FF-JTYJN{Open FF}-Note : pg.70 - Page 6

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Posted: 17 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: piya2025

Hey nice intro,egharly waiting to know what next>Thanks 4d pm & do pm me when u'll count,.
Love
piya. šŸ‘ šŸ‘

aww...Tahnx a lott sweety...šŸ˜‰...will b updating soon...šŸ˜€šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 17 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: ayesha sehgal

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww what a concept šŸ‘ itne badiya introduction hai to part kaise honge 😳 omggggggggggggggggggg yaar yeh kaisa stupid ques hai ki continue karu ya nahi ofcourse yaar agar humari riddhima ka ff ho or wo bekaar ho ,not possible agar bhagwan bhi kahe to," no wayyyyyyyy" ab plzzzzzzzz jya questions nahi jaldi se jhakas part update karoooooooo jaldi der nahi hone chaiye ,,bye ,take care ,love u very much ***@yesha***

aww ayesha..Thanx for ur lovely encouragement yaar...will defi. update my next part soon...šŸ˜€šŸ˜œ
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: freezinme

heyyy do continue sooooon
the story is pretty interesting
woow...ammy n ridzi r married 😃 😃 😃
its gonna be fun!!.
plzz continuee...
luv
tiya

Thanx lott tiya di...
will defi. conti. soon...šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: ammyfan_pragati

ommgg...awesome concept..riddhima šŸ‘ i totally luvd it 😳 waiting eagerly to read d intro 😳

aww....Thanx a lott pragati..!!!...will update it soon...šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55

I love the intro & you should continue the story.šŸ™‚

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Posted: 17 years ago
#56
amazing concept ridzii
its sounds very intersting
do update it soon
gr88888 job
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57
hey very sorry for late comment........the intro sounds interesting........do continue soon with this ff.......congrats on new ff..........
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Posted: 17 years ago
#58
hey ridz very nice introduction
now plz continue soon.........
thanx for pm
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Posted: 17 years ago
#59
hi ridz.i just read the intro and love it.character sketch is awesome
thanx for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#60

Thanks for your lovely response friends…... I have decided that I will continue with this FF….

Here I go with my part –

It had been two days to there marriage…its night time now & both of them are enjoying there vacation at there home as they have got a week holiday from sanjeevni…

Both of them were totally entangled into each other…Riddhima's head was on armaan's shoulder & she was running her fingers up & down on armaan's bear chest…while armaan was playing with her flicks that had fallen on his face…

"I am so happy today" said armaan with a big grin on his face….

"Why" asked riddhima in a confused tone…

"Oh ! God u girls…my dearest sweetheart because we are now together.." exclaimed armaan with even more excitement…

"Even I am very happy armaan" she replied & blushed…

Armaan was not getting into a really romantic mood…he slide riddhima upwards & started kissing her neck passionately. Riddhima took heavy breaths on armaan's sudden reaction…she was a bit reluctant in the starting but melted with the heart throbbing showers of kisses… on her cheeks & neck…

She handed herself to armaan "His love…His soul & His life"…

Both of them broke off coz it started raining heavily and there as big thunder due to which the windows banged….Riddhima got really scared & hugged armaan really tightly…then it started raining & riddhima without even thinking for a second ran outside…armaan never objected on her this type of behavior because he knew that she might have grown physically but her mind is still as sweet & innocent like a kid…now even he went to the balcony…he just loved riddhima so much…he couldn't take off his eyes from her…She was looking even more pretty & innocent dancing in the rain…

Armaan noticed her soft & glowing lips…he had a big urge to kiss them…riddhima saw armaan standing on the door so she pushed him into the rain as well…both of them were enjoying the rain…

Suddenly riddima tripped as the floor was slippery…but as usual our super hero Armaan caught hold of her waist…they had a eye-lock session for about 5 minutes & then both of them straighten up still holding hands…Armaan was continuously looking at riddhima's soft lips & wondering how would she feel if he kissed her…

"Her lips are so soft…they are glowing so much..[after a pause]..errr…what are you thinking Dr. Armaan…if u do anything she might feel bad…I cant make her unhappy…no way….but she is my wife…& I have atleast this much right on her…gosh !!!...women can be so confusing sometimes…" He was having a total confusion his mind & his heart were totally separated…his inner grudge rose…he finally thought "yaar we are married…and I no she wont mind" …while thinking this he put his hands around her waist...she closed her eyes to swallow that romantic moment…she was really nervous but still loved the touch…armaan came closer to her…both of them could actually feel there heartbeats…it felt as if they were totally melted into each other…

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Precap : AR Kiss..!!!...[is that a dream..🄰]...will get to know in my next update..šŸ˜‰
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Note : well Friendz its the 1st time I am writting such romantic scenes....if u have any kind of advice for me plz do tell me...🄰

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