A lifetime of Gratitude-ff maneet updt-149,154 - Page 99

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Posted: 15 years ago
@ lil-desi-goddes- HEy! thanks for liking!! yeah...But it's not enough..won't say more..next update coming soon!!

@platy01- aw,thanks honey!

@Khushi- aww...thanks a lot!! well..I dunno from where..the best part is that you guys like those ideas!! Thanks a lot for the wonderful comments!!

@ranjnanarang- hey! welcome!! I'm so glad you thought my ff was worth reading! Sure honey, will add you to my list

@sweet_charmed- thanks a lot jaan! Yeah..she was..in flashback..Thanks to Mehek :)

@ sumi- Aw..thanks! Geet does love MAan..I hope that is clear from the updates- want me to show her deepening and coming to terms with them and then telling Maan?

@muski- aww..you're most welcome honey!!
I did tell you..:( have posted it here..hehe..just after the update..love u!

@Noor- thanks a lot! Didn't you get the PM?

@ anu- aww...thanks darling! glad you liked it..I know..poor both of them..but they're together right...that's what matters.. :D ;) will make you happy soon!

@ amritsar007- hey! what's your name? :) glad you liked the update!

@ rituka- hey! thanks! Will do asap!

@Juliel-thankie!! very soon!!

@ reva- thanks a lot darling!! Love u!

@Miss-riz- hey! thanks! Sure will update v soon!!

@desigurl- hey! what's your name? Thanks a lot honey! will update soon..

@sireesha- thanks! Will continue v soon!

@neeraja- meri jaan- faint hone ke liye kuchh hona bhi toh chahiye..aw.w.I won't make it horror..LOL

@sweet cherry- thanks honey!! will continue soon!!

@koollio- aww,thanks darling! if you have any ideas..please please let me know!

@ 123pritha- aw.w.I hope you wont get bored..will update soon..promish! they will be together, too!

@lallulal- hehe,thanks! waise toh anything can bring them together..bilkul magnets hain!

@sweetcherry96- welcome welcome!! I hope you like it enough to stay! will pm you for the next update!!

@ dhara- thanks honey!!

@ tishu- aww,thanks a lot!! I hope you like th next update too!

@ neeraja- I m soo sorry..BTW, will send u loong pm! just u n me..hehe ;) oh god..that sounds so haha..



Guys update coming soon!!

In like an hour!!
Please please send in any suggestions you have!! or if you want me to add some new characters etc..I thought of concentrating on developing Geet's realisation of her feelings, and MAan trying to woo her..really woo her to make her realise he loves her..like silly sweet stuff..hehe..let me know how you feel about that!

MEhek won't come back but MAneet will be together hopefully very soon! But i don't want it to seem rushed isliye they r taking their own sweet time!!

Love you all for reading! and thanks for all the comments..I hate being so lazy that I don't reply back but please please, don't feel that I don't read them..I love reading all that you guys say at night on my iphone..hehe

Welcome to all the new readers!! Glad you found my ff, worth commenting on!

Love to all!
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Posted: 15 years ago
geet, why can't mehek come back??

as geet and maan's daughter........
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Posted: 15 years ago
geet ... wants to see maan wooing geet 😃😃😃😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
i need mehek to come back to geet's life
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Posted: 15 years ago
Guys...MEhek is not alive..she was the SOUl of MEhek who had come to help Maneet. I promise I have something great planned!!

Okay, so here is the next update

Maaneet look at each other

MAan- Geet..kya tumhe?

Geet- Maan..Mehek, I had a dream about my baby..

MAan- Yes I did too..what did you see?

Geet- I saw ane xotic beach- you, me, dadi and Mehek..and then it changed, Mehek was an angel and she talked to me..told me that she's happy...

Geet trailed off, knowing she sounded crazy

Maan looked confused

Maan- Geet..I know what dream you're talking about- there was ice-cream in it, right?

Geet just looked at him

Maan- I have had that dream...before...
uhm..anyways, even I dreamt of Mehek- she was wearing a purple frock...my chhoti pari- bilkul mom pe gayi hai apni

Geet's eyes filled with tears, which Maan refused to let fall from her lashes

Maan- No Geet. Ab toh Mehek ne bhi keh diya hai- she's happy..and she will be there with you always..toh phir?

Geet- Maan..Can you please hold me tonight? Please..

Maan- you don't even have to ask

They slept in each others' arms

Maan's last thought was that no matter what happens, no matter what is planned for them, he will always be there to hold Geet..even if she is worried about him

HE thought about what Mehek had said

Mehek- Papa..I miss you..but you are too busy thinking about mummy all the time!

MAan- no, princess..your mom is so unhappy..I need to make her happy

Mehek- papa, I wish we could be in this plan together...She really does love you..but she just needs a little push..

You give the physical- I'll give the divine..what say?

Maan- Mehek..HAHAHA..my smart beautiful girl..

Mehek- Papa- have patience with her. She feels very guilty..That's why I had to come to her to help her heal..
But you take care- I will always be looking out for you, on 'Baba's commands

MAan had woken up to that line- of making the connection between Babaji and the Baba they had met a couple of days ago and given a lift to

He smiled into Geet's hair and slept off

MAan woke up a man with a plan.
Maan- I will give her time. Till then, I will show her, all that I feel for her. This time I won't hide anything

Geet woke up to Masala chai and bread pakodas

Geet- MAan...yeh sab?

Maan- Good morning Geet! tumhare liye chai- for the head ache I'm sure you have got due to crying.

Geet did have a bad head ache and so she simply sipped her tea

She was about to ask for biscuits, when there was a bell

Maan went and came back with her favorite cookies

Geet- thanks Maan..

She felt confused

Geet- yeh Maan ko aaj kya ho gaya?

MAan was folding all clothes very neatly and putting them in their bag

Geet- hum waapis jaa rahe hain?

MAan- haan..kyun..you want to stay for a longer time?

Geet- uhm..haan..woh..nahi...main woh...

MAan- ..bolo Geet..

Geet- uhm..Maan we haven't been on the ice yet..

MAan rolled his eyes and decided to let go of the fact

Maan- kahan jaana hai?

Geet- Rohtang ka naam toh suna hoga?

MAan- Geet..that would be impossible..because road blocked hogi wahan ki..Will take you to a place before that?

Geet- uhm..will there be snow??

HEr eyes lit up like a child's and Maan smiled back

Maan- whatever you want dear wife!

He made arrangements, and then they had their breakfast together

They spent a real good time having fun, on the ice- scooter, on the sleigh ( the normal guys!) Looking super-hawt!!

They had a light lunch and then came back to the hotel

Maan- Geet...Ek baat batao..

Geet- hmm

Maan- are you tired?

Geet- nope..what do you have in mind?

Maan- nothing much..the gym is closed and the only thing I can see where I can work out a little bit is the swing park...so, do you want to come?

Geet hid a smile and said okay

So, there was Maan and Geet playing in the swing park..

Geet sat down on a swing, and started swinging, while Maan did his pull ups on thingy( guys..i hope you all know what i'm talking about- can't get the name right now!)

Geet looked at his muscles for a while- he loved his working out didn't he?

Geet- oh my..he's so strong..uff..pata nahi- completely perfect this guy is..and he loves me?!

She decided to feel the wind around her and so just closed her eyes and held on to the swing

MAan DID love working out - it gave him a sense of being in control- particularly when thoughts of Geet distracted him throughout the day and most of the night...

Even now, he saw her through the corner of his eyes,
enjoying herself in such a small thing- just being on the swing gave her such happiness..

HE clicked pictures and made a movie of Geet swinging..She looked so happy

Geet thought back to the past few days- thought of how MAan had helped her cope with their loss, how he had come to Manali for her and made her feel so amazingly good..
She smiled as she thought of him in the shower, his expressions, his beautiful intense eyes...

Somebody was pushing her,

Geet opened her eyes and felt Maan giving her swing a push..

Geet- woieee.e....MAan...Araam se...main tedhi jaa rahi hoon!!

Maan laughed- Sahi toh hai..you're anyways so tedha...chalega!!

Geet- aaahggg....Hmph..stop it...

She stopped the swing and got down...your turn!

MAan looked at her in shock...

Maan- my turn> I won't fit here Geet

Geet- Darr gaye, MR Maan Singh Khurana..hahahaha

MAan put his hands on his hips

Maan- Achha...tumhe lagta hai main darr gaya...hmph...

HE sat down- barely on the swing- his upper body was pretty difficult to fix, nevertheless he sat down and the swing gave a very loud creak

Geet- tut tut..Maan..you should watch what you eat..Itna Italian-- dikh raha hai is awaaz mein hi

MAan glared at her and told her to get out of the way..

She did and he started swinging..

Geet's heart melted at the sight of Maan's closed eyes, his hair reflecting the sun-light, his strong arms holding the chain so that he doesn't pop out of his tight position- the sun glinting off his glittering chest

She clicked pictures of it..and made a movie as well...

LOL

Maan opened his eyes- he had gotten a really good idea

MAan- Geet...Come!

Geet went to him and he said

Maan- sit on my lap

Geet- ji? WHAT?

Maan- oh come on..it will be fun..

Geet- MAan..no

Maan pulled her so that she fell on him, and then started swinging again..Geet was thankful it was secluded...because she didn't know what she was capable of doing so near the MAAN of her dreams!!

Okay guys! that's it..sorry if you found it silly..but I AM only 19..hehe

LOVE to all
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Posted: 15 years ago
v slow net..will send PMs later..so sorry

xx
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Posted: 15 years ago
awwweee so sweet geet keep it up plz send me pm next time
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update. beautiful.
loved it.
continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Aww another sweet update!! Maan and Geet together on the swing...that would be fun to watch on tv lol...can't wait for the next part. Do cont.soon
Edited by kooliio - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Omg that was awesome
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue
it was too good

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