'~#*Kismat Konnection*#~'{AR*RM} Pt 3- Pg 31 - Page 24

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: rabo0

kanuuu....🤗🤗🤗..diii!🤗🤗

amazinggggg ff reallllyyy.... loved it to da core....😛 ..thank u dii!😳 am glad dat dint miss out many of its updatesss...
u jus started it nooooww......how cud i let u miss it..thats why i Pmed u😉😆
i so loved each n everyy bit of ittt...😳😳..awwww thanks..that so made mah day😳😳
da first AR Meeetinggg...got me in ma own dream world..😍
it genuinelyyy got me killedddd....😳
awesummmmmm....👏....Thanks hun!😳..i wud also love to see a scene lyk that between KaSh!😍😍😍
den am loving da fact da AR not being jaani dushman of eachoder..Who knows?..they can turn into one!😆
like RM....😆....ha ha yep!😆
buh da morgue scene btw RM...
haiiiiiiiiiiiiii...maar daala...😍..Shukriyaa!!..😆😳
hope to c such scenes in DMG...I Wishh!!😳DMG creatives...R u listening to uss???😆😆
kanuu try n giv sum tips to DMGz creatives na...😳...lol..u can do it better dii!😉 actually we all shud write great RM scenes on the forumm...vaise bhi they copy half from our forum😆😆😳
newayzzzz i lovedd ittt...thankkk u!😳
am lukin forward for ur next updateee....
do lemme noe wen u next update..
obviously it'd b after 29th aug..
buh weneva u do...jus PM me..😳..I will di😳..Cudn't get enough time to update! But promisseee wud be doing soon!😉😳
u truely rokd it li'l on...u also rock dii!👍🏼
lub u..🤗..me 222😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
I swear the pages are comin shifty, the 1st part was in in pag 9 i believe,lol.
Read all ur parts, it's has really interestin concept, do contin soon!
-Natasha
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Ladoo645

I swear the pages are comin shifty, the 1st part was in in pag 9 i believe,lol.

Read all ur parts, it's has really interestin concept, do contin soon!
-Natasha

Thanks hun!..
This new layout keeps changing pages tooo often! im cofused😆😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey kanika
awesum FF...am in luv wid it..i luved da RM part[as am a huge fan f RM]....n also AR
i jus waiting u to continue....
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz pm me wen u continue diz
i will b waiting
take care
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: nidz n

hey kanika
awesum FF...am in luv wid it..i luved da RM part[as am a huge fan f RM]....n also AR
i jus waiting u to continue....
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz pm me wen u continue diz
i will b waiting
take care

Thanks dear..Im continuing write now😳
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Posted: 16 years ago

Guyss! Im really really sorry for this longgg delay! But was really busy! hope u guys haven't forgotten the story yet.. First Exams then homework & then i got ill😔.. Still i am ill but cud manage a small part!..Hoping to get atleast an average reponse from u guyss!😳

Chapter 2

Rahul went into the locker room after their "Awkward" Moment in the Morgue.. He sat down ont he bench and held his head in between his hands...He seemed very upset.. That Moment brought his old memories back..When he & Muskaan were...Friends..till she rejected for the marriage proposal..!

Flashback *3 yrs before*:

"bauji main Rahul se pyaar shyaar nahi karti..Vo to bas mera dost hai..Shaadi?..Nahi bauji!"

"Beta Rahul tainu kinna pyaar karta hai.. Vaise bhi shaadi ke baad pyaar to ho hi jaayega"

"Nahi Bauji..Main aisa nahi karungi.. Usse mujhse pyaar ho gaya?.. ahh! Bauji main nahi jaanti.. Main kya karun agar main usse pyaar nahi karti..Aap iss shaadi ke liye mana kar dijiye..."

"Betaa...Pakka naa?..Bechaara tujhse kitna pyaar karta hai.."...he leaves..

*after this news is delivered to Rahul*

Rahul was shattered... From childhood he had loved Muskaan..all his dreams had shattered.. broken..He tried to believe & except this fact but still...he cudn't..

He tried his best to be at least Friends with Muskaan..but soon the bitter memory that She rejected his Proposal forced him to somehow raise a fight with Muskaan..

Muskaan..she felt very much awkward with Rahul... Later when Rahul used to fight with her without any reason she got irritated and also started fighting with him!

Years passed by..Still Rahul-Muskaan fight with each other though Muskaan has already forgotten that why she fights with him!!

:Flashback ends..


Rahul "Muskaan..teri vajah se..teri vajah se..main aisa ho gaya hun!..But main kya karun I still love u Muskaan..Nahi nahi..I LoveD u Muskaan..but not now!!"...he said..all alone in the locker room!...tears pouring from his eyes..

He stood up..And went to the changing room..Washed his face & then..Back to Dutyy!!

*____________*

Armaan "Riddhimmaa...kaha naa sorryyy..i didn't meant too...vo to Dr.Keerti ko dekh kar..."

Riddhima "Kya haan??..Dr.Keerti ko dekh kar tum mujhe gira doge??..Ahh! U know..My head still hurtss!"

Armaan "To lo naa..Pain killers lo...laya to hun tumhare liyee"

Ridz "No WAYZZ!! Khud le lungi main!! BYEE"

Armaan "Riddhimaaaaa....Plz....Plzz...Meri sun lo!"

Ridz "NO!..Nahi sunna mujhe tumhari koi baat!..I am not talking to u!"...she goes..

Armaan "Ahh! Ab kya karun ise manane ke liye!!..Why not...ATUL!"

*___________*

Riddhimaa "Ahh! Howw dare he??..I mean Dr.Keerti ke saamne..Nahi General Ward mein..In between almost 15 patients with their attendents he threw me ont he floorr..Jerk!..Ab dekho main isse kitna satati hun!!.."

*Pager rings*

*____________*

Muskaan "Uh!..Muskaan...Muskaan tujhe kya ho raha hai..Vo Rahul Hai Rahul...Jisse tu kitna chidti hai...Par kyun?..Main kyun chidti hun usse??..Chad yaarrr!!"...she said walking in the corridor while debating with herself!!

Muskaan "Tu bhi naa Muskaan...Faaltu mein..Kya jarurat thi use gale lagane ki.."...She ponders..

Until she bangs with someone and the files in her hand fall downn messing up the whole placee.. She lukz down.. Without luking at who the person was she blurts out..

"What The Hell!! How dare u??...Tumne aisa kyun kiya??...Ab Srif Tumhari vajah se i have to re-arrange all the filess!!"

A slow voice "Haan..Sab galti meri hi hoti hai..Im Really Sorry Dr.Muskaan..."...

Muskaan luks up instantly recognizing the voice.. She saw Rahul with an expressionless face..Serious..Dead Serious..

Muskaan "Rahull..Tujhe kya hua??"

Rahul "Huh! Mujhe kya hua??..Kuch bhi to nahi..Bye.."...he goes again replying in that same dull voice..

Muskaan was left wondering at what made Rahul soo Serious..!😕

*____________*

Do Comment Guyss.. 😳

-Kanika 😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey it was really nice.
continue soon.😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey kanika, it ws awesome
luved the fights nd im waiting hw will arman mannoy ridz
i hhope atul's advice is helpful
yes, rahul shud be serious nw, he shud make her understand
continue sooon wid yur superb prts😃
😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

kanuuuu..🤗

finally got done wid one ff..😛 though was a very short update.. buh me seeeing changed feelings in RM.. tooo nicely put by youu... reallly loved all da flashbak touch..
den rahuuul gettin all depressed...😭😭😭..
wel in ma last comment gues i spoke too sooon for AR..😆😆
thought dey'd neva fight in ur ff..😆...buh awww ere u updated n
ma dreams shattered...😆😆😆...luking forward to how r AR goin to patch up again..😉
loved da last bit...rahuuulz condition is makin me all sad sad...😭
buh i reallly hope RM get bak together soooon...😳..
reallly cute attempt lil one..
loved dis part..
noow hopin to c da next update sooon...😛
u rokkk..!!..😉
Edited by rabo0 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

~*reserved*~

~*edited*~


wassup these days kanu?....
main to story hi bhul gai thi....
ab adhe-tedhe tareeke se mujhe samajh aai...
chalo nice n short up8....
thanks 4 the PM...
tc
hugs & luv
Nimisha
Edited by dmglovernimisha - 16 years ago

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