FF:Let's Dance Baby Pt.2 Pg.4 - Page 2

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Sorry for the late update. I have added the pm list in the first part of the Fan Fic, if you would like me to add your name, please let me know.

Let's Dance Baby

Part 2

Geet walked quickly to her room to change. She opened her closet, looking at her clothes she quickly picked out: a white off-shoulder woolen top, with light blue skinny jeans, Then walked into the bathroom.

She came out, her dark brown hair fell on her neck and shoulders. She looked in the mirror, applying eye linear and light pink colored lip-gloss. Being naturally beautiful she didn't need much make up. After giving herself a last look in the mirror, she picked up her bag and left her flat.

"Hello…hello..Dadi…hello", Maan yelled. His Dadi Ma had called him, but he was getting no signal in his new photo studio in London. He hurriedly came out, "Dadi….I can't here you…hello…" It was December, and due to bad weather the network was down.

He was still on the phone, when his eyes landed on her. Her hair began to blow from the wind as she walked, she tried to move the strands from her face. She didn't see him but he couldn't see anything else. He kept on looking at her from top to bottom.

He was about to cross the street and walk to her, but a truck came in front, when the truck left. She had disappeared. His eyes searched for her but failed to spot her.

That's the girl…the perfect bride, Maan thought. She wasn't the most beautiful girl, he had seen. But there was something else in her, that had captivated his eyes. He began to wonder who is she? And where will he find her? He again went inside, but kept on remembering her face in his mind over and over again. He could no longer look at other photos…when he already had found his perfect bride.

Her thoughts did not escape his: Who is she? How will I find her? Is she a model? Her face kept on coming back in front of his eyes? He had to find her…he must. Walking to the window, he looked out. There were no houses there, a gas-station, a small grocery shop, a dance studio and a mall. He thought: I saw her across the street, behind her was the gas station and the grocery store, so she must've gone into the studio or the mall, Maan made this assumption and went down again.

He first decided to go to the Studio, it was much smaller then the huge mall, so it would take him seconds to check if she was there.

Inside the studio: there were a line of guys, some sitting and some standing, as he moved his eyes to find the girl, he felt a small tap on his shoulder and turned around.

"Excuse me…you need to fill out this form before you audition" a Pinky said to Maan as she handed him a form. While, Maan took the form and looked at her confused, "Audition? I…" Before he could complete his sentence, the girl interrupted him again, "Just fill out the form, and give it to her before you give the audition.." She said and looked at the other girl, "she will take your audition." Maan followed her gaze and saw the girl he had been searching for.

He walked towards her, "Excuse me, I wanted to talk to you…" again before he could continue, Geet without even looking said, "Look…you will have to audition like everyone…I can't help you in any way.." and walked away.

Maan thought: I found her, but she is not even ready to listen to me. Actually, no one is even ready to listen to me but then again when do girl's listen…they always talk but never listen. But what is this, audition? dance? Form? But, I have to do all this to be able to have a talk with her.

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