often gurl!

Originally posted by: mysterygurl1427

ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
not much of a writer????😆😆😆😆 are u sure about that?????? From what i read it felt as if i was reading some professional piece of work!! U wrote both of their POV's soooooooo well!!! I loved it!!! It made sense....and it felt as though i was seein the scene again, but this time i heard their hearts.....i felt like i was hearing Geet's feelins and how she felt protected in Maan's arms!! Superb writing yaar!!! Really enjoyed this piece of writing!!! 😳
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i likey!!! thanks for sharing ⭐️

oh...thanks so much so nice of u say it ^_^

i just wanted to share what i thought maneet may have been going though...acutally i wanted to share what i wanted maan n geet to feel😆