'You and Me..never!'(Maaneet FF)pt 24 Pg 144

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hapinezz13

@hapinezz13

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Posted: 15 years ago

#241

Geet's galiyaan were rocking but Maan was no less!!

a rocking update Pallo.....n maan the superhero....jumping on the bus and competing....very filmy but a fun read!!!

N what's with u n horlicks? but a fun way of strengthening ur bones ....geet too needs that na....ultimately she needs the himmat to fite with Maan!!!

now hopefully they get into more mishaps like Geet lost in Maan's arms and feeling the reaction to his closeness before reaching delhi!!

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 15 years ago

#242

gaaliyaan ki dhokaan.. too much..

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TANYA

@TANYA 18

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Posted: 15 years ago

#243

omg thts the most swears iv eva heard in ma life lol. tht was a rocking upd8 lol. btw luvd da song u chose cuz it sed 'tu MAAN ja' lol. da way geet tackles tht rogue was so funny. askin hm 2 teach hr 2 so he cn wistle as maan lmaooo. ur brillian. plz carry on :). xx

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Gauri Sharma

@gauri92

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Posted: 15 years ago

#244

lol....awesome stuff once again...and i loved to see how well geet and maan were getting along in this..tho their fights are pretty epic and loads of fun as well.....
give us anew update soon!!!

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Muskan

@muskanp

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Posted: 15 years ago

#245

Very very nice!!! Really well written..unique

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alias90

@alias90

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Posted: 15 years ago

#246

Alrighty!

That was great! The image in my head of Maan hanging off a bus was amazingly amusing. Absolutely hillarious. Geets swearwords were basically ROFL.

Love it!

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Maheen

@sweet_gurl93

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Posted: 15 years ago

#247

hey awesome part,
lol it was totally hilarious 😆
really liked the little competition, it was jokes
and im glad that maan and geet are getting along now 😃
do continue soon
Maheen xx

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-RushTrip-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#248

what an absolutely stupendous update.

love it

tum gaaliyan likha..mein..tumhare update ke liye adjectives likhti hoon..

astonishing, astounding, breathtaking, colossal, dynamite, enormous, fab, fabulous, fantastic, great, huge, marvelous, mind-blowing*, mind-boggling, miraculous, monster, monumental, overwhelming, phenomenal, prodigious, radical, smashing, spectacular, staggering, stunning, super, superb, surprising, terrific, titantic, too much, tremendous, unreal, utmost, vast, wondrous

loved it...keep it up

pallo you are terrific

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Nirali

@Piano1422

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Posted: 15 years ago

#249

That was an ah-mazing update. I loved the competition. Something only Geet could come up with. Also, I loved the dialogue where she says that it's your car... you can turn on the music or put a bomb. Totally loved everything about it. So sweet that he brought Horlicks for her. Desperately waiting for the next part :D

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ankita

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Posted: 15 years ago

#250

i am so sryyyyy fro being late to comment.......

actually i was in class .......came back arnd 9 15 then watched geet .

now opened lapi....and ur update.....MINDBLOWING,FABULOUS,AWESOME,SUPERDHUPER HIT(Sry mujhe zyada kuchh nahin aata...)

and i just luved ur gaali session......it was so gr8888......mujhe bohot kuchh sikhne ko mila.....main itna kuchh nahin janti thi.....i am trying to mug up those words yaar...taaki koi aaye toh usse bhi suna saku...😆😆😆

lamba choura comment diya...........aab jaldi ud karna.........i juz lv reading ur FF