FF-JTYJN{Open FF}-Note : pg.70

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asmita

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Posted: 16 years ago

#381

hey ridhima..long tym..huh??...da part was short but cute...thnx for da pm n cont asap...

ASMITA

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ayesha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#382

wowwwwwwwwww gr8 update plzzzzzzzzzz continue as soon as possible and i can understand ur problem bcoz i am also suffering from this problem and and i came online after 1 month ,mindblowing update yaar

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Tiya

@freezinme

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Posted: 16 years ago

#383

heyy riddhima..
it was sooo beautiful...
plzz..do continue soon...n try to make it romantic..hehe
luv ya
tiya

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Niky

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Posted: 16 years ago

#384

Thanx a lott guys for ur lovely comments...didnt expect soo much...but I am sooo gld..!!!

Thanx a tonn....okh so now I am updating another part...but trust me this will a slkightly longer one...so hope u liek it..!!!...so read n njoy..!!

Reacp : AR kissed...[pg.39]

They broke when they remembered that they had a party to attend😆😉...riddhima again moved towards the mirror lowering her eyes☺️... she was putting her make and doing all the finishing touches...while armaan tied the knot of her blouse and then just when he was putting her saree's pallu on her head,

BANG..!!

Ashu entered and saw armaan adjusting riddhima's pallu..when he entered AR seperated as if some one else had entered...when armaan saw ashu he was annoyed...

"Vey bad ashu, tumhe kisi ke bhi room mein bina knock kare nahi aana chahiye..."scolded armaan...

"Lekin chachu...aap ne hi to kaha tha ki jab kisi kamrein mein koi ladkee ho to kabhi usmein knock karke maty ghusna"repled ashu in a very innocent tone...

Armaan became reallu embarrased after listing to what ashu said...and riddhima's giggleing added more to him embarresment...

"Arre..!!...mein aaisa kab kaha?? "he tried to become innocent..

"kay chachu bhul gaye...jab aap pinky didi ke room mein bina bole ghus gaye the...aur mein aapko roka tha...tab hi to kaha tha aapne"

"WAT??...armaan ye kya bol raha hain ashu" riddhima tried to tease him...

"Ar arre...nahi nahi...he's just joking ridhima...aaisi koi baat nhia hain...[to ashu]..hain na ashu...u jokin na..."tried to clarify armaan...

Just then for no reason ashu started laughing uncontrollably...AR both were confused...

"Arre ashu kya hua...aaisa kyun has rahe ho??" asked riddhima...

"Wo chachi...wo wo..." he tried to stop laughing but could'nt...so just pointed out at armaan's face...

Riddhima came forward to look to his face and even she started laughing uncontrollably...

Armaan was realli confused..."koi mujhe batayega bhi ki kya hua hain??..."

After some time both of them stoped laughing and then told armaan that he had lipstick on his lips...

Armaan became realli embarresed..!!!..

"Kya chachu...aap chachi to tayyar kar rahe the ya unka make-up laga rahe the??" teased ashu...

"Accha beta...bahut bolna aa raha hain??"...said armaan removing the lipstick...and then ran behind ashu...followed by riddhima...

All of them reached downstairs while ashu went straight away to his mom followed by AR...

"Ruk beta..tu mujhse bachke kaha jayega??"...said armaan...

"Arre koi mujhe batayega kya hua hain??" asked ritu..

"kuch nahi mummy...armaan chachu chachi ko tayaar karne ke saath saath khud bhi unka make-up laga rahe the??"

"Kya???" ritu said half shocked n hlaf confused..

"Arre unhone chachi ki lipstick laga rakhi thi..."

Ritu understood and just made a straight face trying to controll her laughter...while AR stood there...realli embarressed...they had turned as red as a tomatoe...

"Arre ye anji aur kaha rehe gaye..." said armaan trying to chage the topic...

As soon as he finished saying it...the door bell rang...

"Lagta hain di aa gaye...wait mein dekhti hun"...said riddhima..

"Arre nahi riddhima...mein dekhti hun..its ok"...said ritu and went towards the door...

As soon as she opened the door all of them were shocked to see Ritu...

"BHABHI...AAP YAHA??"all of them literally yelling at her...

Kyun hum yaha nahi aa saktein??"lalita showed as well...

"Arre...aap bhi..!!!.."anji said...

"AUr mein bhi..."came ashu running straight to anji...

"accha chalo ab sab andar to aa jao"...said lalita..

all of them came in and sat in the living room...

They all were chatting and talking about how Armaan used to tell each n everything to ritu but told realli less about riddhima...

"Yaar mujhe to ye bhi nahi pata ke ye dono mile kaha the??"said ritu..

"Dont worry bhabhi...hum aapko sab kuch bata denge..."said atul...

"Haan bhabhi....actually armaan,rahul,muskaan,riddhima,atul aur mein ek ho skul mein padte the...we all were not that gud friends but knew each other...riddhima and armaan used to hate each other like anything....jab bhi miltein hamesha ladte rehete...but then armaan went to US for his 11th and 12th and we all lost any kind of interaction..."said anji...

"Okh...to phir uske baad tum log phirse mile na??...I mean coz armaan had come to mumbai for his collage...isnt'ed??" asked ritu exitedly...

"Ya...ofcourse bhabhi...hum sab log quencidently ek hi collage mein padte the..."said muskaan...

Preacap : Some flasbacks about how AR,RM n AA met n wat all happened..!!!

Okh guyss...sooo finally I have updated it...I no its again not tooo big..but me realli sorry...couldnt help it..😕😃...hope u understand..😳

Do comment/critisise..

Love n regards,

Riddhima...😊

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Kanika

@Kanika05

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Posted: 16 years ago

#385

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TAN TANNNAA!!! Finally im here😆😳.

Wat luck naa??..Jaise aayi vaise hi u updated😆😳

Awwww...this FF is just sooo Cutee...AR r adorableee...😳😳

lol...Armaan is a cutie pieee☺️☺️

Awww..luved the last part..

lol...lipstick😆😆

Waiting for the flashback hun!!😆😉

I wud have given a long comment but i have forgotten what happened in the earlier parts😆😆😳..lol..My bad!

Now i wont say Continue soon as it wudn't be right saying by me as me myself haven't continued any of mah FF😆😆

luv uu!!🤗🤗

-Kanu😳

Edited by *K@nik@* - 16 years ago

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shalini jain

@yachna

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Posted: 16 years ago

#386

hey ridz yaar wowwwwwwwwwwwwww yaar u hv updated thts enough yaar we all know hw mch ur busy dnt worry bt it ws soooooooooooooooooooo fnny prt specially tht whn ashu red handed pakda nd how he ws teasng him nd he ws soo embarresd it ws soooooooooo brilliant yaar fabulous.............nd all wre discussng hw th ymet it ws fantastic cnt wait fr d nxt prt try cont soooooooooooon
thnks ffr d pm
luv yachna

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Niky

@-Niky-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#387

Originally posted by: *K@nik@*
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TAN TANNNAA!!! Finally im here😆😳...lol finally after soo long..!!😉😆

Wat luck naa??..Jaise aayi vaise hi u updated😆😳..ya I no...lucky u..😆😉

Awwww...this FF is just sooo Cutee...AR r adorableee...😳😳Tahnx hun...I no they are..!!😳

lol...Armaan is a cutie pieee☺️☺️as sweet as sugar..😉😆

Awww..luved the last part.. Thanx hun..!!😳

lol...lipstick😆😆..😆..culdnt think of anything else yaar..!!!😆😆

Waiting for the flashback hun!!😆😉hmm...even me...didnt even decide wat the flash bak will be..😆😉

I wud have given a long comment but i have forgotten what happened in the earlier parts😆😆😳..lol..My bad! aww hun its k..!!!...I no I have updt. in a longg time..😉so its my fault as wel..😕

Now i wont say Continue soon as it wudn't be right saying by me as me myself haven't continued any of mah FF😆😆..ya I no...u gotto update it soon yaar..or esle even I will forget the previous parts...n I realli dont want it to happen...😳

luv uu!!🤗🤗 aww hun...lov u tooooo...[dont feel like opening the emotion box so..]*BIG HUG* frm me to..😆😉

-Kanu😳

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Niky

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Posted: 16 years ago

#388

Originally posted by: yachna
hey ridz yaar wowwwwwwwwwwwwww yaar u hv updated thts enough yaar we all know hw mch ur busy dnt worry bt it ws soooooooooooooooooooo fnny prt specially tht whn ashu red handed pakda nd how he ws teasng him nd he ws soo embarresd it ws soooooooooo brilliant yaar fabulous.............nd all wre discussng hw th ymet it ws fantastic cnt wait fr d nxt prt try cont soooooooooooon
thnks ffr d pm
luv yachna

Thanx a lott sweety for ur comment...I am soo glad u liekd it..😉😃..eill try n nupdate it soon..😳..amyb morrow..as wekkend pe I am free only..😆😉