Self-dialogue(really!?) 14 july..

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey guys!!

I'm so very sorry for the delay..my best friend had come in the country for some work and so we ended up having dinner together..didn't see the epi..I came back and saw it(he had to go somewhere urgently too) so here it is...

Maan(brain)- Baap re Baap...aaj toh MSK ne kya kya kar diya..Seriously..bohot zaada ho gaya...what with my show-stopping bhangra moves and heart-stopping mirchis..

Maan(heart)- 😆 😆 See, You're not that bad...or as Geet said "dusht Danav" 😆

Maan(brain)- yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai??

MAan(heart)- How many times do I have to repeat myself.. You live for that girl. She has become your universe.

Maan(brain)- No NO NO NO.

He goes sits in the car
Sees, Geet laughing

Maan(heart)- tumhaari har adaa...waah waah..maashallah..!! 👏 kitni pyaari hasi

Maan(brain)- she's laughing at ME?!

Maan asks why, Geet responds with pointing downwards..

Maan(heart)- oh man! I love her cute pointing!! Point at me too!! 😆 😳

Maan(brain)- Why are you my heart? Dumbo

He gets out and sees there are no tires.

MAan(heart)-now who's "dumbo" dumbo.. 😆

MAan(brain)- 😲
What will we do now??

Maan(heart)- Seriously...Who are you and what have you done with MAan's brain?!

Geet suggests to walk, baarish shuru

Maan(brain)- alert alert!! hate rain hormone...back in car

MAan(heart)- but..oh well,fine, at least I can see her dancing..aww..how adorable.. 😛 😛

MAan(brain)-...... 😳

Maan(heart)- hahahaha...I had no idea you could go x-rated..seriously!?

Maan(brain)- I can't help it. Its hormones..They were supposed to be hate rain hormones..but something else has been released...😳

Maan(heart)- I do not care. Please, just turn off the wipers..they aren't helping at all and are obstructing our view

Maan(brain)- Ughh..I have a better idea...

Gets out in the rain...

Maan goes upto Geet and sees her face fall, and eyes filled with tears..

MAan(heart)- she hates me...😭
Maan(brain)- stop being so emotional please..melodrama queen! uff...look,she's sad about something

MAan(brain and heart)- bhangra karein? 😆 😉

Maan asks Geet what the problem is..In response, Geet hugs him!

Maan(brain and heart)- 😲

Maan(brain)- ohh..ohh..my..umm..hello..are you there??Help me control please.

Maan(heart)- oops..sorry..it was instinct..no it wasn't..It wasn't me this time. It was reflex..You hugged her back on reflex!! 👏 Yeah, defnitely reflex Brainy, cuz I had stopped beating the instant she came in contact with me.

Maan(brain)- aaj kal no one even ASKS me anything!

MAan(brain)- thik hai! I won't let hands hug her back

MAan(heart)- oh cmon dont..please..just please..I know you're strong but..she needs comfort. Tell me- won't you protect her? she is SAD brainy..SAD.. our Geet is CRYING andHUGGING us. she is so close to me right now...I can feel her hurt. It makes me hurt too

MAan(brain)- I give up. Just this once.

MAan hugs Geet

Maan(brain and heart)- Oh my..it feels like I've come home

Maan(soul)- Hello guys!! I'm alive and happy now.. I have met my mate for life and the rest of eternity!!

MAan(heart and brain)- Shush.. Chup and let us live

Geet suddenly moves away,realizing what she had done(umm..hugged the hottest guy ever!!) and then runs away home

Maan(heart, brain and soul)- GEET..(with hands extended)
😭 😭 😭

(beautiful acting)

Maan in shower

Maan(brain)- aaj kaunsa gaana gaayein?
MAan(heart)- maahi ve maahi maahi ve..

MAan(brain)- I hate you for this. Now I will think of her in the shower, while I'm bathing

(looked so hot, I died on the spot.oo,that rhymed 😆 )

Maan(heart)- DD DD DD..yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai..hahaha..ab samajh aaya?

Maan(brain)- Ignoring you now!

Maan lost in Geet's thoughts..flashbacks

MAan(heart-)- ohh,this one was nice.. Aww, she bandaged our hand.. You remembered that..but tab toh

Maan(brain)- oops..main zaada peechhe chala gaya na..but ab everything is coming back

Maan(brain)- Signalling DEV here,saying something
Dev- blah blah blah blah...secretary

Maan(heart and brain)- 😲 😳 hmm?

Maan comes back to reality

Maan(brain)- Oh no..Mr Chopra is waiting...
TIME!!I'm LATE

Maan at office

Geet calls MAan, reminds him of the meeting

Maan(heart)- my dil goes..

MAan(brain)- abbe oie.. my dil goes..You shouldn't say that..cuz the song is on you! uff..

MAan(heart)- Fine..sorry..go ahead,sing!
Maan(brain)- too busy in memories..oh lord, why cannot I control myself!?

MAan(heart)- no answer...

MAan crashes into Geet

Maan(heart)- waah waah meri jaan 👏 👏 aaj toh naye style ki salwaar kameez..main bhi blue hoon..how shweet...

Maan(brain)- weird how we are both blue blue.. But hey, it's a common colour.. She looks so beautiful though

Maan(heart)- 😲 😲 kya!? yeh mere kaan kya sun rahe hain??! 😲 😲

MAan(brain)- Mind your own business and remember to beat please

That's it guys!!

let me know how u feel..

I'm kinda apprehensive seeing him lose control..cuz..he will be vulnerable and i hope he won't be heartbroken... 😭 😭

love

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Posted: 15 years ago
#2
awn man!! i love these convos ... you're so good at this!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#3
excellent post ....👏
now soul bhe add hugye hai convo mai nice 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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haha...thanks guys for liking!!

maine socha..yeh dono toh dost hone hi waale hain..toh convo thodi interesting kar doon..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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great as always; yu've managed to capture the tussle between heart and brain that GC is portraying s well
GC really manages to show with his innocent eyes that this is Maans first love.
I'm soooooooooooo scared about what is going to happen
Keep it up, brain and heart-- try working together for a bit!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#6
out standing convo, loved it totally.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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omg just like b4 i wz w8ng for ur post .
thank you very much for posting
its wondeful
ur too good

anu

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Posted: 15 years ago
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mindblowing..brain numbing..heart bursting..good...
and it is salve to the soul..it did make an appearance today...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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LOVED IT .. thanks for the pm 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Loved todays dlgs, especially the soul part!! 🤗

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