AR FF: Defeated In Love pt17 pg1 10/09

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Qwerty123rty

@Qwerty123rty

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Posted: 17 years ago

#301

Hey i am the first one to comment today....gr8

Well i totally loved the part.........WOW the battle lines have been drawn wonder wats gonna happen now

You described it wonderfully

Waiting for more......update super duper soon👏

Krati

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Shruti

@addicted2ksg

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Posted: 17 years ago

#302

whoa there!!! that was one fast paced part! but u did a brilliant job writing it..! everything was just so right in that part.. i loved it!! just waiting to see what happens now.. especially between armaan and riddhima...! thanks for the pm and continue soon!

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hearme21

@hearme21

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Posted: 17 years ago

#303

Woah, Ridzi is on a roll. Didnt expect facts to surface so soon. But you cut right to the chase. So Armaan is attracted to Ridzi but is too arrogant to admit it. Looks like Ridzi may have the same problem, too much attitude to admit she likes Armaan. But ofcourse everything seems to have messed up thanks to Armaans casanova image. I wonder what hes gonna do now. I am guessing its revenge time.
Cant wait for the chase to begin:)

Thanks for the PM

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lakshmi

@meow23

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Posted: 17 years ago

#304

jus luvd d prt... omg vivek was mushki's guy n d gurl in d first prt was priya n bth happnd 2 b ridz's frnd... jus luvd d affection ridz showed 4 her frndz.. after all she is a model i'm sure she wil def show d guyz a lott.. jus luvd d way she spoke... i was lik don't stop contd......
jus brlliant....thnxx, 4 d pm.. update soon

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Rani

@Rejected

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Posted: 17 years ago

#305

wow great part continue soon....lol talk abt a tight slap across the face :p

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pickytg

@pickytg

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Posted: 17 years ago

#306

oUcHHHH!!!tht must hv hurt!!!

id completely fgtn abt priya...n vivek n A r frds...even better!!

damn u gurll...u had 2 leave it ter????uhhhh!!

cont soon now!!lol i wanna c Az reaction soooo bad!!!

luved it!!:)

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..Mira..

@..Mira..

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Posted: 17 years ago

#307

Haha woah...i don't exactly remember armaan calling priya ugly...but i do remember him thinking that she just wanted his money..maybe she does you never know lol
Seriously I"m soo glad that ridzy slapped vivek..god that guy disgust me...hmm so she'll be teaching armaan mallik a lesson..and armaan will also be teaching her a lesson for that slap...lolz.
Seriously this part was too good....i can't wait till you post part 6b...please post it as soon as you can!!
thanks for the pm =)

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Rimli

@-Rimli-

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Posted: 17 years ago

#308

amazing part taira

its mindblowing

thanks for the pm and plz plz do update it soon

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shalini jain

@yachna

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Posted: 17 years ago

#309

omgggggggggggggggggggggggggg yaar seriously i dnt believe it i thnk i amm imaginning realy ridz slappd him wowwwwwwwwwwwwww yaar she ws soooooooooo angry nd tht grl ws ridz frnd bth omg yaar ar ws tooooooooooo shockd wowwwwwwwwww yaar ye story to or bhi intrestng hoti ja rahi hai wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwww jst lvd it how culd he evn said tht nd thn she slappd him nd his frnds wowwwwwwwwwww no1 hd treatd him like ths nd ar ws boilng wth anger ridz gonna kill him if she culd so nd tht vivek jerk wow i realy enjoyd it yaar i hpe ar cnt do ntythng wrong cnt wait fr d 2nd prt....................cont soooooooooon
thnks fr d pm
luv yachna