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Posted: 17 years ago
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guys this is soumya, n i've decided to continue my FF in this thread now as my last one wasn't much visited
due to it being in the DMG forum n not the fan fictions one. so my old readers pls visit this page n my new readers u ppl also visit this page as well.

the link to my earlier thread:
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=950545

ok so now i'm continuing:
recap: AR were hugging n kissing passionately. they were kissing just when someone entered n said: what's happening here ?

now:
its koel who enters and as u all know that koel hates ridz so much and so she pretended that she loves ammy truly and said: what is this ridz what are u both doing together and that too kissingAngry
ridz: armaan plz yahaan se jaao main isse baat karti hoon so plz if u can leave
ar: sure ridz but jaldi aana i will be waiting (he leaves)
ko: ridz mujhe jo bhi cheez pasand aati hai tum use mujhse cheen na kyun chahti ho mujhe pata hai ki u hate me afterall why not jab main tumhe hate kar sakti hoon so u can also do itConfused
ri: stop stop hey i wanna clear it that ammy koi cheez nahi hai he's my dreamboy afterall he loves me and i too and main tum dono ke beech main darar nahi ban rahi hoon balki u are doing so and mujhe ye clear karne ki zaroorat nahi hai because ammy knows it very well. plz excuse me mujhe armaan ke saath kuchh zaroori baat karni hai. (she said the last line with emphasis) ridz leaves

koel: main to is se ammy ko cheen kar hi rahi hoon bhale hi main us se pyar nahi karti. agar mere saath kuch bura ho to i don't care but agar ridz ke saath kuch accha ho to i really care so i have to think about it tab tak main ye baat poore hospital mein faila deti hoon...nahi nahi ...ye theek nahi hoga because is se to ridz ko kisi ko batane ki zaroorat nahi hogi...isse uska faida hi hoga...
ko: (thinks 4 some tym ) IDEA !!! Shocked

guys now haina yeh ek cool suspense ??? wat say ? pls comment n i'll continue after some time.🙂


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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey jsut read ur ovr thread n al da aprts in it
very interesting awwwww ar in luv very cute
n dt koel..... oooo gna b causing probz bt wundr
if der uv can stand up to it ;D
great updte
updte sooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ok i seriously know i'm late but i'm REALLY REALLY sorry. here i go with the update.

k: idea !
k thinks of some fabulous idea in her wicked mind n thn smiles to herself.

in the cafeteria:
all of them r seated around a table xcept koel.
ar: waiter !
waiter comes up n takes their orders n goes.
mu: rahul tune kucch khaya?
ra: haan kha liya,tune kucch khaya kya?
mu: haan...(blushes)
at: oye hoye kitna pyaar hai tum dono mein !
mu: oye chup nai reh sakta ! (blushes lyk anything now)
an: ridz itni chup chap kyun baithi ho?
(as ridz was sitting very quietly n seemed to b in a trance)
r: kuchh..kuchh bhi to nai di !
an: to phir?
r: uhh! ok koel ke baare mein soch rahi thee.
sap: ridzy tumhe pata hai tumhari problem kya hai ?
r: kya?
sap: um bahaut zyaada sochti ho !
(all of them laugh n koel enters)
ko: hey guys wazzup?
an: kucch nahi baitho na !
(n koel pulls up a chair beside her n sits down)
ko: chalo ek game khelte hain...
at: kaun sa game???
ko: say the truth one !
all xcep ridz: watz tht???
ko: ridzy i suppose u know d game....don't u ? after all u used to play it alot in school.
r: yeah i do.
ko: k thn all u have to do is tht i'll spin a bottle n to whoever points the bottle's rear will answer ANY question the opposite sider asks. understood ?
all: yeah !
they start the game n the bottle faces anjie n atul (atul has to answer)
an: hmm...kya poochoon??? haan ! atul tumahri first girlfriend ka naam kya tha ?
at: anjali meri koi girlfriend na thee na hai..na hog..nai nai! hogi hogi meri bhi girlfriend hogi!
anjie laughs on this n spins the bottle once again.
this tym it faces armaan n koel???
ko: (now its time to act part A of my plan) armaan yeh batayo ki tumhari prsent GF kaun hai... tum kisse sab se zyaada pyaar karte ho???
ar: shocked by the question n glances a ridhima ! who had an xpression as if she had been slapped hard on the face ! armaan didn't know wat to say... all were waiting fo his answer................

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Posted: 17 years ago
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just read the whole part
it is so cute
koel is so evil
cont soon

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