My SaGa OS...The first KiSSsss..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Here my attempt to write an OS on SaGa.. I'm no writer.. But ..This is been running in my mind since yesterday! ( SaGa obsession) So I thought I will try to put it together..😳 In simple words..

Sagar starts working at a law firm. Ganga continues to live with Pulkit bhaiyya. SaGa are not talking to each other. Ja has stopped worrying abt Sagar. She went for a late night party with random friends. Rest of the family members went to Satsang. Pulkit and Supriya went to inlaws house. Sagar comes home late night after a tiring day. Ganga studying her law books. He quietly gave a glance @ Ganga and went inside changed into white Kurti and pants. looks for food in the kitchen.. Ganga looks worried.. gets up and puts roti and Baingan Bartha on table and quietly goes back to her reading. Sagar comes near the dining table.. Looks @ the food and😊
Looks @ his band aid fingers and sits there looking at the plate.. Ganga hides behind the door and looks at him all teary eyed.
Sagar caught her..Ganga comes out.
Ganga: Kyon nahi kha rahe ho? Kyonki humne banaya hain..?
Sagar: Looks @ Ganga.. Nahi Mere haath...
Ganga: ha tumhare haath se hi khao
Sagar: Ganga mera haath cut gaya.. tho main khaana kaise kaoonga.? (Makes puppy face)
Ganga: Shocked and teary eyed.. Kya hua? Takes his hand in hers..kitna careless hogaye ho Tum.. Tumhe kisi ki bhi parva nahi hain...
Sagar: looks @ her lovingly... Accha Baba sorry.. Tu Ro Matt.. Tu Bata main Kya karoon?
Ganga: chup Chaap baito aur Mooh kholo..
Sagar: surprised... Tuh mujhe khilayegi? Kya yeh Paap nahi?
Ganga: Humne kaha na chup. Starts feeding him with her hands..
Sagar: quietly gazes @ her, opens his mouth, starts eating.. In the middle coughs...
Ganga: tensed and worried, feeds him water
Sagar: Bas Basss. Hogaya..
Ganga : stops and feeling awkward..and a bit shy..looks down and clutches her hands together ( like she did in SaGa first meeting)
Sagar: thank you Ganga
Ganga: iski koi Zaroorat nahi..
Sagar: Chal tu ne ek Paap Kiya mujhe apne haath se khilaake, main bhi ek paap karoonga ... Gets up..takes her right hand.. Ganga surprised and before she realizes, he kisses her hand and says thank you thank you so much! Tu ne aaj prove Kar diya ki " you still love me a lot"😳

Please tell me if you liked it? 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
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😆 Thank you from Pagal fan..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely and cuteee update yaar. ..
Continue writing like this. ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shraddhadikshit

Lovely and cuteee update yaar. ..

Continue writing like this. ...

😆 Thnx for the appreciation.. If something came to my mind.. I will try.😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rush_25

😆 Thnx for the appreciation.. If something came to my mind.. I will try.😳

👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome want this scene to happen in the show also...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That was really cute

I love reading oneshots
Write another one

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