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Posted: 17 years ago
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GUYS
aap log ne mere ff ko pasand kiya isliye main aaj ek naya ff suru kar rahe hu.so plz mere is ff ko bhi aap log support kijiyega.
rajveer shekhawat-ek army office ha kma main
naina singh shekhawat-r ke patni ha .n ke parents delhi main rahete ha.
r is standing with suitcase in his hand
n-r main ne tumse kaha tha ke kma main ek bar phone karke ek car bejne ko kaho par nahin
r-n plz tum jaa ke us bench par baithto na
n- r mujhe bhook lage ha
r-off tum log bhi kabhi bhook lagte ha kabhi bathroom jana hota ha
n-r plz
r-ok ok
r ek car rokta ha
r-dekha
kma jate ha
r-mujhe bc se milna ha mera naam capt r ha
orderly-jee
orderly-sir koi capt r aapse milna chahate ha
bc-hmm bejo
r comes inside
bc-hello capt
r-hello sir
bc-aap join kab se kar rahe ha
r-sir kal se
bc-ok aapke family
r-jee bahar ha
bc-oh
bc-orderly capt r ke saman unke quater main shift kar dijiye
orderly-jee
bc-aap jaye capt
r-ok sir
sab log quater main aate ha
quater main sirf 3 rooms ha
r aur n saman rakte ha
n-off main toh thak gaye
r-aacha
n-hmm main nahake aate hu
r-thik ha
n nahane jate ha
orderly-sir
r-ha
orderly-sir aap ka dinner
r-ha rak dijiye
n nahake aate ha
r aur n dinner karte ha
r-n
n-hmm
r-cigarette jhalta ha
n-r stop smoking
r-ok but u have to kiss me
n-no r
r-thik ha
n-ok
n akhen bad karte ha
r n ke lips ko kiss karta ha
it was a long kiss

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Posted: 17 years ago
#2
Keep updating.too good.
but i think Raj n Naina ke bih itna tanav kyu naar aata hai😕
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Posted: 17 years ago
#3
hey simply super,n marvelous sweety,


keep continuin,


hatz of 2 u,




Aarthi
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Posted: 17 years ago
#4

I hope it's good start.

So continue soon.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#5
guys
next day
morning
n so rahe ha r uthta ha fresh up hoke do coffee banata ha
r-n uthto coffee
n-tum uth gaye
r-hmm 5:30 baj gae ha mujhe report karna ha 600hrs par
n-hmm main zara fresh up hoke aate hu
n washroom jate ha
n- r
r-ha
n-tumne tumhara uniform press kiya
r-nahin
n-thik ha main kar dete hu
r-ok par coffee
n-oh
n coffee pike r ka uniform press karte ha
n-r yeh lo
r-thanks
n-bye
r-bye
n ka mobile bajta ha
n-hello
ma-beta main ma bol rahe hu
n-ha ma boliye
ma-tu aur r kaise ha
n-ma main thik hu
ma-aacha r ne duty join kar liya
n-ha ma aaj se join kiya
ma-hmm
n-ma papa kaise ha
ma-thik ha beta
n-ok ma
r bc ke office jata ha
r-sir
bc-yes capt
r-sir main first yesr ke cadets ko communication aur strategy parayuge
bc-ok capt
major nair-may i come n sir
bc-yes major major yeh ha capt aur capt r yeh major nair kma ke drill teacher aur vice principal
r-hello
mn -sir mujhe dar ho rahe ha main jayu
bc-ok major
r-ok sir
r class main jata ha
r-cadets mera naam ha capt rajveer singh shekhawat main aap logo ko communication aur strategy parayuga
cadets-hello sir
r-main chahata hu humara rista teacher cadets saath saath dost ka bhi ho ok so plz introduce urself
CADET DRUV MALHOTRA-SIR
CADET SUHAS MALIK-SIR
CADET ARJUN GOLBOLE-SIR
CADET RESHAM TALWAR-SIR
CADET SONAL SOOD-SIR
CADET ZARA KHAN-SIR
R-OK toh introduction ho gaya toh aaj hum ek code crack karenge
army main soldiers hamesha code main messeges dete ha so aaj aap code ha
1 first then three second and third is out
so cadets solve this code
cadet resham-are baap are is ka toh kya matlab hoga
cadet arjun-i think 1 matlab 1 three =3 and 3 is out matlab
cadet dhruv-wah kya solving ha
cadet resham-sir humse nahin hoga
r-try cadet soldiers kabhi har nahin mante ha this is ur homework
r staffroom main jata ha
shaliny-new
r-yes(smiles)
shaliny-hi main hu dr shaliny
r-hi main hu capt r shekhawat
shaliny-aap akele ha
r-nahin mere wife ke saath raheta hu
shaliny-oh toh ur married
r-hm aur aap
shaliny-stiil single
r-oh
n the evening
r room main aata ha
n-tum aa gaye
r-hmm
r change karta ha
n-kaise ha sab cadets
r-aache ha but i have know them well
n-hmm
r-n
n-ha
r-ek cup coffee milege
n-ya
r sofe main baithta ha
n-coffee
r-thanks
n-r aaj ma ne phone kiya tha
r-oh ma papa kaise ha
n-thik ha
n kitchen main jate ha
orderly comes
orderly-sir aapne file maangga tha
r-hmm
r file parne lagta ha
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey excelent n simply super n very intrestn sweety,

don contn very soon,

hatz of,


Aarthi
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Posted: 17 years ago
#7
Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!
Naina is Raj's wife!!!! Great!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
Raj is so naughty!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉Usse toh kuch bhi karne ke liye kiss chahiye!!!!😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
Raj is a great teacher!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Shalini and his meeting was nice!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
But is there any tenison between him and Naina??😕 😕 😕 😕
Edited by Shaina_b - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#8

Good darling,

Raj aur Naina aache se hain aur is baar un k beech koi bhi miss understandings nahi hain.
So cont soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#9

guys

r reads the file
cadet DRUV MALHOTRA - fun loving in nature joins kma becoz his father has written n his will that only after becoming a soldier he will get his father's property .
CADET SUHAS MALIK-he wants to serve for his nation.
CADET ARJUN GODBOLE- joins kma to become soldier for excitment
CADET RESHAM -very fun loving .she joins kma for her friend zara khan
cadet SONAL SOOD- she wants to become a soldier .
cadet ZARA KHAN- she joins kma to fulfill her father's last wish
n-r dinner ready ha ab toh kha lo
r-hmm
r aur n dinner karte ha
n-kaise ha sab cadets
r-jitna jaana unke bare main they can serve for the nation
n-aacha
r-hmm
after dinner
n-r mujhe need aa rahe ha main sone jaa rahe hu
r-ok
r jake phir se aapne files dekhne lag jate ha
r-off 11:30 baj gaye mujhe toh kal subhe duty main bhi jaana ha abhi so jate hu
r jake so jata ha
next day
morning
r uthta ha fresh up hoke n ko uthtate ha
r-n uthto 5:30 baj gaye
n-oh
n fresh up hote ha
n-r coffee
r-hmm
r ready hoke kma jata ha
r-cadets aap logo ne kal ka code crack kiya
resham- nahin sir
r-thik ha
r writes the code
1 first 3 second and third is out
r-so cadets jab hum dekhenge ke koi no jaise 1 tab hum usko ek route
aksar soldiers raat main travel karte ha toh woh log stars follow karte ha
jaise
1 =the star
then 3 second=
pahele star se dusre star ka distance
cadet arjun-sir why 3 second
r-cadet malik 3 second ek imarginary time ha u have calculate the time
cadet zara-sir then third is out what is that?
r-good q cadet khan third is out so u will leave the third star
cadet resham-sir kuch nahin samjhe
r-cadet isse samjhane ke liye we have to travel n night then u all can understand it clearly ok
r-ok class khatam u can leave cadets
sab log mess main jate ha
r bhi jata ha
dr shaliny-hi capt
r-hi dr
dr shaliny-aap ke wife kaha ha
r-room main ha
dr shaliny-aap unhe kahin ghumne nahin le jate
r-time kaha ha dr kuch din bad toh cadets ke exam suru ho jayega so we have to prepare for that
dr shaliny-waise major nair is waqt bohot khush hote ha
r-kun
dr shaliny-are he can order and torture the cadets
r-laughs
n the evening
r aata ha
r-n
n-tum aa gaye
r-hmm
r fresh up hota ha
n-r aaj hum kahin ghumne jaye
r-nahin n mujhe bohot kam ha
n-ok
r-n tum bore hote ho na jaanta hu ek kam karo koi job karlo
n-job
r-ha
n-hmm
n ka mobile bajta ha
n-hello ha bolo bhaiya
karan-kaise ha tu?
n-thik hu
karan-r kaha ha
n-r bhaiya
r-hello sale kaisa ha
karan-hum toh thik ha tu kaisa ha
r-bas cadets ko leke busy hu
karan-aacha r nandini bhi kuch dino bad kma join karege
r-aacha par kun
karan-koi award nomination ke liye
r-ok tu bhi chala aa na yahaan
karan-nahin yaar abhi yahaan bohot kam ha
n-hello bhaiya aap bhabhi ko mera hi bolna
karan-hmm
r-nandini yahaan aa rahe ha kuch din bad
n-aacha par kun
r-kisi award nomination ke liye
n-oh
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Posted: 17 years ago
#10

good to is me Karan aur Nandini bhi hain.

wahi SD k role me aur Abhay k role me honge na.

Cont. soon.

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