'You and Me..never!'(Maaneet FF)pt 24 Pg 144 - Page 103

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Posted: 15 years ago
yaar seriously i love this girl's antics..

she is one of a kind...she always has me smiling...and making me think what is she going to do next..
a carton of horlicks..not that's a passion...poore Ambala ko horlicks pilane waali hai....kya?

and sorry about you pc.hope it gets well soon..

nice of you to update...under these circumstances...
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely..enjoyed very bit of it
really enjoyed it..carton of horlicks
horliks o tree??
wow that was all brilliant
love
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Posted: 15 years ago
i really like your ff..its soo refreshing!!
can't wait to see maan's reaction 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
Superb part!!
Thanks for the PM..
and Don't worry your PC would be fixed soon!!!😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
loveliest update as usual
this girl for sure is what geet should be like. tell me something, is it true that maan hast stepped on blazing zone of fire going to end up being burnt with jealousy and that too unknown to him? all i can say is that truely ishq has made maan nekamma ..🤣🤣🤣🤣..
First he turned to busniessman from army captain n then kind of elope with geet , a parade as model and last stage would be hmmmmmmmm bal nochne ke baree hai abhe loooooooooooooooool 🤣🤣
loved it the way u penned geet on tree and how can i 4get her carton of horlicks looooooooooool. by the way is Ronnie going to be the cupid with his former remarks of "he is khurana and u r handa so he isnt ur brooo"🤣
wish ur pc fever gets its normal temperature
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Posted: 15 years ago
awwwwwww maan is such a cutie n Geet tells him he cud be a model!! good going!!

Falls into Ronnie's arms? I am loving this.....Maan's face wud be such a treat to watch!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
love it!!! Ending is so wicked...why did you end at that!!! Now I'm so restless....please please please update soon..pretty pretty pretty PLEASE!!!! OMG! jealous MSK is awesome!! Love your writing..it's brillant!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice one...amazing update.loved it....he's getting jealous...second step of falling in luv...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Dialogues:

"Vampire if you ask me...But still I can't survive on your monosyllabled conversations. I want some fun element in life...and sorry Mogambo you don't qualify for it!"

"See there you go again! Glaring at me as if I declared that I salivate over Osama. All I said was that you are no fun..."

"And you think Ronnie is fun?" Maan asked her menacingly.

"…You keep exploding like anti-matter.....Always ready to annihilate my joy!"

"Bhagawan I'll change my prayer...No need for an anitdote against boredom...I want an antidote against Maan Singh Khurana instead..." she looked heavenwards.

"…Planning to get whole Ambala to drink horlicks or what?" Maan mouthed in disbelief.

He rubbed his eyes again hoping that he was hallucinating. But his hopes were dashed.

Fall....

Fall....

Into Ronnie's arms!!!

Comments:

The bestest part of the entire part is…….. Geet falling into Ronnie's arms!! Can Maan open his eyes and see Geet in the arms of someone else? Pretty please??!! That would totally make my day! I enjoyed this part because finally, there's some jealously!! Maan's jealous of Ronnie, and all Geet needs to do is flirt and hang out more with Ronnie. You know what would be even better? Ronnie getting a job for Geet instead of Maan. He would totally be pissed. Huffing and puffing until Ronnie fell down. I'm glad that Geet's banter is back. It's really unique to see a girl not crying her eyes out or trying to ignore her premi just because he doesn't lover her … yet! I absolutely enjoyed this part, even though there wasn't as much banter or much romance between MaanEet. Eagerly waiting for the next part!!! Hope your PC gets back from the hospital/ doctors soon!

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Posted: 15 years ago
oh dear god...epic!!!
i cant wait for more!!! it'l b great!!! poor ronnie..wont know wht hit him..

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