Sagar Kinare (AK, AR) Note, pg 22 - Page 6

awww!!! its soo cute once again!! and soo romantic!!! plaid capris hehe!!! angad is awesome...kripa is sweet

and armaan and riddhima were cute too...loved the last scene where he uses the sarong as a chunri...awww!!

the couples are lovely!! great part!!

Originally posted by: khnk_rox

me first me first!!!! yay.... part is here.. now i can slp peacefully..

Your comments almost always succeed in bring a smile on my face ( literally)😃😃

but honestly.. i liked AK part better than AR.. ridhima is too shy yaar.. and that line.. the lajja gehna one.. lol.. did she mean it.. or ws she teasing armaan.. dint get that bit..

She was teasing with that line, but yah she is more the shy dulhan than Kripa😛 I literally have a list of scenes on a word document assigned with either AK or AR assigned to them, like both will have moonlight scene but AR will have it this way and AK will have it another.

but i luuuuuuuuvd AK romance.. kya mast ghulam paaya hai madam ne.. oh oh.. and the contract statements were really cute and funny.. esp the one abt the plaid capris.. lol.. tujhe aise ideas kahaan se aate hain..

Few lines are real life while others just come out while I am writing, through writing I've learned I have a thing for comedy😆

and abt ur reply to my last comment.. arre nahi yaar.. i wont throw anything at u.. but tu mujhe gabbar mat bol.. yeh mera order hai.. muuuuuaahahahaaa!!!

Acha I'll keep it to nautankan or poetess😆

and yes i guessed who kidnapped u... but how sweeeeeet.. to think of a plan.. aur ek tu hai.. itne se khush nahi.. packed bags bhi chahiye.. lol!!

Nah I was just joking, I'm verrry happy😃

about that abt the hill station.. arre.. kabhi india aayie madam.. thodi jagah ka guided tour hum de denge!.

Aww so sweet of you!! As long as we don't go tiger sighting 😉😆

and yay yay yay.. for the secluded beach scene.. and it had better be verrrrrrrry romantic.. this will be second fav moonlight part.. u know.. i luv how u do moonlight parts.. u shud write me a special part.. just for me types..(dekh le.. order de rahi hoon phir se.. haha)..

You've already determined that it will be your second favorite, phew that doesn't put a lot of pressure on me😛😳 What exactly did you like so much about that part that made it dreamlike with realistic intensity? I'll have to go back and read your comment. But yah, it'll be very romantic😉

i can always imagine the feeligs n emotions n locales u describe.. u rock yaar!! keep the fantastic parts coming...... hope u hv another awesome day at the beach.. tc..

Thanks sooo much, I always look forward to your comments!😃😃 And yah I had an awesome day, we went dancing tonight. lol, can't keep away from the dance floor😆

Originally posted by: superstar15

grt part shalu di i love the story so far it is so romantic im a killer for romance the couples are having fun on their honeymoon the guys are being naughty hehe, i dont care if the update was short it was still good for me cant wait for cont soon and grt part.

Love Ya

Rhea

Thanks sweetie! I'm a total softie for romance too😳 This honeymoon/beach scenario is giving me too many idea, and I'm determined to write all of them!😆 So lots more doses of romance coming up, in quick but fairly regular updates😊

Originally posted by: rima791

hey shalini, right??

Yes my name is Shalini.

well my b-day isn't in july so anyways

Oh, my mistake😳

wonderful part

i love the AK scene, it was really romantic and cute while the AR scene was simply hot and sexy

gr8 part once again

do cont soon

Thanks😳 This updates will be short but quick updates.

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

awesome.. shalu.. keep it up.. can u make the AR scenes a little more sizzling!! please do continue soon!

Thanks!😳 Sure I'll add some more masala along with the sugar😉

Originally posted by: afifa2

OMG

Shalini ur just tooooo good sweety!!!

i have no words to explain the romance u have written

lol Armaan is tooo much and riddhima!!!

cute n sweet as ever

LOL Angad and Kripa are adorableeee!!!

Love

Afifa

Aww thanks! That's so sweet of you to say!!😳😳 I'm getting ideas for a lot of romantic scenarios here and I don't have enough time to write=a lot of short romantic updates, you'll get tired of them after a while😆