A lifetime of Gratitude-ff maneet updt-149,154 - Page 46

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Posted: 15 years ago
hey great part

lol i cant believe it, geet's punch that strong?! well obv she was trying to defend her husbands's room 😆 lol, 😉
well, so now finally they decided to sleep in one room, interesting
cant wait for more
do continue soon

Maheen xx
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Posted: 15 years ago
So sweet!!!! In each others arms!!! Great update as usual, bring on the morning!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely yaar they both are sleeping together
geet how can u hit maan
do continue
dear
that was fabulous
bye sumi
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Posted: 15 years ago

superb..............all i can say is the story is cute...........lovin every bit of it.........

pl add me to ur PM list
reva
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Posted: 15 years ago
geet darling... when is the next update coming????
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey geet. Thanks a lot for the wonderful ff. J read it all them today. Honestly they are awesome. Pls update soon as Im dying to read futher. Keep up wid ur excellent work dude.
And add me to ur pm lists thanks a lot. I would have added you on my own but i can't cuz my stupid phone is acting bit werid. So pls pls pls add me.
Love xxx
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Posted: 15 years ago
geet sweetie waiting for ur next update......
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Posted: 15 years ago
Please pm me everytime u update
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Posted: 15 years ago
superb...... waiting for the next update....
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Posted: 15 years ago
HEy guys!

thanks a lot for loving it...as promised..here is the update...

Morning-
Maan felt her beside her...her even breathing,he realized it was morning but wasn't quite ready to wake up.
With her, he would never be, but he slowly opened his eyes..breathed in her rose-scented hair, smiling a little at their fight about the roses in office and turned a little so that he could look at her

Beautiful translucent skin;that glowed these days; her rose-bud lips curved in a small smile which made Maan wonder what she was thinking about; a pert little nose that went in the air whenever she was annoyed about something- usually everything he did; and those eyes, that seemed to sear through her soul and asked questions all the time. But they did reveal answers too- something he wouldn't dare to tell Geet.

He brought a hand to his sore nose and remembered last night and his smile grew wider- she was coming to meet HIM..
He moved a little in his place and was immediately reprimanded

Geet(sleepily murmered)- Maan..hilna band kijiye...aisa lagta hai train mein kahin jaa rahi hoon
Maan tried to keep still and whispered in her ear.

MAan- Geet..
Geet-hmm..sone do na!
Maan- office nahi jaana. Mr Chopra ke saath meeting hai na...
Geet-uff! why don't you and Chopra go for a long drive..spend some time together. She laughed in her sleep

Maan- Oh dear...I think she's quite lost it...Kya baatein kar rahi hai...

Maan- Geet..uth jaao ab..nahi toh...

She immediately opens her eyes, rubs them sleepily like a child and complains

Geet- kya Maan...ek toh aap poori raat hilte rehte hain...I haven't had any sleep because of you..you never let me sleep.

Maan- Geet. Main hil raha tha. YOu kept dancing the night through and are now blaming me!

Geet- Maan. I'm not getting up.

Saying that , she hides her face into his chest...really not sleepy but not wanting to end the night just yet.

Maan- YOu know Geet..Life can never be boring with you.
What do you want to do? MAin aise leta rahoon kya?

Knock on the door

Vicky peeps through

Maan- Arre andar aa jao Vicky..
To himself( now let's see how she doesn't get up)

Vicky- Um.. Nahi bro..woh toh I had come from Simla early this morning so I wanted to meet you both..Koi nahi.. Bhabhi is sleeping..We'll catch up later.

Geet, hearing Vicky's voice immediately jumps up.

MAan- Geet..you woke up.

Geet- Hi Vicky..How was your trip!?
Vicky- Great Bhabhi..I will tell you what happened..Later...

Feeling embarrassed, he rushes out of the room..

Geet glares at MAan

Geet- Haha..very funny, isn't it. Go get ready! You are going to office..remember Mr Chopra! hmph..

Grumbling to herself, she is about to leave the room. Then remembers MAan's nose...

She goes to him, who's standing there looking at her, his hand on the bathroom door.

Maan- kya hua?
Geet- How is your nose now?
MAan- better...especially after...
Geet- Maan..shh

She starts to go...feeling shy,but MAan pulls her by her hand, closer to him,

MAan- c'mon Geet...It really made me feel better..I swear.
Geet- HM..MAan...Let me go..please
Maan- Nope. Do it first. You hit me..you are the one who has to make it all better..

Geet meets his eyes...finally, comes even closer, so that her lips are almost touching his nose-tip...
Then she moves down...to his lips...and slowly comes the closest she can without touching him...

Heart beating..he wants to close the distance between them in less than a heartbeat but he realises that it has taken Geet a long time to open up and trust him..he won't break it..or she'll be scared. So he stands still. Very still.

She whispers- Later..

and runs away before he could say or do anything...

Maan, smiling to himself, gets dressed and goes downstairs...wondering...when will 'later' be?

Geet could barely hear anything over he own heartbeat- She wondered what had gotten into her..but whatever it was..would get her into trouble later...
She decided not to think about it now and go talk to Vicky after getting ready.

She thought of him as a nice boy, but appearances can always be deceptive..

She decided to mull over her mysterious action with Maan in the shower..


To be continued...

love

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