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-Niky- thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: kvn1983

awwsome too gud⭐️ really a touching one 😊😳😉so sweet but really a short one😛 please make it long one next time😳 and please continue it soon😊😊

"Har Qadam Pe Farishton Ka Lashker Ho Sath Tere,
Har Qadam Pe Teri Hifazat Khuda Kare,
Ho Tuje Nasib Esa Uruj Dunya May.
K Asman Bhi Teri Qismat Pe Naz Kare."


aww...tahnx a lott nidha di for such a lovely oem and teh comment..I promise my next part will be a bigger one...😉😃
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: meow23

dat was a gr88 prt... armi wil neva chng he as proved it... omg he askd her 2 pull him.. how on earth is it possible 2 pull him...omg....
n d flashbak was truly gr88 bt neva xpected a question lik dis frm armi.... y did he ask sumthng lik dat... v need 2 xpect d unxpected....y does everthng happens wen dey r romancing.. now d door bell
thnxx 4 d pm... update soon

well ya lol...I no he's a very happy go lucky person but when it comes to riddhima & there love...he seems really possesive...😉😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: *mansibhatia*

Aww..Riddhima..dis was sooo cutee..their lovalble fights are the best!! Y was she wearing a saree while sleeping? Anyways...I luved dis part...nd im compleyely bowled over by ur diction. Continue soon!!

hmmm....nice queston..well I think its coz her night gown was still wet as it rained last night...😉😆
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: magicgirlankita

hey ridzie,

hon it was awesome
luved it
its like every time a different thing
i cant imagine what's going in ur mind
ur ff is unpredictable
w8ing eagerly for the update
update super soon
thnx for the pm
luv ya
@nkit@

😆😆...lol...Tahnx a lott....I will take it as a compliment for me..!!!..😉😳...I love to give the unexpected things at unexpected times...😉😉
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: aish_punk

Hey kool update...lykk d way u ryt ure FF..jus amazing... I really lykk Ar character's ..bt lpzzz introduce d oda character's in2 d story soon...

Srry 4 d shrt comment
Plzz cont soon...
Aishwarya

Thanx alott aish..[hope you dont mine me calling you that]...will defi. introduce the new charecters soon...😉😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Tahnx a lottt abeera for this wonderful and amazing siggy..😃
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Reiterate : AR had an eye lock session..they shared some close moments...
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ok freindz...before I update my part I have a requst from all of you...
I have started a Zara Nack Ke Dikha FC and I want you all to join in...
Here is the link : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1002536&TPN=1&#17571362
You may PM me and I will add ur name..but it could also be delayed a bit coz I am having exams rite now so will come online really less...and this is also the reason of the short update...so plz forgive me😕...and hope you all would join in and ya laso invite ur freindz...😉...

And now....here I go with the update...😉

Suddenly the door bell rang…both of them straighten up…riddhima was still sitting while armaan stood up…she totally forgot about her sprain & just jumped from her bed…as soon as she kept her leg she cried in pain…

"Ooooouuuuccccchhhhh!!!!!"& she just fell in armaan's arms….armaan then again made her sit on the bed trying to understand what just happened…

Armaan was horrified on her reaction…tears came in his eyes…

"Wh…what happened riddhima" he said while making her rather making himself relax…

"Actually armaan…I sprained my foot yesterday…"she said trying to make him calm down…he was sweating as if he had just came from work…

"Oh god !...you totally scared me yaar" he sighted with relief

"I am sorry…" she said making a puppy face…

Armaan again lean towards her in order to kiss her just when the door bell again rang…

"Oh no..!!.. they reached so soon" she said to herself but was still audible to armaan

"Who's came???" he asked puzzled

"No…no one…I was saying just like that" she tried to cover up…

The door bell again rang and this time with great pressure…

"Oh god…riddhima wait here, I will see who is there"

"No…even I am coming with you"

"Riddhima stop acting like foolish people…you have sprained your leg…u cant even walk properly" he said in great concern

"I am fine armaan" she announced…

The door bell again rang & armaan didn't wanted to argue with riddhima so her took her in his arms to the hallway & made her sit on the sofa, then went to open the door…riddhima was really nervous…

"They came so early…I am not even dressed" she thought

As soon as armaan opened the door he was surprised to see anjali , rahul , atul & muskaan standing there…

"Oh wow guys..!!! what a pleasant surprise…" said armaan getting really exited…

"Hi armaan…how are u??.." said rahul hugging him…

"I am fine…even I missed you a lott"

"Hi armaan…" said atul…

"Hi champ I am fine you say…[then he whispered]& how's the setting with my BHABHI going on…"

"Perfect" said atul in great excitement…

"Hi armaan…how are you??" asked muskaan & hugged him…

"I am fine muskaan" said armaan hugging her back..

Rahul got a bit jealous & just pulled muskaan away from him…all of them were confused on rahul's action…

Riddhima looked back from the sofa & saw all of them standing…

She first sighted with relief…

"Thank god they didn't show up"

Then she was about to get up when armaan stopped him

"Riddhima…please don't even try to get up…" he warned her…

"Why?? Cant she even meet us or what??" asked rahul totally confused…

"Oh no yaar…actually she has sprained her leg badly…" he cleared

"What??...you got married just a few days back & she even hurt her leg…seems like you don't take care of my sister JIJU…" said anjali mischievously

"Yes di…you are absolutely write" replied riddhima…

"Oh ya??...tell me what wrong did I o to you"

"Oh..!! So you for got what you did to me this morning..[to anjali] di…you wont believe----"

"Oh ya…tell tell…what did I do??" said armaan in irder to warn riddhima what was she about to say…

"Ya ridz...please tell me…I will then talk to him myself" said anjali…

Riddhima remember how armaan fooled her that morning…how he pulled her towards him…

"Riddima ??...where are you lost???" asked anjali puzzled…

"No where di…" she said…

"Ya so you were telling me----"

Suddenly all of there's pagers rang…

"Oh god...Hitler's call…will have to run…bye guys" said muskaan…

"Hey no wait…why are you all going so early…you came just now…"said armaan

"JIJU….we are not on an holiday like you…we have patients to treat...so will have to run…bye riddhima" said anjali…

"Ok I understand…so why not have dinner together…at our place…it will be fun…"suggested armaan…

"Ya sure…so dinner at 9:00…fixed" said anjali…and they went…

Then armaan went to riddhima…

"yay…I am so exited…was missing all of them so much..!!" said riddhima…

"Don't be so exited riddhima because you aren't cooking anything or doing any kind of work because you have sprained your leg already" said armaan as if scolding her

"Then who will cook the food Dr. Armaan Mallik"

"Of course I only"

Riddhima laughed when armaan said that he would cook food…

"Armaan I don't want my friends to suffer from food poisoning or something…please don't joke"

"Oh ya…!!! Well excuse me Dr. Riddhima Shahank Gupta I am a----"

Riddhima interrupted "Dr. Armaan…are you giving me a divorce or what??"

"No…" armaan said totally confused…

"Then why are you called my "Riddhima shashank gupts" …. I am "Dr. Riddhima armaan mallik" she said blushing…

"Oye hoye….anyways for your kind information Riddhima Armaan Mallik…I am a very good cook"

"Oh ya???... hmm…we will see that soon" she said…

"Ya ofcourse we will…"

Then armaan looked at her foot & remembered it was sprained…

"By the way riddhima…how did you sprain your leg??"

"Wo…wo armaan actually I slipped in the bathroom"

"Oh god riddhima…cant you see and walk…anyways now lets go…I will apply some spray which will relive you from the pain"

Then he again took her in his arms & went room the room…

Riddhima enjoyed traveling in armaan's arms…& armaan knew that very well…he made her lay her on the bed & said "I know you are enjoying it so much…but at least think of my hand…how painful it is for me to carry you…"

"Arrrmmmaaaaannn"

"Riiidddhhhiiimmmmaaaa"

"Aaaarrrrrrrmmmmmaaaaaannnnn"

"Rrriiiiiidddddhhhhhhiiiiimmmmmaaaaa"

"Ok ok…enough riddhima…please now don't start fighting with me…"
"Excuse me Dr. Armaan mallik...I dont fight with you...you fight with me"

Armaan totally ignored her & went to take a spray from his cupbord...even she didnt say anything after that...Then armaan came with the spray and put it really gentaly on her leg...she has goosebumps in her stomatch...armaan's every touch was making her remember about last night's incident...she blushed...

After putting the spray armaan a\silently went out of the room...riddhima felt bad and thought of going and talking to armaan...
"I think armaan is really amd at me now...I should go and talk to him atleast..." she thought...
She get up from the bed & with great difficulties & pain went out of the room to lok for armaan...he was in the kitchen cooking breakfast for them...
Sh went to the kitchen....
"Armaaan" she said in a really low voice...
Armaan was shocked to see riddhima there...
"Riddhima are you out of ypour mind...you have sprained you leg and you are romaing around as if nothing has happened...what are you doing here???" asked armaan...
"Actually you were angry with me na...that's why I came here to say sorry"
"And what amde you think I am angry with my prinicess??"
"You didnt talk to me while putting the spray and after that also" her eyes were full of tears...
"Hy hy hy....I wasnt angry with you riddhima...please dont cry..." he said hugging her,,,
She hugged him back...both of them stood there in the embrace of love...

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Precap :
Armaan also gets a big surprise...what will it be...u all will get to know soon..😉😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey ridzie wow yaar fantastic update yaar bth wre lost in ech othr hayeeeeeeeeeeeeeee yaar alwys keep fghtng nd lst siad why r we fghtng bt jst lvd it yaar thy wre abt 2 kiss nd door bell rang wow nd all wre came 2 surprise thm wowwwwwwwwwww jst lvd tht yaar nd ridz wre abt 2 say bt their pagrs rang nd nw their dinnr at their house wow cnt wait..........yaar nd n war wll cook heeeeeeeeeeeee.........nd ridz wre mkng fun of hm..........toooooooooooooo cute................awwwwwwwwwwww yaar precap seems 2 be intrestng yaar ridz gonna gv wht surprise omg yaar ahi wow if thn he would be soooooooooo happpppppppy bt wht...............cnt wait cont sooooooooon nd lke d way he scolded her in luv...............jst lvd it
cont sooooooooon
thnks fr d pm
lluv yachna
Edited by yachna - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
i loved it so much the whole thing was just so sweet omg its just to good u just rock
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Posted: 17 years ago
lovely part riddzi
its so cute
do update it soon
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Posted: 17 years ago

wow ridzie! awesome upd8...it wuz chooo chweet!...luved it !...continue soon!...thanks 4 the PM

tc
bye
hugs & luv
/Nimisha
Edited by dmglovernimisha - 17 years ago

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