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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sujalangad_rock

poor sahil...

i am feeling so sorry for him....
continue soon...
whaen r u going to continue sucidical???

i will probably start updating sucidal when i start getting more time to do so, but for the time i am just going to update the other and after i finish this fan fic i will start updating sucidal again
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Posted: 16 years ago
u updated! woohoo! omg sahil found out! that was one awkward was of finding out. feel bad for him
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Posted: 16 years ago

The Other

Chapter Eight

The thought of murder was so easy to think, hate, anger, pain, revenge all ran through his mind. Sahil didn't know what to think, he hadn't been home for five hours now and had gotten about fifty miss calls from his brother and his wife, both of who he was about to kiss or forced revenge upon. Even after five hours he did not know what to think, he had been driving around London city for five flippin hours and still his mind was clouded with disgust and hate he just couldn't think strait. There was more to his wife cheating on him with his own brother was the he and his brother were billionaires they were both the type of men that usually came on the front cover of time magazine or world news, a scandal like this is something that the world lust for. God what the hell was he to do? If he kicked Kripa out of the house Angad would take her in and it would be headline in every channel and magazine for month if not years.

Such a scandal would not only ruin his reputation in the business world but it would also ruin his brothers reputation to keep his personal life from effecting his business, although he hated his brother with all his guts at the moment he knew that ruining his own brothers reputation was just not something he could live with in the future. He hated himself at the moment also, why the hell did he have to be so nice! He kept telling himself.

As the sixth hour passed Sahil started to calm down and actually think with understanding. There was no way he was going to let just one incident destroy five years of marriage with his wife. He could deal with his brother later on, but for the long run it didn't make sense to destroy years of marriage over a few nights of two people who he cared about cheating and betraying him behind his back.

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Angad and Kripa didn't know what to do, they both were sitting in the living room calling Sahil's phone continuously, they had already tried the office and any other place they expected to be.

Angad didn't know what to do, just the thought of touching Kripa made him so guilty, he single handedly destroyed his brother and sister-in-law's happily married life. Angad closed his eyes taking a seat in the living room, closing his eyes to think properly. The mess he created was not something where he stole his brother's hot girlfriend; he stole his brother's wife! The guilt the fear everything of discomfort washed over Angad.

Kripa was heartbroken, how could she have let her heart and emotion wash over her mind and better judgment. It was not like she did not have feeling for Sahil, shoot she shard his bed for five years! She cared for Sahil, and loved him too, but what she felt for Angad was a different kind of love. She loved bother brothers equally but she just happened to love one of them with a different feeling of love then the other.

"What do you think we should do?" Angad said out loud, not actually expecting an answer back from Kripa. When he said 'what do you think we should do' he was thinking weather or not to end the relationship that was in front of him or end it and move on in life without Kripa with him.

"I don't know" was all Kripa said unable to face Angad and the truth that was between them.

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It was late in the night when Sahil returned home, it was more like early in the morning as he had returned home at three in the morning and a little dunk but he was sober enough to understand what was going on around him.

When he entered the large dark house he right away saw Kripa sleeping on the sofa. He game a smirk to himself, it was so typical of nature of Kripa to feel to guilty to sleep in his brothers room while she was married to him. Then again he also knew she was too guilty to sleep in his bed either. Angad was probably sleeping in his own room, Sahil knew his brother and knew Angad's habits real well. Angad was the type of guy that needed a comfortable bed to sleep or a woman to do it with if a bed was not provided to his liking, and knowing his brother, Angad was not the guy to bring girls to his bed at a regular rate, knowing this fact Sahil knew that Angad must really love Kripa to betray his trust for his wife.

Sahil was too angry at Kripa to wake her up to sleep in their room and offer to sleep on the sofa. He was going to deal with her and his brother later more like deal with it at the latest time possible and knowing himself it was probably going to be in the morning.

Hey everyone, thanks for the great comments even after such a long time, hopefully I will be able to continue on with this fanfic and hopefully I can get back some interest in this fanfic as before. I hope yawl like this part and please to comment.

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Posted: 16 years ago
oh snap!! you contd again! soo quck!!!!
haha..now that was totally unexpected!
gr8 part though...im glad your not dragging this story like others do...you actually let sahil find out about it!
gr8 job on your fan fic! and definitely can wait to read moreeee =DDD
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Posted: 16 years ago
nice part....
feeling so sorry 4 sahil....
wonder what's going to happen????
continue soon
& good to have u back
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Posted: 16 years ago

Great part👏.Sahil is great turmoil,now he know that Angad loves Kripa that made him to cheat his brother.Sahil is really good guy,he even thinks about his brother's reputation even after betrayal.Will he give them a chance to expalin?Will Angad and Kripa accept that they love each other to Sahil?

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Posted: 16 years ago
OMG just read ur ff!
Itz Gr8!!!!!!!!
AK dun know wat to say abt them............
If they luved eacher otha than they should have told Sahil before getting inTo bed!
I wouldnt blame Sahil if he wanted revenge or if he wanted kripa back cause 5 yearz is a lot!!!!
cont.soon
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Edited by starasdf - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
i wobder what sahil will do. forgive or revenge? uve got me hooked lol
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Posted: 16 years ago
nice part.
wen r u going 2 update sucidal.
pls pm wen u update.
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey every one thanks for the great comments, like i said before i will not update sucidal untill i finished this fan fic mostly because it becames to much of a load on me so as soon as this fan fic is over i will update sucidal :). as for messaging ppl to let them know i continued is probably not gonna happen as i just want to stay strictly on my writing and not get side track as i'm only writting fan fics to get speed in my writing. but please do continue to comment as they do mean a lot and give me the drive to continue on with my fan fics :)

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