Short Story-Take my breath away-Vik&Nags!Upd 7/26 - Page 103

Originally posted by: rushtrip

what not even one of the three girls interested anymore... in updates?

reserved.. Busy now.. will reply later

Lovely update BTW..

I slept early last night at 10: 30pm, and when I woke up, I was in a rush to get to work, so couldn't write anything...

I love the way the characters are described..the bouys' playfulness...Wonder what name Arjun has for Nupur now...and will he disclose the name he and his buddies hav given me? Kaan kheenchoongi Maan ke tab! 😆

Dadi seems in a mood...Chalo Nups tumhari jaan mein jaan aayi ya atak gayi kisi khaas ko dekh! I think Arjun will be singing "Yeh ladki hay Allah...Hay Hay Allah...Dulhan ki saheli resham ki dori...".

And the bride to be has to make her grand entry...Hmm, Maan ko sambhalo uske doston..BEchare ke upar kitni bijliyaain girne wali hai! Hmm, Maan ki maa se bhi milne jaana hoga baad mein aashirwad lene...

Originally posted by: -sann-

oo god,,uthale mujhe......ye bolne se sunne se pehle main behri kyun nehi ho gayi....😭

i broke my fast a few minutes ago...thts y i wasn't able to comment.....aur tum v na.....

oye sorry about the fast and all..to tum kya...sirf raat ko...comments karogi? do let me know how this works? i am not known to this...

btw i posted the update at 1 am and woke up at 8 to see if at least nupur had written something in terms of comments...on the update..but to my utter disappointment...mere saare gayab the...

anyway...hota hai...koi baat nahi i dont react like this usually...sorry for bursting out...

@Vrushali: hota hai...bade bade shehron mein eisi chhoti chhoti baatein hoti hai...😆

Maan's dil singing as seeing the Vermas coming out of their cars "Yeh kaun aaya roshan ho gayi mehfil jiske naam se...Yeh kaun aaya" 😆

My bro thinking in his head, seeing Maan "Yeh amla Jatt Punjabi ban gaya mera Jija" 🤣

i will need lot of help with the songs..when the singing and dancing happens..pls..give a list so i can play it in the scene..guys..

@ Vrushali I'm writing the songs:


Here's something so far...:

Lo chali main apne pota ki baraat leke (Dadi to Maan)- Hum Aapke Hain Kaun

Meri Chhaiya hai jo (Abs' parents to Dadi)- Hum Aapke Hain Kaun

Gal mitthi mitthi bol (all the boys) -Aisha

Main sasuraal nahin jaaongi (all the girls)- Chandni

Aaye re (Arjun singing looking at Nups)-Jashn

Sasural Genda phool (all girls at Abs)- Delhi 6

Mere saath aayegi toh Life (Vicky at Nargis)- Humraaz

Ek ladki ko dekha toh eisa laga (Maan to Abs)- Love Story 1948

Aaye ho meri zindagi (Abs to Maan)- raja Hindustani

Chham se woh aa jaye (Adi to Faz)- Dus

Originally posted by: Hot_Indo_Chilly

@ Vrushali I'm writing the songs:


Here's something so far...:

Lo chali main apne pota ki baraat leke (Dadi to Maan)- Hum Aapke Hain Kaun

Meri Chhaiya hai jo (Abs' parents to Dadi)- Hum Aapke Hain Kaun

Gal mitthi mitthi bol (all the boys) -Aisha

Main sasuraal nahin jaaongi (all the girls)- Chandni

Aaye re (Arjun singing looking at Nups)-Jashn

Sasural Genda phool (all girls at Abs)- Delhi 6

Mere saath aayegi toh Life (Vicky at Nargis)- Humraaz

Ek ladki ko dekha toh eisa laga (Maan to Abs)- Love Story 1948

Aaye ho meri zindagi (Abs to Maan)- raja Hindustani

Chham se woh aa jaye (Adi to Faz)- Dus

nice esp i like the one for arjun and nups, maan and abs vik and nags and faz and adi..

ha ha..will be fun...

Ok so here's the updated list with sequencing done. I don't know what songs to give Sasha & Tasha:
Lo chali main apne pota ki baraat leke (Dadi to Maan)- Hum Aapke Hain Kaun

Meri Chhaiya hai jo (Abs' parents to Dadi)- Hum Aapke Hain Kaun

Gal mitthi mitthi bol (all the boys) -Aisha

Main sasuraal nahin jaaongi (all the girls)- Chandni

Aaye re (Arjun singing looking at Nups)-Jashn

Aaj ke ladke jeib se khaali, akal ke kacche (Nups to Arjun)- VijayPath

Mere saath aayegi toh Life (Vicky at Nargis)- Humraaz

Salone kya (Nargis to Vicky)- What's your Raashi

Chham se woh aa jaye (Adi to Faz)- Dus

By the way (Faz to Adi) - Aisha

Ek ladki ko dekha toh eisa laga (Maan to Abs)- Love Story 1948

Aaye ho meri zindagi (Abs to Maan)- Raja Hindustani

Dilwale Dulhaniya le jaayeinge... (all the boys to Maan)- (don't know the movie name)

Sasural Genda phool (all girls at Abs)- Delhi 6

Baabul ki duaain leti ja-(Abs's bro to Abs, and an emotional time for the Vermas)