A lifetime of Gratitude-ff maneet updt-149,154 - Page 21

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Posted: 15 years ago

omg i luv dadi ^_^ she's so cute..lol..

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Posted: 15 years ago
just read all the parts!
truly amazing!
continue soon!
plzzz add me 2 ur pm list!
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Posted: 15 years ago
geet just luv it thanks ...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: t_areeb

hheeeeheeee Dadi got a pic..just love her



I swearr!!
I could actually imagine it while I was writing..
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Posted: 15 years ago
@ Rinky- Glad you liked it love!

@ sweet scorpio(ur name?)- thanks for reading! Absolutely.thanks for liking it!!

@Summer_love(name?)- i know..me love her too!!

@ Saumya- Thankie!! I know she is simply amazing!! and her naughtiness is visible in her eyes, isn't it? Even in Maan's..sometimes..LOL.. Maine socha ab toh bed pe le hi jaau..HAHAHA

@ Anufa- thanks alot for liking it!!

@ 1karzoo- thanks a lot! I tried going into his mind..look at me..here again with a self-dialogue-ish dialogue..

@JULIEL- i love her!!thanks for reading darling!

@Prithvisanyo1- i'm happy you're liking it,thanks!

@sweet cherry- I love ur dp!! haha, thnks for liking it love! will update soon

@febinyusuff- I know!! mast waali 😃 glad you're liking it

@ muski- meri jaan!!! will continue soon..thanks!!

@ tes_v1- I still don't know your name..HAha..thanks for liking it!! if you have any other suggestions..do pm me!!
Even I miss mine..she's gone to the US for a month..and I am waiting for her to come back

@Ann- thanks! seems believable? or a little change in character?

@mittu- hahaha...i bet you would love to get your hands on that pic..HAHA..nah..i will leave it to your imagination..[ ;)]

@Phoenixgirl- Thanks for liking honey!

@ neha- thanks!!

@mayuri.vet- thanks!! next update..in about 5 minutes [ ;)]

@Zarasalvatore-thanks!! oo...I see damon on ur pic..Soo hot!!

@ t_areeb-hehe..Thanks!

Thanks everyone for liking it!! all of you! I love the encouragements and I would love suggestions, if you have any!! as per the change in track,tone,dialogues, expressions..more descriptions of something(someone..haha)

Just let me know!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
Updated-

Feeling content, they woke up in each others' arms an hour after Dadi left their room. Maan opened his eyes, saw his wife and closed them.
Geet opened her eyes, saw Maan, and closed them and then..
they opened their eyes together..widened with shock..and immediately let go of each other..
Maan let go with such force that he ended up on the floor

Maan- OWW!
Geet- Maan... 🤣 aap thik toh hain?
MAan glared at Geet laughing - Stop laughing. If you didn't take up the entire space on the bed, I wouldn't have been sleeping on the edge

Geet- Toh..I need space. I toss and turn at night

MAan- oh yeah you do. I faced that last night.

Both look away embarrased, but then look at each other, and

Maan- And anyways, you were having a bad dream so I had come into your room and you didn't let me go.

Geet- woh..wait. WHAT bad dream? I don't remember?

Maan- acchha..toh you're going to lie?! You had a nightmare and you were shivering like a fairy in a snowstorm..

Geet- Fairy? Maan...seriously. Stop using weird words.

MAan- tumhi se seekha hoon.

Geet- ab..now what did I do?

Maan- Stop it Geet. I comforted you during the night and you are giving me attitude for it now?

Geet- Okay. 1- thanks for it, though I don't remember having any dream last night. 2- I can give you as much attitude as I want!!

Maan- whoa...slow down sherni. It's only morning. I'm going to go get ready

Geet- toh go.. No one's stopping you

After he leaves and Geet gets out of bed, she smiles..almost sure that Maan was lying
MAan wondered why Geet was lying about her nightmare
Could it be she didn't really remember?

Running his hands through his tousled hair, he remembered the feelings he had gone through when she had cuddled closer in her sleep- that she had trusted him, even though she pretended to be angry.
Trust being the first sign of love, Maan Khurana realised that he and his wife, the silly girl from Hoshiarpur, might actually become friends.

Geet was downstairs by the time he finished getting ready..it being weekend and he didn't have anything to do today, except go to the office and pick up a few files, he decided they could go have lunch somewhere.

Downstairs, both Geet and Maan met each others' eyes. Then they realised Dadi was looking at them and smirking...

Maan- Dadima..kya hua? aap muskura kyun rahi hain?

Dadi- Why Maan..Now I don't have the right to even smile?

Maan- No, I mean..tell me..tell us why you were smiling so that..

Geet- so that even we can smile.

Maan- KYA?

Geet looks down embarrassed

Dadi- Maan. Geet ko daanta band kijiye.

Geet- Nahi Dadi..woh..

Dadi- Aur Geet. AAp Maan ki side lena band kijiye

Both feeling really awkward sit down, eat their breakfast and Maan akss Geet what she would like to do with her day

Geet- hm...I want to stay at home today

MAan thinks - why she always opposite to what I think. Fine, I will collect that file and go out for lunch.

Maan gets up to go.

Geet- Maan..where are you going?
Maan- office se file pick up karne.
Geet- oh,okay. London project wali file is in my cabin. Third drawer from the top.

MAan thanks her sarcastically. Kisses Dadi on her forehead, and starts to leave

Geet- MAan..When will you be back?
Maan- Geet. I don't believe in telling you each and every thing.
Dadi- Maan.. this is no way of talking to your wife. She must know..even before you do where you're going.Chaliye ab Geet ko kiss kijiye

MAan and Geet- 😲

Dadi- MAan..please..We don't have all day.

Maan goes to Geet and kisses her lightly on her forehead, leaving an imprint she was to carry for an entire day.

Geet shyly looks down and whispers- jaldi aana..We'll have lunch together

MAan smiles faintly and leaves..wishing he wasn't going anywhere...

Okay guys...sorry for the short part..

will update soon

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Posted: 15 years ago
bahut khoob....bahut bahut khoob....bahut bahut bahut khoob....
aaj aapne waqai meiN bahut bahut kamaal ka likha hai.......
mere paas sach-much alfaazoN ki kami hai....
Kya kahein.. ..that kiss was so perfect!!! After that wonderfull night!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey dis time it was awesome loved it as uaual but need to be a bit longer.. HATS OFF to u
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

bahut khoob....bahut bahut khoob....bahut bahut bahut khoob....
aaj aapne waqai meiN bahut bahut kamaal ka likha hai.......
mere paas sach-much alfaazoN ki kami hai....
Kya kahein.. ..that kiss was so perfect!!! After that wonderfull night!!



🤗 thanks!!

woh kya hai na...i believe in moving 1 step before CV's.. 😆

Before they show MAaneet in bed..I made them sleep with each other(uff..literally..not like that..yet...)

Glad you loved it!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
amazing update. too good.
dadi is so nice.
continue soon.

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