AR FF: Defeated In Love pt17 pg1 10/09

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Nidha

@nidha1983

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#601

really a nice one⭐️ its awwsome so sweet😊 so armaan realise ridhima😳 her mistak😉 gud its very sweet😊😉 and touching😳 one plz continue it soon😊 and thanks for the pm😉

"Dosti se aaj pyaar sharmaya hai,
Teri chahat ne kuch aisa gajab dhaya hai,
Khuda se kya mange,
Woh to khud aaj aap jaisa dost mangne aaya hai"

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Shruti

@addicted2ksg

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#602

wow Taira.. that was an amazing part..! the way u wrote it was just way too good!!

the whole scene where armaan's mom dies.. but he's still living in his world of pretense.. that was so touching..!!

and hey.. we got that cute AR scene i wanted!! it was awesome.. i was all goosebumpish when i was reading it..!

wonderful update!! thanks for the pm and continue soon!

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angullgrl91

@angullgrl91

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#603

oo..gr8 part..his mom's death was soo devastating..

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-SH-

@-Facetious-

Sparkler

Posted: 17 years ago

#604

Beautiful update Taira and a long one 😆😆 But i'm not complaining, plzz maintain the length if you can.😳

The flashback was brilliant...👏

And sorry for not commenting from so long. I was actually very busy with some stuff. Thanx for the pms.

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Shivani😊

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lakshmi

@meow23

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#605

ohhh gr88888888888888888888
d flashbak was tremendous.. mindblowing..
datz all i can say
thnxx 4 d pm.. update soon

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Taira Rai

@Taira

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#606

Originally posted by: meow23
ohhh gr88888888888888888888
d flashbak was tremendous.. mindblowing..
datz all i can say
thnxx 4 d pm.. update soon

Thanks a lot for commenting

Glad u liked the flshback

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@spln

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#607

hey taira....great part hun...n long as well i agree....but stil hoping u won delay the next since u left the story mid way...waiuting to know the sameera bit now!!!

great work!!

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Taira Rai

@Taira

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#608

Originally posted by: kvn1983

really a nice one⭐️ its awwsome so sweet😊 so armaan realise ridhima😳 her mistak😉 gud its very sweet😊😉 and touching😳 one plz continue it soon😊 and thanks for the pm😉

"Dosti se aaj pyaar sharmaya hai,
Teri chahat ne kuch aisa gajab dhaya hai,
Khuda se kya mange,
Woh to khud aaj aap jaisa dost mangne aaya hai"

Thanks a lot

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Isha

@Sidarth_lover1

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#609

hey thnx 4 tha PM ntha update luved tha prt do cont soon!

❤️twinkle!

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Taira Rai

@Taira

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#610

Originally posted by: armaanaddict
wow Taira.. that was an amazing part..! the way u wrote it was just way too good!!

the whole scene where armaan's mom dies.. but he's still living in his world of pretense.. that was so touching..!!

and hey.. we got that cute AR scene i wanted!! it was awesome.. i was all goosebumpish when i was reading it..!

wonderful update!! thanks for the pm and continue soon!

Thanks a lot

I really wanted you to feel all the emotions so m glad u liked it

and ya i put that scene......cute or not that i don't know but i liked writing it😃

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