Saahir....Sujal&Kashish.....Last Part...11/29

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samrah

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Posted: 16 years ago

#231

mindblowing part kashish...............................all scenes between sujal and kashish were superb.........................the best scene was bandage aur tie wala..............................kitne pyaar se karte hai.......................aur sujal bhi kitne pyaar se pooch tha kia dhood rahi ho............................aur phir woh us ko pump deta hai aur shaarat bhi...................kashish kitne pyaar se tie attek karti hai....................aur bad mein uss ko itne sare pump'sss baj tha hai..........................kashish jo uss ki pic se bolti hai uss se lag tha hai woh sujal se pyaar karne lagi hai.............................i hope kashish uss ki help kare gi ............plz con't soon

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golu_1677

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Posted: 16 years ago

#232

great part. pls PM me wen u update.

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sofia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#233

oh i read this story when it was posted but forgot to comment....

really nice update👍🏼....

sk were so romantically cute in this part 😳and i loved the way anjali and prerna teased kashish😊...

i really hope that kashish is successful in getting the project...

take care and continue soon...

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#234

kashish dear, i'am here with my comments on Saahir.. hope you like my comment... sorry main woh thoda late hogayi..i was caught up ion work... and thanku so much for the dedication..😊 now coming to my comment on the part you have posted... the part was very interesting.. it really started on a very nice note.. i enjoyed the whole part..is part mein aise ek bhi cheez nahii thi joh mujhko pasand naa aayi ho.. everything was perfect in this part.. everything was A1.. mazaa aagaya yeh poora part padkar..it was really very sweett..very damn cute... sujal,kashish ka rishtha is slowly and steadily shaping up.. aur waise bhii kehthe hai na slow and steady wins the race.. tho i'am sure sujal,kashish ka rishtha too will become very strong.. the bond they will share in the future, will be anoka.. sabse stron..which can stand any toofan.. aur sujal,kashish ke rishthe ke baare mein jaan kar yahii lagtha hai... agge chalkar sujal,kashish ka rishtha itna strong, itna mazboot haga , kii koi usse thod nahii saktha....waise part ke start mein, kashish sujal ka intezaar karri hai..mujhe khushi hai kii kashish ek biwi kii tarah behave tho karne lagii hai sujal ke saath... sujal ko chot lagi.. yeh baat jaan kar mujhe bhii darr laga.. kiss insaan kii itni himmat kii woh sujal ko chot pohanchaye..uski tho main... lekin waise dekha jaye tho chot sujal ko lagi aur dard kashish ko utta..waah kya connection hai... yeh sujal,kashish na ajeeb hai... dekho na ek ko chot lagthi hai tho dusare ko dard ka ehsaas hotha hai..ek ko takleef hothi hai tho dusare ko woh takleef pehle hii choo jaatha hai... aur itna sab hone ke bawa\jood bhii yeh dono khul kar apne pyaar ka izhaar nahii karenge... i'am seriously very happy with the way sujal,kashish ka relationship is building...as the days are progressing, their rishtha is getting stronger & stronger... yippee.... and i'am completely loving it.... waise sujal itna bada hogaya hai phir bhi antiseptic cream se darr lagtha hao usse... he is getting scared kii usko jalega... haha..how cute.. sujal is such a baby..actually i should say he is a big baby... waise is baat par mujhko sujal se ek baat pooch ni hai, sujal kal ko agge jaakar jab tumhara aur kashish ka bachcha is duniyaan mein aayega, tho kya tum tab bhi aise hii karthe rahoge.. hehehe... waise sujal ko main ek tip dena chahthi hoon, sujal tum agar darr lagne ka natak karoge na to kashish hamesha tumhare pass rahegi, aur tumhe bade hii pyaar se sambhalegi.... exactly waise-jaise abhi is pal kashish tumhe sambhal rahi hai... aur jis sweetttttttt tareeke se kashish ne sujal se kaha kii woh apni aankh band karle, and he would not feel the jalan of the cream.....hyee..kya parwaah hai... main marr jawaa gudh-khake... aur jitne achche se kashish ne sujal ko bade hii pyaar se dawayi lagayi... aur sujal ko tho ehsaas bhii nahii hua kii kashish usse dawayi laga rahii hai.. waise dekha jaye tho sujal ko ehsaas hotha bhi kaise, kashish joh usse dawayi itne pyaarrr se laga rahii thi...aur i think kii main jaanthi hoon kii sujal ko dawayi lagathe waqt kyun jalan nahii hui, woh isliye kyunke sujal has closed his eyes.. and i'am sure he is thinking about kashish..kashish ka khayal uske dilo-dimaak par chaya hua hai.. aur waise bhi kashish, sujal ke itne kareeb hai, sujal kashish ko khud ke kareeb mehsoos karr raha hotha hai.. aur shayad issi baaton mein khoya hue hai humare hero mahashay.. issi wajah se tho unhe patah bhii nahii chala aur kashish ne dawayi bhii laga dii... and then the talk between sujal,kashish... jis tarah kashish chinta karr rahii hothi hai kii sujal, ko kya hua,yeh chot kaise lag gayi usse... awwwwww..ek dum mast zabardast..all this show kii kashish ke dil mein sujal ke liye bohat saara pyaar chupa hai.. aur kashish bohat zyada parwaah bhii karthi hai sujal kii.. bas kashish apna pyaar, apni mohabbat, apni parwaah dil mein chupa karr rakhna chahthi hai... she does not want to show her vulnerable side to sujal.. aur phir sujal ne joh explanation diya kii usse yeh chot ek ladki ko bachathe-bachathe lag gayi.. and then the way he says sorry kii without kashish's permission usne us ladki ko kashish ke orphange chod diya hai.. kashish ke aankhon se aasoo ka behna... sujal ka pareshaan hona.. kashish pacifying sujal kii yeh tho bas khushi ke aasoo hai.. and she says sujal kii usne sahii kiya hai..well kashish ke is baat se tho main bhio poori tarah se sehmath hoon... sujal ne joh kiya bilkul sahii kiya...he is just like a coconut..bahar se sakht aur andar se naram..waise i'am sure kashish ke dil mein yeh baat bhii chal rahii hogi , kii sujal need not take her permission, kyunke he has a right on her & the things which are related to her... aur jaise phir kashish air sujal ne baat kii.. kashish air sujal pehli baar rk dusare se apne dil kii baat, dil khol karr rahe hai... unke beech ab koi jhijhak nahii..woh dono hii yeh baat bohat hii achchi tarah se jaanthe hai kii both are there to support each other, to listen to each other.. kehthe hai kii zindagi mein har kissi ko ek aise saathi kii, ek aise hum safar kii zaroorat hothi hai joh us insaan ko saare khamiyon ke bawajood bhii waise hii accept kare..ek aise saathi kii zaroorat hothi hai who accepts you the way you are..aur woh saathi tumhe badal ne kii koshish bhi na kare.. i see that happening between sujal & kashish... aur waise bhii sujal, kashish ka saath is changing both of them for the better.. they are becoming better persons with each others support...and then sujal ka kashish se woh baatein kehna joh usne aaj thak kissi se nahii kaha, apne dil mein chupa rakha tha.... this scene touched my heart... aur shatad main jaanthi hoon kii sujal kyun apni dil kii baat kashish se karr paaya.. woh is wajah se kii sujal kashish pe trust karne laga hai.... and i know now even kashish trusts sujal.. ek rishthw ke sabse badi neev is trust aur mujhe is baat kii khushi hai kii sujal,kashish have begun to trust each other.. kyunke agar kashish sujal ko nahii trust karthi tho woh kabhi sujal ke pass wapas nahii aathi.. aur na hii sujal kashish se apni dil ki baat share kartha... and then jis tarah sujal ne kashish se poocha kii woh kiss sujal ka saath chahthi hai, and is waqt kashish kii sharam saying kii kehna zaroori hai kya... hyeee....hyeeeeeeeeeee.... fabulous....aur sujal ne joh jawaab diya is baat par kii agar kashish jawaab nahii degi tho usse neend nahii aayegi.. sujal na dil se keh raha hai joh bhii keh raha hai.. everything is straight from the heart.. that is what i feel...and kashish ka jawaab.. sujal ka kehna kii ab se only that sujal will be alive who is happy go lucky... this is amazing.. this is a real achievement... kashish family kamiyaab hogayi to remove the mukhota from sujal's face, joh pehen kar sujal sabke saath rudely kartha tha.. now i'am sure everything will start falling in place... aur sujal, kashish kii duniyaan khushiyon se bhar jayegi...aur prerna joh sujkjal,kashish ke beech ka inter-action dekh rahii thi uske aasoo behna is lazmi, kyunke after all uska beta is laughing dil kholkar after a long time.. and i'am sure even prerna knows kii usse uska pehla waala sujal wapas mil gaya hai... chalo achcha hai... aur sujal,kashish kii khushiyon kii shuruwaat tho agle din se hii ho gayi thi.. jaise kashish apna aasthma pump dhoond rahii thi.. aur jis tarah sujal ne kashish ko uska aasthma pump diya.. saying kii he knew kii woh wapas aayegi and so he had kept it inside... sujal kii confidence is absolutely lajawaab... aur sujal ke vishwaas kii wajah se hii aaj kashish uski zindagi mein wapas aayi hai.... and i like it very very much....i just hope kii sujal,kashish ke rishthe ko kissi ki nazar na lage.. then the scene jahaan prerna, anjali aur kashish baitkar baatein karthe hai.. aur jaise kashish un dono ko sujal aur uski pehli mulaqat ke baare mein batathi hai... waah kya baat hai.. woh pehli mulaqat ab bhi kashish ke nazar mein itna clear hai..she remembers it so well.. kehthe hai kii hum unhi kii baatein yaad rakhthe hai joh log humare liye mayine rakhthe hai... and kashish ne sujal, aur apni pehli mulaqat kii har baat yaad rakhi, i'am sure uske baad bhi she remembers all her encounters with sujal... mere khayal se tho kashish ke dil mein sujal ke liye pyaar kii ghunti tab hii se baj gayi hongi... aur kashish tabhi se apne un jazbaaton ko chupa rahii hai... waise mujhko sujal,kashish kii pehli mulaqat bohat hii sweet lagi... yeh sujal tho tab bhi attitude dikhane se baaz nahi aatha tha.. sujal ke attitude , uske tevar ko koi sambhal saktha hai tho woh bas kashish hii hai.... ab kashish ko parcel milna.. plus woh sujal kii note.. and with so many aastma pumps in it.. aur sujal ne kitne pyaar se woh note likha hai.. i can imagine sujal smiling jab woh note likh raha hotha hai kashish ke liye..... and sujal ke us note mein all his fikar for kashish jhalak utta.... very cuteee... sujal is a sweetheart...... now kashish is seeing the real sujal..woh sujal joh apno kii parwaah kartha hai..woh sujal jiske liye uske apno kii khushiyaan hii sabse zyada mayine rakhthi hai.. woh sujal joh apno ke liye hasthe-hasthe kuch bhi kar jayega... woh sujal joh doosron ke liye hii jeetha hai..woh sujal joh uske apno kii khushiyon ke liye kuch bhii karr guzar ne ko taiyaar hai... this is goodddddddddddd...... yeh hui na baat... and then shaam ke waqt jab sujal late aatha hai, kashish ka getting worried for sujal.. and anjali getting worried for kavya..well anjali ka getting worried for kavya tho main is baat ko samak sakthi hoon... kyunke woh kavya se pyaar karthi hai tho obviously kavya kii chinta tho lagi rahegi na usse..lekin yahaan tho kashish bhii sujal ke liye pareshaan ho rahii hai... kashish yeh baat maane ya na maane sach tho yeh hii hai kii slowly kashish, sujal se aur bhi zyada, pehle se zyada attach ho rahii hai... sujal,kashish kii zindagi mein , main ka shabd bohat durr hotha hua nazar aa raha hai mujhko.. aur joh shabd un dono kii zindagi mein dheere-dheere pravesh karr raha hai, woh shabd hai "Hum" , aur sahi bhi tho hai yeh baat... kyunke hum shabd se taaqat badthi hai.. one person alone is a good competition , lekin agar do log saath mil jaye tho unka saamna koi nahii kar saktha... two defines power & strength..and then ab kavya aur sujal pareshaan hai, kii unhe unke kaam ke liye koi architect nahii mil raha hai.. and agar they don't find one soon tho uno bada nuksaan hoga.. aur ab kashish steps in forward, kyunke woh apne pariwaar ke liye kuch karna chahthi hai, woh apne pariwaar kii madat karna chahthi hai... this is very good.. kashish apne pati ke ghar ko, apne pati ke pariwaar ko dil se apna maan ne lagi hai.. aur kahiin na kahiin woh sujal ko bhi apna maanthi hai.. warna woh yeh kaam kabhi nahii karthi... sujal aur kavya kii madat karne ke liye kabhi agge nahii aathi... and waise i liked kashish's spirit very much... way to go kashish.. good... and jis tarah ka yakeen, vishwaas sujal ke pariwaar ne kashish par dikhaya, maan gaye usse..i'am sure sabke wishes ke saath aur sujal ke support ke saath kashish apne kaam mein bhakoobhi safal hogi... very well written dear... i'am loving it... i'am totally glued to your fanfic.. 😍 😍now coming to my guess on the forth coming parts..well mere khayal se kashish's work will be appreciated..aur sujal aur kavya ko hii woh contract milega.. sabhi is baat se bohat khush honge.... is baat se sabse zyada agar koi khush hoga tho woh hoga sujal.. woh is baat ka garv mehsoos karega, he will feel proud kii kashish uski patni hai.. aur shayad sujal ke dil mein kahiin na kahiin yeh guilt bhi ho kii woh kashish kii achchayi ko samaj nahii paaya hai... shayad sujal,kashish kii kamiyabi celebrate karne ke liye kashish ke liye ek party bhi organize kare.. and sujal,kashish ek dusare ke aur kareeb aathe jaye... and i also think kii ab kashish, sujal ke saath kaam karne lagegi... and sujal,kashish will start spending more time with each other... quality time... with chup-chup kar nazar milana.. thoda sa romance...thoda sa rootna-manana.. i think kii khud sujal,kashish ko bhii yeh ehsaas nahii hoga kii kab woh dono ek dusare ke itne kareeb aagaye.. kab woh ek dusare se is qadar judh gaye kii even the other they will feel incomplete... tho dear yeh hai meri guess for the coming up parts.. tho kya mera yeh guess sahii hai.. mujhe zaroor batana.. i really want to know kii kya mera yeh guess sahii hai ya nahii...😉kashish dear next part jaldi se post karna.. i'am waiting for the next part very damn eagerly.. palkein bichakar.. and dear i have a request please sujal,kashish ke beech thode se romantic moments add karo... 😊😛😃

Edited by sun_423 - 16 years ago

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Silence

@SecretKhabri420

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Posted: 16 years ago

#235

My dear Kashish, keep it up!!!!!!! 😳

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kashish

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Posted: 16 years ago

#236

Part-27

Ab Sujal aur Kashish dono office ke liye nikal jate hai..........lekin raste me bahot hi barish ho rahi hoti hai........rasta dekhna bhi muskil ho raha hota hai.........

Sujal: yeh barish ko bhi aaj hi hona tha........

Kashish: kyun woh tumhe SMS karke batati ki aaj main aa rahi hoon.........

Sujal: haa haa........barsaat aur Ladki dono ka kabhi koi barosha nahi .......kab aati hai kab jati hai......

Kashish: hello.........main aisi nahi .........bolne se pehle socho.........main jiski zindagi me jati hoon waha apna gahr bana deti hoon.......

Sujal: haa main samaj gaya........jaise pichle panch saal se mere piche padi ho....

Kashish: oye.........zagda pehle maine nahi shuru kiya tha..........woh tum hi the jo muj jaise khubsurat ladki se dushmani kar betha.........

Sujal: dekha abhi bhi tum shuru ho rahi ho......main sahi tha........ladki ko samjna namumkin hai..........

Kashish: achcha.........aur hum ladkiyaan hi hoti hai jo tum jaise bigde huye ladko ko thik karti hai.......

Sujal: ok ok ok..........ab hum maise koi zagda nahi karega.........galti ho gayi........main manta hoon ki ladke ladki ke bina adhuru hote hai........ab khush.......

Kashish: haa.....bahot........ab baatein kam aur aage dekhke chalao.......

Sujal: kyun meri driving pe vishwas nahi........

Kashish: tumpe hai lekin yeh barish aur yeh sadak pe nahi......is liye ab muje dekhke baatein karne chodo aur car chalao.......

Jab Kashish samne se ek Truck ko unki aur aate dekhti hai.........

Kashish: Sujalllllllllllll..................

Sujal sahi waqt pe car ko side pe kar deta hai...........kuch pal ke liye to car me khamoshi cha jati hai............

Sujal: Kashish..........tum thik to ho.......

Kashish: haa main thik hoon......aur tum........tumhe kahi chaut to nahi aayi.......

Sujal: nahi main thik hoon.........thanks.........agar aaj tumhara dhyan nahi hota to..........I am sorry Kashish.........

Kashish: usme tumhari bhi koi galti nahi........jo ho gaya woh ho gaya.......ab hum dono thik hai..........aur is waqt hamara Office pahonchna jyada zaroori hai............

Sujal; thik hai..........

Dono phir se office ke liye nikal jate hai..........

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Ab dono office ke andar aate hai lekin pura office khali hota hai...........

Kashish: Sujal........muje us architect ki office me le chalo...........shayad waha se kuch pata chale ki kaha se shuru kare..........

Sujal: chalo...............

dono office me aate hai aur Kashish sab kuch dekhne lagti hai..........

Sujal: kya dhundh rahi ho.....

Kashish: shayad Computer me koi Data abhi chod ke gaya ho.........shayad isse mera kaam bahot hi aasan hojaye............

Sujal: kuch mila.........

Kashish: haa umeed se bahot kuch jyada.........

Sujal: main kuch samja nahi........

Kashish: woh apni blue print abhi bhi yahi chod ke chala gaya..........ab muje to sirf project ki file banani hai..........

Sujal: iska matlab woh project hamara ho sakta hai.........

Kashish: ho sakta hai nahi balke ho gaya......lekin yeh jagah bahot choti hai mere kaam ke liye...........koi aur jagah.........

Sujal: meri office..........

Kashish: lekin tum to tumhari office me kisi ko bhi nahi aane dete to..........

Sujal: woh kisi ki baat hai lekin tum to.........

Kashish: tum to kya........

Sujal: tum meri wife ho aur tumhara meri sari cheezo pe hakk banta hai..........sahi kaha na..........

Kashish: haa....bilkul..........ab tum yeh papers........yeh markers.........aur yeh tapes lo..........main yeh file aur yeh data leke aati hoon..........

Sujal: chalo........

Kashish: Mr. agar aap bhul rahe hai to yeh main yaha pehli bar aayi hoon..........muje nahi pata tumhari office kaha hai......

Sujal: oh my bad.........chalo tumhe apni office batata hoon.........

dono office me aate hai..........

Sujal: Welcome to Sujal Garewal's personal office............sabse badi......sabse khubsurat........aur sabse saaf............

Kashish: impressive..........

Sujal; to ab kaam shuru kare........

Kashish; yaa..........

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Kashish jake Sujal ki chair pe beth ke kaam karne lagti hai aur Sujal use dekhke muskura raha hota hai.........

Kashish: Sujal.....muje dekhna aur hasna bandh karo........

Sujal; tumhe kaise pata main tumhe dekh ke has raha hoon............

Kashish: tum pehle batao tum kyun has rahe the.........

Sujal: woh aaj tak to koi meri chair pe nahi betha............aaj tum pehli woh saks ho jo meri chair pe.........

Kashish: haa woh to hai..........abhi abhi tumne hi to kaha ki tumhara sab kuch mera hai to.........pehle soch ke bolna chahiye tha.......ab to kuch nahi ho sakta.............

Sujal: kitna kaam hua.........

Kashish: Sujal main koi machine nahi jo ek min me ho jaye.....thoda waqt lagta hai............

Sujal: thik hai kam se kam tum mere saath baat to karo........main bore ho raha hoon..........

Kashish: tum hi shuru karo.......main sun rahi hoon aur jawab bhi dungi.........

Sujal: waise main to tumhare bare me kuch nahi janta to lets see..........tumhara favrite color.....

Kashish: White............

Sujal: tumhara favorite place......

Kashish: London.........

Sujal: favorite khana.......

Kashish: bhabhi ke haath ke rajma chawal........

Sujal: sabse jyada tumhe kya pasand hai.......

Kashish: Abhi ..........

Sujal; ABHI...........matlab tumhari zindagi me mere alawa bhi koi hai......muje tumse yeh umeed nahi thi.............

Kashish: Sujal........meri life me tumhare alawa koi nahi........main Abhishek Bachchan ki baat kar rahi hoon...................

Sujal: thank god........woh abhi hai.....achcha hai woh to shaadishuda bhi hai......warna mera kya hota..............

Kashish: tumne kuch kaha.......

Sujal: nahi to..........kuch bhi nahi............lekin hamari to ek bhi pasand nahi milti.............ajeeb hai.........

Kashish: ajeeb to hoga.........ab main itni khubsurat aur tum itne............i mean we r perfact for Beauty and the Beast.........

Sujal: kya...........kya kaha...........main beast..........abhi batata hoon tumhe............

Sujal apni chair se uthke Kashish ke pass jata hai lekin woh pehle se hi office ke bahar bhag jati hai..........

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they r chasing the whole office..........jab aakhir me Kashish ek khone me fas jati hai aur Sujal uski aur aage badhta hai..........

Kashish: Sujal kya kar rahe ho.........

Sujal: bahot bura kaam.........

Kashish: Sujal.........mazak mat karo..........

Sujal: tumhe kisne kaha mazak hai..........main koi mazak nahi kar raha,......ab main tumhe batata hoon ki beast kya hota hai.........

Kashish: Sujal........tum apne hosh me to ho.......

Sujal ek dum Kashish ke pass aata hai..........dono me sirf kuch ansh ke fasle hote hai........Sujal ne Kashish ka dono aur se rasta bandh kiya hota hai........

Sujal: nahi......nahi hoon main apne hosh me.........jabse in aankhoin ko dekha hai muje hosh kaha............jabse tumhare yeh labz ko dekhta hoon to main apne hosh me nahi rehta.........aisa lagta hai ki is kampte hoth ko chul loon...........

Sujal kashish ki aur aage badhta hai........lekin Kashish ki aankhein bandh hoti hai aur woh aur bhi pich piche jane lagti hai.............jab Sujal zor se hasne lagta hai.......

Sujal: tum darr gayi............

Kashish: kya........

Sujal: tumhe kya laga...........main tumhare saath........main itna bhi gira hua nahi........main to mazak kar raha tha.........

Kashish: mazak...........

Sujal: main kabhi koi aisa kaam nahi kar sakta jise tumhe koi taklif ho.......i am sorry agar maine tumhe koi chaut pahonchayi ho to.........i am really sorry.................

jab light chali jati hai aur Kashish darr ke Sujal ke gale lag jati hai..............Sujal ko kuch samaj me nahi aata ki woh.....lekin kuch soche bagar woh bhi Kashish ko apne sine se lagata hai aur Kashish ko sehlane lagta hai..........

Kashish; Sujal muje andhere se bahot darr lagta hai........

Sujal: janta hoon.........lekin muje is waqt tumse bhi jyada darr lagta hai..........waha dekho..........dekho waha pe bahot hi badi chipkali hai.........

Kashish: chipkali.............

yeh kehke Kashish aur Sujal ko zor se pakadke khadi rehti hai.........

Sujal: mazak kar raha hoon...........waha pe kuch nahi............

Kashish apne dono haath se Sujal ko marne lagti hai...........

Kashish: bahot maza aata hai na mere saath mazak karne me.............abhi batati hoon tumhe........muje satate ho...........

yeh kehke Kashish Sujal ko marne lagti hai jab achanak se Sujal Kashish ke dono haath ko pakad leta hai.............aur dono ek dusre ki aankhoin me kahi kho gaye the.....................

Sujal; yeh mat bhulo ki main tumhara pati hoon.......

Kashish: Pati ho to kya hua......main tab bhi tumhe marungi............tum muje jitna sataoge utna tumhe marungi...........

Sujal: tab to main tumhe her waqt satauga...........shayad isi bahane tum muje marne mere kareeb aaogi..........

Kashish kuch kahe bina Sharmake apni palke zuka ke khadi rehti hai..........

Sujal: Kashish agar hum aise hi baatein karenge to mere project ka kya hoga...............

Kashsih: oh god.......main to bhul hi gayi..........lekin Light ke bina..............

Sujal: genrator on karte hai...........

Kashish: thik hai...............

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Ab subaah ke panch baj gaye hai..........Kashish apni puri koshish kar rahi hoti hai ki woh kaam ko pura kare.........lekin woh itni thak gayi thik ki use bahot neend aa rahi hoti hai........lekin phir bhi woh koshish karti rehti hai...........jab Sujal kahi jane lagta hai.......

Kashish: tum kaha ja rahe ho.........

Sujal: kuch nahi woh Bhaiyaa ki office me muje kuch kaam hai..........

Kashish: thik hai jaldi aana...........

Thodi dair bad Sujal do coffee leke aata hai......

Sujal: coffee............

Kashish: coffee.............is waqt to koi nahi to yeh.........

Sujal: maine banayi hai..............

Kashish: tumhe coffee banani bhi aati hai............

Sujal: haa woh London me tum nahi mili warna tumhi se karata............u makes the best one........

Kashish: haa woh to hai.................ab mere Pati pehli bar kuch banake laye hai...........ab chakna to padega.........

Kashish coffee try karti hai.........

Sujal: kaisi lagi........

Kashish: not bad Mr. Sujal garewal............aaj se subaah ki coffee mere liye tum laoge..........

Sujal: achcha thik hai woh bhi.........log kehte hai shaadi ke bad sare pati Joru ka Gulam ban jate hai main bhi.......

Kashish: sahi kaha.......kal se ghar ke sare kaam tum hi karoge..........

Sujal: aur office.........

kashish: tum sara kaam karke office jana........

Sujal: main to na ghar ka raha na office ka.........

Kashish; ab aisi sakal banana chodo.........main to yun hi keh rahi thi..............

Sujal: janta hoon............waise muje tumse kuch kehna hai...........

Kashish: haa kaho..........

Sujal: Kashish...........aaj tak maine jo bhi tumhare saath kiya uske liye main tumse maffi magta hoon...........

Kashish: Sujal.........

Sujal: nahi muje pehle meri baat ko khatam karo.......pehle se leke aaj tak main tumse jo kuch bhi kaha jo kuch bhi kiya use main bhulna chahta hoon...........aur yeh tabhi hoga jab tum muje maff karogi..........main zindagi ko jina chahta hoon..........kya tum muje maff nahi kar sakti........

Kashish: tumhe kya lagta hai ki main tumahre saath hoon to sirf dadi ki waje se...........nahi Sujal tumhare saath rehne ka faisla mera tha..........maine apne dil se tai kiya hai ki main apni puri zindagi tumhare saath bitana chahti hoon........mere dil me aaj tumhare liye dosti, izzar aur apnapan hai.........main tumhe bahot pehle maff kar diya tha..........aur agar tum apne aap ko koste rahe to main kaise thik rehti hoon.............aur maafi mangni muje bhi chahiye.........main ek patni hoke apni hadd bhul gayi thi..........muje tumse kaise baat karni chahiye the yeh main bhul gayi thi................lekin ab ehsaas hai ki tum mere pati ho aur tumhe izzat dena mera farz hai...........ab main bhi yeh baat ko khatam kana chahti hoon.........aur ek naye arse se zindagi shuru karna chahti hoon.............kya tum nahi saath donge.........

Sujal: hamesha tumhara saath dunga.........

Kashish: achcha ab muje kaam karne do............aur tum chaho to tum thodi dair ke liye so jao........

Sujal: waise bhi coffee ke bad kaisi neend...........main aaj ki meeting ki ek bar sari file dekh leta hoon............

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ab aise hi subaah ke aath bajte hai............Kashish ka project pura hojata hai.........

Sujal: ho gaya.........

Kashish: haa.......ho gaya kaha tha......main kar sakti hoon aise chote kaam...........aur tumhara vishwas mere saath tha to kaisa na hota..........suno maine kuch design me change kiya hai........i hope tumhe bura na lage..........

Sujal: tumne kiya to achcha hi hoga..........lekin main nervous hoon.......agar yeh project nahi mila to main barbad ho jaunga........yaha tak ki hamara ghar ghar hamara nahi rahega.........

Kashish: pehli baat tum zaroor safal hoge..........aur agar nahi bhi huye to main hoon tumhare saath...........sukh ho ya dukh hum milke bat lenge..........aur rishton ki duniya me daulat ka kya kaam...........hum saath hai to sab thik hai........aur tum to hamare parivar ki takat ho..........agat tum is tarah se tut gaye to woh log..........

Sujal: tumhe yakeen hai to muje yakeen hai........

Kashish: muje pura yakeen hai tum mere liye achchi khabar leke aaoge.......

Sujal: tum mere saath chalogi na.........

Kashish: nahi.......main tumhare saath nahi chal sakti..........kyunki muje tumhare kamyabi ke liye Bhagwan ke pass mandir jana hoga...........

Sujal: unse yeh bhi kehna ki meri ek aur bhi khwaish hai jise unhe pura karna hai.........

Kashish: tumhari her khawaish ko pura karenge woh............achcha ab chale.........

Sujal: thanks ........

Kashish: ab tum muje thanks karoge to main aage se tumhara koi kaam nahi karungi.........soch lo tumhari Tie kaun bandhega.........

Sujal: thik hai main apna thanks wapas leta hoon........ab chale........

Kashish: Chalo...........

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Samina

@Iqbal Neha1

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#237

amazing part

i really liked the part it was really good

the way sujal and kashish were teasing each other was great.

and the questions sujal asked kashish were intresting but the answers kashish gave were even better.

hope sujal gets the deal and also his other wish also gets fullfilled.

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swetha10

@swetha10

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#238

Excellent update Kashish.........👏 The beauty n beast part was the best..... really luved it.... n Sujal asking her to forgive him for the past n Kashish in turn telling him tht she is staying with him bcoz she wnts to was really nice n sensible.. Hey dear really liked the way u hve written it.... Hope Sujal gets the contract.... Plzz continue soon😊