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Lali,
As promised, I read this FF of urs too. I must say you're a pro at making the plot intense. The story is engrossing. Though at some places, it is confusing but I guess if you leave some more space between paragraphs when there's a change in the story, it wud be better.
so, from wat I gather, Mohinder is not Geet's biological father, right? Ahuja's a fickle intriguing too and then there's Anwesha too... Hmm... The suspense is building fantastically.
I guess there's a role reversal here wid regards to their social status. Maan is a simple guy.
The essence of Maaneet is their bickering so I don't think anyone shud drop that... Great work, do continue soon!
As promised, I read this FF of urs too. I must say you're a pro at making the plot intense. The story is engrossing. Though at some places, it is confusing but I guess if you leave some more space between paragraphs when there's a change in the story, it wud be better.
so, from wat I gather, Mohinder is not Geet's biological father, right? Ahuja's a fickle intriguing too and then there's Anwesha too... Hmm... The suspense is building fantastically.
I guess there's a role reversal here wid regards to their social status. Maan is a simple guy.
The essence of Maaneet is their bickering so I don't think anyone shud drop that... Great work, do continue soon!
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