due to it being in the DMG forum n not the fan fictions one. so my old readers pls visit this page n my new readers u ppl also visit this page as well.
the link to my earlier thread:
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=950545
ok so now i'm continuing:
recap: AR were hugging n kissing passionately. they were kissing just when someone entered n said: what's happening here ?
now:
its koel who enters and as u all know that koel hates ridz so much and so she pretended that she loves ammy truly and said: what is this ridz what are u both doing together and that too kissing

ridz: armaan plz yahaan se jaao main isse baat karti hoon so plz if u can leave
ar: sure ridz but jaldi aana i will be waiting (he leaves)
ko: ridz mujhe jo bhi cheez pasand aati hai tum use mujhse cheen na kyun chahti ho mujhe pata hai ki u hate me afterall why not jab main tumhe hate kar sakti hoon so u can also do it

ri: stop stop hey i wanna clear it that ammy koi cheez nahi hai he's my dreamboy afterall he loves me and i too and main tum dono ke beech main darar nahi ban rahi hoon balki u are doing so and mujhe ye clear karne ki zaroorat nahi hai because ammy knows it very well. plz excuse me mujhe armaan ke saath kuchh zaroori baat karni hai. (she said the last line with emphasis) ridz leaves
koel: main to is se ammy ko cheen kar hi rahi hoon bhale hi main us se pyar nahi karti. agar mere saath kuch bura ho to i don't care but agar ridz ke saath kuch accha ho to i really care so i have to think about it tab tak main ye baat poore hospital mein faila deti hoon...nahi nahi ...ye theek nahi hoga because is se to ridz ko kisi ko batane ki zaroorat nahi hogi...isse uska faida hi hoga...
ko: (thinks 4 some tym ) IDEA !!!

guys now haina yeh ek cool suspense ??? wat say ? pls comment n i'll continue after some time.🙂