AR FF: Defeated In Love pt17 pg1 10/09

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Taira Rai

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Posted: 17 years ago

#321

Originally posted by: Rejected
wow great part continue soon....lol talk abt a tight slap across the face :p

Thanks a lotttttt😃

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Taira Rai

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Posted: 17 years ago

#322

Originally posted by: missypatel
oUcHHHH!!!tht must hv hurt!!!

id completely fgtn abt priya...n vivek n A r frds...even better!!

damn u gurll...u had 2 leave it ter????uhhhh!!

cont soon now!!lol i wanna c Az reaction soooo bad!!!

luved it!!:)

hehehehe..........sorry about ending the part there but i have books all around me glaring at me to get back to my piled up homework and with exams approaching its all the more tough to write regular and longer parts but i would try and update.

I still have not planned the next part so m afaid it mite take some time.

Thanks for reading the part and commenting

Glad u liked the new development.

Will try and update soon.😊

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Taira Rai

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Posted: 17 years ago

#323

Originally posted by: Gotta_luv_KYPH
Haha woah...i don't exactly remember armaan calling priya ugly...but i do remember him thinking that she just wanted his money..maybe she does you never know lol
Seriously I"m soo glad that ridzy slapped vivek..god that guy disgust me...hmm so she'll be teaching armaan mallik a lesson..and armaan will also be teaching her a lesson for that slap...lolz.
Seriously this part was too good....i can't wait till you post part 6b...please post it as soon as you can!!
thanks for the pm =)

He did call her ugly in the very first part..........no she doesn't want his money the poor girls genuienly in love with him and who wouldn't coz as i wrote in the part he is the most eligible bachelor.....a complete package😆

Lets see who teaches whom a lesson😆

Haven't planned the story ahead so i can't say much.

Thanks a lot for commenting and reading the part.😊

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Taira Rai

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Posted: 17 years ago

#324

Originally posted by: rimli_remix rox
amazing part taira
its mindblowing

thanks for the pm and plz plz do update it soon

Thanks a lot

Will try and update soon

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Taira Rai

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Posted: 17 years ago

#325

Originally posted by: yachna
omgggggggggggggggggggggggggg yaar seriously i dnt believe it i thnk i amm imaginning realy ridz slappd him wowwwwwwwwwwwwww yaar she ws soooooooooo angry nd tht grl ws ridz frnd bth omg yaar ar ws tooooooooooo shockd wowwwwwwwwww yaar ye story to or bhi intrestng hoti ja rahi hai wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwww jst lvd it how culd he evn said tht nd thn she slappd him nd his frnds wowwwwwwwwwww no1 hd treatd him like ths nd ar ws boilng wth anger ridz gonna kill him if she culd so nd tht vivek jerk wow i realy enjoyd it yaar i hpe ar cnt do ntythng wrong cnt wait fr d 2nd prt....................cont soooooooooon
thnks fr d pm
luv yachna

hehehehe.............your comments are always a treat to read. they give me an insight into my own writing......so thanks a gazillion for that.

Ya i know its hard to beleive that after being all sweet and kiddish with him she slapped him....poor guy..def didn't see it coming

Ya obviously he will boil with anger afterall he is not used to people treating him like that and that too a girl.......u won't digest it easily.......hehehe😆

Well thanks a lot for commenting.

Keep reading😊

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Taira Rai

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Posted: 17 years ago

#326

Originally posted by: rajeev_crazy
conitinue soon, good story

Hey thanks a lot

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Taira Rai

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Posted: 17 years ago

#327

Originally posted by: piya2025
Very nice 1..Do count soon..Ur FF is very wellwritten..Keep it up..
love

piya

Thanks a lot Piya😃

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Taira Rai

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Posted: 17 years ago

#328

Originally posted by: twinkle94
ouch bad 1 4 Armaan got slapped by Ridz but i think he deserved it! lolz! do cont soon thnx 4 tha PM n tha update!

❤️twinkle!

Thanks a lot and ya Armaan called for it.

Keep reading😃

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Taira Rai

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Posted: 17 years ago

#329

Originally posted by: pwincess kanzi
awsum prt! i wnder wat is gona happen nxt! i hpe armaan aur uss vivek ko bhot badi saza mile!

Thanks soooooooooooo much

m shocked that somebody ACTUALLY wants ARMAAN to be punished but i myself have no idea what i am going to do next.........since i have not planned the story yet.

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Taira Rai

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Posted: 17 years ago

#330

Originally posted by: sweet-niz
boy is this getting interesting wooow
luvin ur wrk great updte

go ridz lol although i must say dat priay grl

was a lil bit stupid i mean she did kiss a drunk aramn first lol

do updte sooon

luv niz x

Thanks a lot

Glad you found the part interesting

She def was stupid.......kissing a guy whose not in his senses IS stupid but then kissing a HANDSOME guy doesn't seem stupid at times😆.......well guess she is paying for that mistake only.

Lets see wat happens next.

Keep reading.😊

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