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Nidz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#71

@Khadija_89:Thnx tat's my fav8 dialigoues also..

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Nidz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#72

Thnx guys..for commenting I really appricate it!!Suggestions r welcome!
Yeh Ladka Hai Allah!!

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Nidz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#73

Geet*shocked*Maan has completely lost it!ek toh manaye usko Lift di Thnx bolnaye kya wajai mujhe hi attitude deya kar chala gaye Dalbadulu khika!samaj tha kya Aapnaye Aap ko Boss hai toh kya huwa!!ek Thnx toh bola hi sakta tha,par nahi 'Mr.Ghamandi' ko toh kiski feelings ki koi parwa hi nahi hai!!chal Geet upar wasai bhi tujhe dhat toh milenaye hi walli hai,chahai tu late aye ya nahi!ek toh madhad karo aur upar se dhat bhi sunno!
On the other side, Maan enters the central area n behind him the few office staff who where also around the Parking Basement..They were simply following Maan as if they had no other work remained!
Maan opens cabin's door n nervously takes marched pass thinking about his fav8 topic Geet!sat on his chair n rolled the pen by his right hand,than continuously opening n closing the cap n was going to throw the pen!!
Around the central area,Geet already enters lyk boiling water!speaking different types n class of galli's..n the other few staff which also followed her being a background special effects!her temper was too high n she enters Maan's cabin with a rush just lyk a mumbai local train has!
Maan was about to throw the pen but seeing Geet his hand stopped in the air n used his kimti dimaag on rite time n gave his pen a jerk n acted as if his pen was not working..
Maan:(tried to do acting of writing on the note pad)uff lagta hai ek nayi pen layeni padhaye gi!
Geet:(came towards him taking quick steps n took away the pen n opened the cap n gave bak to him!)still giving an angry luk!
Maan:OoH!(his mouth was wide open for few seconds but than his dimaag remained him of being a MSK!)Bolo kuch kam hai?
Geet:ha!hai..
Maan:(facing another side)hmm bolo!!
Geet:(*in mind*Ajj toh mai Maan ko bol kar hi Raho gi)ek toh mai Aapko lift deya thi huo aur Aap naye mujhe abh tak Thnx bhi nahi bola,subha bhi manaye breakfast banaye par nahi Aap ko toh saduu banaye mai toh degree hasilha na!manaye ki Aap Boss hai par ek Thnx bolanaye mai kya jatha..!
Maan:Chup!mai tuhai Thnx bolu..Maan singh Khurana kisko Thnx nahi bolta!abh jawo jakar kuch kam karo!yeh mat bhulo ki tum meri sirf ek secretary ho!aur MSK toh koi president bhi Ajj aye usko bhi Thnx nahi bolta hai toh tum kya cheeza ho!
Geet:*lowering her eye*ji sir!sorry sir..
Maan:Geet!
Geet:sorry sir,sorry sir!!
Maan:Geet,Geet..*GEET!!*(touches her shoulder)
Geet:hmm,haaa,kyaaaa!
Maan:Geet kya howa,u didn't sleep well @nite? jagtaye huwai SaPan deykha rahi thi!!
Geet:kuch nahi woh bas!!
Maan:Geet tum kuch bolo usse phele mai tum se kuch khaha chata huo!
Geet:kya!!
Maan:woh mai,mai woh tumse tumnai jo woh Ajj mujhe..(turn around again)actually mujhe tumehe doo bhat khana hai!!woh Ajj subha..woh!
Geet:(*mind*yeh kya woh mai kar rahe hai!)dhekhi yeh phele mujhe Aapni bhat bolnaye dijiyeh!
Maan:haa!
Geet:sir..woh..
Maan:Nahiiii!*Geet scared*mera matlab phele mai bolu ga!dhekho mujhe
Geet:(araye abh yeh ha nahi woh mai se kuch agaye bola pls Babaji!)
Maan: ok,I'm Sorry n Thnx bhi..
Geet: *opened her mouth wider*
Maan:sorry isse leya kyuki woh Ajj subha manaye tumeha kuch jadaa hi khadiya!
Aur Thnx woh Lift kya leya!!
Just than their was a knock on the Door! Maan's Driver enters..
Maan:come in..
Driver:sir woh mai car Garage mai servicing kya leya lay ja rahe tha..par car mai Aapkai kuch files aur yeh flowers mileyeh!
Maan:hmm rakhe do!
Driver kept the files n flowers on the desk!n went..
Geet:toh mai chalu sir..
Maan:haa..NAHI!!Woh yeh flowers!!
Daadima: *opens the door* Maan woh humei Aapse yeh puchana tha ki..
MaaNeet conversation was again interrupted by none other than Daadima!
Daadima:stops in btw..*saw Geet*..humai nahi pata tha ki Aap busy hai..hum bhad mai atheya hai!
MaaNeet:Nahii!!(luked @Daadima than each other)
Daadi: *stops n smiles* Geet kaise ho?
Geet:mai thik huo..Aap kaise hai?
Daadi:abh toh hum bhahut khush huo!(giving a smile to Maan n he widen's his eyes showing his Ghusa!)
Maan:Aapko kuch kam tha!
Daadi:woh actually humeha puchana tha ki Aap dinner par Ajj arahe hai yeh nahi?
Maan:nahi woh Ajj kuch jadae hi kam hai..
Daadi:thika hai!*while turning around she sees the flowers*Maan yeh phoola Aapka cabin mai?
Maan:hai yeh phool....woh Aapke leya apologise karnaye kya leya!*Geet shocked n stares @Maan*
Daadi:Maan Singh Khurana aur apologise..par kisleya?abh Aap naye kya kiya?
Maan:woh..mai..
Geet:woh Sir Ajj Aapkya saath dinner par nahi arahe hai na toh isleya unhonaye socha ki Aapko yeh phoola deya kar khush kare!
Daadi:I don't belive this!Let me guess yeh kisse ki sangatt ka asar hai,varna Maan aur apology kabhi saath mai nahi hotaye! (she picks up the flowers)Maan Thnx for the flowers aur(luked towards Geet)ussaye bhi jisnaye Aapko yeh idea diya hai! bye!!mai abh chalti huo!Daadima goes leaving MaaNeet alone!
Maan:*shouts*tumeha bhichamai bolnaye ki kya jarurat thi!!

Edited by NIDIZ - 15 years ago

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Fatima Ahmed

@Barbie3143

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Posted: 15 years ago

#74

wow ..nidiz... great .. part .. luv it... he he he maan and thanks .. lol ..
can you pm me plzz when you update ...*hugs

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Nidz

@NIDIZ

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Posted: 15 years ago

#75

~Reserved~
guys really sorry if I don't go above with all u're expectations..
But I'm somewhere beneath my heart, unsatisfied with this updates!

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afsha

@-afsha-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#76

Nice update

Geet was dreaming standing in frnt of Maan😆😆

Liked the way Maan said thanx n sorry

Dadi was awesum here

Now agn Maan will burst at her for speaking in middle😆😆

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Nidz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: Barbie3143
wow ..nidiz... great .. part .. luv it... he he he maan and thanks .. lol ..
can you pm me plzz when you update ...*hugs

Glad u lyked it!!sure I'll p.m u!!
Thnx.. Dear!

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Nidz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: -afsha-
Nice updateGeet was dreaming standing in frnt of Maan😆😆Liked the way Maan said thanx n sorryDadi was awesum hereNow agn Maan will burst at her for speaking in middle😆😆

Thnx..dear! 😆I know Geet is so scared of Maan tat in her imagination also she get's burst out!