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Posted: 17 years ago
amazing part
i really likedthe way u made kashish realise that she loves sujal i hope watever kripa said to kashish she thinks upon it and then decides on her feelings.The song u used was really beautifully and it really went with the situation after reading dat sujal actually felt something towards kashish gives hope that he might fall 4 kashish soon.I hope sujal accepts kashishs offer of becoming friends so dat atleast the days dat kashish is living with sujal go smoothely and sujal finds out about swayam.I think Swayams charachter might help kashish and sujal to realise their feelings towards each other.
cant wait 4 kashishs party and 2 no sujals answer.
Kashish i really like the way u are taking the story ahead its gettin really intresting and the way u show each charachters feelings helps me 2 understand the charachters more.
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Posted: 17 years ago
nice part kashish.......👏..so finally both of them r having feelings for each other...that's gr8.......hope sujal kashish ki dosti accept kar le n swayam goes out of their life soon....plz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
Yaar plzzzzzzz aj hi continue karna iss fic ko.....kuch dino ke liye baaki focs chod do and isse post karo roz......plz........this is going super mast......i cant wait for the next few parts...........yun na tadpao !!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Lovely fantastic amazing.............OMG i'm falling short of adjectives......... Finally Sujal n Kashish hve started to develop feelings for each other............ Kashish darling gr8 job............I really luv u for this..Thanx a ton..............PLzz continue asap........😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
very nice part...very eager to know about wat happened wit kashish and swayam...hope it's not too late until sk realise their feelings...i liked the way kripa spoke to kashish..

continue soon and thanks for the pm😊😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

Part-20

ab agli subaah Kashish jaldi se taiyaar hoke subaah subaah hi apne Old Age House ke liye nikal jati hai taki use Sujal ke sawaal ka koi samna na karna pade.......thodi dair bad Sujal utata hai aur kamre me dekhta hai to Kashish kahi nahi hoti use lagta hai ki shayad neeche hogi..........Sujal taiyaar hoke neeche aata hai breakfast ke liye..............lekin Kashish kahi nahi dikhti..........

Prerna: kya baat hai aaj to tu khud taiyaar ho gaya.......

Dadi: Prerna tu samajti nahi..........dair to roz Kashish ki waje se hoti hogi kyun Sujal..........

Sujal: nahi dadi aisa to nahi.....

Dadi: phir tu bata kaisa hai........tere papa bhi aise hi kehte the lekin asal me woh teri mama ko akela chodna nahi chahta .........

Prerna: maa aap bhi na kya bacho ke samne.........

Sujal: waise Kashish kahi dikhai nahi deti.............

Prerna: woh to subaah subaah hi Old Age House chali gayi.....kyun tujse koi baat nahi huyi......

Sujal: nahi usne raat ko kaha tha main bhool gaya...........

Dadi: Prerna tera beta badal raha hai.......jis ladki se yeh durr bhagta tha uske liye aaj yeh pareshan ho raha hai.........lagta hai tere bete ko ishq ki bimari ho gayi hai........

Sujal: kya dadi aap bhi.........mama muje breakfast milega ki main office jake hi........

Anjali: laa rahi hoon........yeh lo tumhara nasta........

Sujal: yeh kya aaj phir se aloo ke parathe......gobi ke parathe kyun nahi.....

Anjali: main teri biwi nahi jo teri pasand napasand ka khayal rakhu..........tere liye tera nasta aaj tak Kashish hi banati aa rahi hai is liye use jake puch ki aaj woh tera nasta banaye kyun chali gayi........khana hai to yahi khao.........

Sujal chup chap nasta karne lagta hai...

Sujal (to himself): yeh sab ko ho kya gaya hai.......kal Kashish kuch ajeeb se pesh aa rahi thi aur aaj Bhabhi bhi..............yeh achchanak se muje kya ho gaya.........aaj se pehle muje kabhi ehsaas nahi hua ki Kashish meri patni hai..........kal se kya ho raha hai mere saath.........sab bar bar muje yeh ehsaas kyun dilate hai ki Kashish meri patni hai............jab main hi nahi manta ki woh meri patni hai to kisi se kehne se kya hoga........lekin woh muje bina bataye chali gayi to muje bura kyun lag raha hai....kahi kuch to gadbad hai........oh god ple help me........

Prerna: kis soch me tum aaj kal rehte ho.....us din ke zagde ke bad tum dono ke beech sab thik to hai naa........

Sujal: haa mama........sab thik hai..............

Anjali; yeh mujse pucho ki kitna thik hai.........mama kal aapko aur Dadi ko hamare saath hona chahiye tha..............kya dance tha Sujal aur Kashish ka......main bata nahi sakti ki jab maine yeh sab dekha to main kitni khush thi............

Dadi: Sujal muje nahi pata tha ki tumhe dance karna bhi aata hai.........lagta hai sab kashish ka asar hai kyun.......

Sujal: main chalta hoon muje meeting ke liye dair ho rahi hai..........

Sujal waha se chala jata hai.....

Prerna: yeh ladka bhi na.......

Anjali:bahot pyaar karta hai Kashish se............

sab log hasne lagte hai............

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ab chalke dekhte hai Kashish kya kar rahi hai........Kripa pehle si waha pe aa gayi hoti hai kyunki Kashish ne use phone karke bulaya hota hai...........

Kripa: to tumne meri baat pe kuch socha.......

Kashish: bhabhi aap sahi keh rahi hai..........main sujal se pyaar to nahi kar sakti lekin haa hum dost zaroor ban sakte hai........maine apni aur se dosti ka pehla kadam uthaya hai...........

Kripa: main kuch samji nahi.........

Kashish: bhabhi aap se ab koi parda nahi..........maine kal sujal se baat ki..........hamare rishtey ki koi pehchan hi nahi.......main apne rishtey ko dosti ka naam dena chahti hoon.............maine kal sujal se dosti karne ke liye baat ki......

Kripa: Sujal ne kya kaha........

Kashish; use kuch waqt chahiye...........lekin maine sirf itna kaha ki is dosti ke badle me muje ek cheez chahiye swayam se hamesha ke liye chutkara.........Bhabhi Swayam agar meri zindagi se durr chala jata hai to main Sujal se divorse leke hamesha ke liye Shimla hamare purane ghar chali jaungi......taki kabhi Sujal se dubara mera samna na ho...........lekin jab tak saath hai tab tak main uski dost banke rehna chahti hoon.......muje nahi pata maine jo faisla liya hai woh sahi hai ki nahi lekin ab mera faisla badal nahi sakta............

Kripa: main yeh nahi kahungi ki tumhara faisla galat hai ki sahi lekin tumhare jane ki waje sujal hai naa.........

Kashish: nahi Bhabhi........ab zindagi me itna kuch ho gaya hai ki kisi pe yakeen karna muskil ho raha hai......aur ab muje khud se bharosha nahi raha ,,,,,,,is liye ab main apni baki ki zindagi is jagah se bahot durr akele bitana chahti hoon......jiske bare me kisi baharwale ko pata nahi..........kyunki zindagi ne itne dhoke diye hai ki zindagi hi dhoka ban gaya......pehle pyaar me dhoka phir shaadi me..........ab aur dhoka hua to mujse bardasht nahi hoga.........is liye sujal se divorce deke mera chale jana hi behtar hoga.......

Kripa: lekin muje lagta hai bahot hi jald kuch aisa honewala hai jise tumhe kabhi kahi jane ki zaroorat hi nahi hogi.........

Kashish: main kuch samji nahi.........aap kehna kya chahti hai......

Kripa: waqt aane pe khud samaj jaogi.........

Kashish: bhabhi is baat ka jikr aap kisi se nahi karenge.......mama aur bhaiyaa se bhi nahi...........main unhe pehle hi bahot dukh de chuki hoon.........ab aur nahi.........

Kripa: thik hai yeh baat sirf tere aur mere beeche ki rahegi..........

Kashish: thank you bhabhi.......aap ke alawa muje koi nahi samaj sakta........

Kripa: woh sab bad me ab kuch kaam kare...............

Kashish: hmmmm...............

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Kripa aur Kashish kaam me ulje huye hote hai jab Anjali aati hai.......

Anjali: kya ho raha hai..........

Kripa: kuch nahi.......achcha hua tu aa gayi.............school me kaise rahi parents meeting........

Anjali; lekin tu kyun nahi aayi.........

Kripa: woh Angad ne kuch zaroori papers muje yaha lane ko diye the is liye.......lekin Ria ki koi complian to nahi..........

Anajli: Ria ki to koi nahi lekin mat puch Ved ke bare me......itni complain ki main kya kahoon..............school me teacher ki bag me cockroch rakhta hai to kisi bache ke bal me rang dal deta hai.........main to tang aa gayi hoon Ved se........

Kashish: Bhabhi..........bache shaitani nahi karenge to kaun karega.........

Anjali; yeh kehna bahot aasan hai .........ek bar tere bache hone de phir main puchungi..........yeh bata tuje sabse pehle kya chahiye.......beta ya beti.........

Kashish: muje...........(kashish Kripa ki aur dekhti hai)..........jo bhi naseeb me ho.........

Anjali:dekha Kripa ise to kuch bhi chalega lekin Sujal ko...........use to her Waqt beti chahiye thi..........pata hai Ved ke janam pe use Beti ki umeed thi......lekin beta hua.......

Kashish: Sujal ko wake me beti pasand hai....usne to kabhi kuch bataya nahi.........

Anjali; abhi tak tum asli Sujal se nahi mili........jis din mil jaogi tab tum apne aap ko duniya ki sabse khushnaseeb insaan manogi........waise ab to pata chal gaya ki Sujal ko beti pasand hai to kab khuskhabri suna rahi ho..............

Kashish (sharmake): bhabhi aap bhi na..........abhi to shaadi ko kuch hi waqt to hua hai...........

Anjali; lekin abhi se planning to karni hogi na Sujal ki tarah.........kyunki woh to koi kaam bina plan ki nahi karta..............

Kashish: aap log na .....main yaha se ja rahi hoon muje bahot kaam hai........

Kashish waha se chali jati hai............

Anjali: Kripa .......pata hai kal maine Sujal aur Kashish ko pehli bar ek saath bina lade dekha...........kitne pyaare lag rahe the,.........bhagwan kare inhe kisi ki nazar na lage......

Kripa: Anjali main to her roz bhagwan se prarthna karti hoon ki in dono ka rishta bahot hi majbut ho............koi bhi toofan ise hila na paye............

Anjali: pata hai in dono ki problem kya hai.............dono ek dusre se bahot pyaar karte hai lekin batate nahi..........aur pyaar ko jahir karna bhi kitna zaroori hota hai..........

Kripa: tum sahi keh rahi ho lekin tumne kaha na ki abhi tak yeh dono ek dusre ko jan hi nahi paye..........muje lagta hai ab sab thik hi hoga......

Anjali; haa aur hona bhi chahiye.........ab chalo warna Kashish kahegi ki Bhabhi kaam karne aayi hai ki Kripa se baat karne........

sab log wapas kaam karne lagte hai.............

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Ab function ke pehle Kashish apne kamre ki almari ke samne khadi rehke kuch soch rahi hoti hai.........jab Sujal washroom se bahar aata hai...........

Sujal: abhi tak taiyaar nahi huyi........hume dair ho jayegi............

Kashish: nahi woh..........main.......

Sujal: confuse ho her bar ki tarah.............lekin tum pe woh Red wali saree jyada achchi lagegi........aage tumhari marzi.........

Sujal yeh kehke neeche chala jata hai..........Kashish pehle bluewali saree nikalti hai lekin phir wapas aake uske pass wali red saree ko leke taiyaar hone lagti hai..........Kashish apne aaine ke samne taiyaar ho rahi hoti hai......jab woh aaine me piche wall size Sujal ki photo dekhti hai aur phir apni mang me sindoor lagati hai...........lekin aaj aisa karte waqt pata nahi lekin ek ajeeb si khushi thi dil me..........kashish taiyaar hoke neeche jati hai jahan pe Sujal akela khada hota hai........Sujal Kashish ko bas dekhe hi ja raha hota hai.......Kashish bahot hi jyada khubsurat lag rahi hoti hai.......

Kashish: sab log dikhai nahi dete..........

Sujal: woh sab to chale gaye......ab sirf hume nikalna hai........

Kashish: tum mera intzaar kar rahe the.........

Sujal: haa woh Mama chahti thi ki hum saath chale..........to chale.........

Kashish: Sujal........tumse kuch baat karni hai.........

Sujal: kaho........

Kashish: tum jante ho ki aaj mere liye sabse bada din hai.........aaj ke din ke liye maine bahot se sapne dekhe hai...........ple aaj ke din kuch mat karna............kyunki tumhe mere saath jo karna hai karna lekin aaj waha pe meri puri family aur mere apne honge...............aaj ke din koi meri zindagi ka tamasha mat banana ..........bas yahi meri aakhri gujarish hai tumse.........phir kal tum jo chahe woh mere saath kar sakte ho main kuch nahi kahungi........lekin aaj ple ek din ke liye tumhe mere pati ka farz nibhana hoga...........ple Sujal.........main tumse pehli aur aakhri bar kuch mang rahi hoon.........

Sujal: thik hai........aaj jaisa tum chahogi waisa hi hoga..........ab chale..........warna tumhe dair ho jayegi...........

Kashish aage jane lagti hai..........

Sujal: Kashish ek minute........

Kashish: kya hau............

Sujal:ek minute.........

Sujal Kashish ke pass aake uske kan ki bali ko thik karta hai.............Kashish bas use dekhti hi rehti hai...........

Sujal: ab thik hai..........bahot khubsurat lag rahi ho............

Kashish: thanks

Sujal: chele........

Kashish: haa.........

Sujal aur Kashish bhi function ke liye nikal jate hai.......

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Kashish aur Sujal jab function pe pahonchte hai to bahot se log hote hai.........bahot se mediawale hote hai jo Kashish aur Sujal ki ek saath tasvir lene pe tut padte hai.........Sujal Kashish ka haath pakad ke use un sab se bachake andar lata hai jaha pe sab gharwale unka intzaar kar rahe hote hai..........

Angad: kitni dair laga di......ab tum jaldi se mere saath chalo.......tumhari speech ka waqt ho gaya hai......

Angad Kashish ko stage ke pass leke jata hai..........sab log neeche table pe beth jate hai.....Swayam bhi Sujal ke samnewale table pe betha hua hota hai...........aaj sabhi yaha pe rehnewale ke bacho ko bhi bulaya gaya hota hai...........Kashish stage pe aati hai.................Kashish itne sare logo ko dekh ke nervous ho jati hai jab Woh sujal ko dekhti hai jo use best of luck kehta hai.........Kashish ko jaise jiske hosle ki zaroorat thi woh mil gaya.........

Kashish: Good evening Ladies and Gentleman..........main (swayam ki aur phir Sujal ki aur dekhti hai) Kashish Sujal Garewal.........(Sujal apna glass table pe rakh ke Kashish ko dekhte hi ja raha hota hai)........aaj is Old Age House ke liye bahot khushi ka din hai aur mere liye bhi kyunki aap sab yaha pe aaye hai.........yeh Old Age House kabhi mera sapna nahi tha lekin maine yeh sapne ko apne Papa ki aankhoin me dekha tha........jise main is duniya me sabse jyada pyaar karti hoon.........Main aksar yaha Papa ke saath aaya karti thi lekin Papa ke chale jane ke baad woh is Old Age House ki jimedariyaan mujpe chod gaye.........aur jate jate unhone mujse kaha tha ki beta.............is ghar ka asli maksad yaha pe logo ko rehni ki jagah dena nahi balke use wapas izzat aur pyaar se uske parivar ke pass bhejne ka hai.......agar hamare is ghar me ek naya insaan rehne aata hai to teen log khushi se wapas apne ghar jane chahiye..........lekin afsoos is baat ka hai ki Papa ki baat samajnewala yaha pe koi nahi...................Maa Baap yeh shabd se shayad hamari zindagi janam leti hai.....hum kyun bhool jate hai ki ise Maa baap ke waje se hume yeh khubsurat duniya dekhne ko mile..........ek bacha jab chalna sikhta hai to uske kadam dagmagate hai lekin use darr nahi hota kyunki use pata hai ki agar woh gir bhi gaye to unke pita hai use sahara dene ke liye.........jante hai jab bacha bimar hota hai to dard sabse jyada maa ko hota hai........woh her aadhe ghante dekhne aati hai ki uska bacha thik se soya to hai kahi use thand to nahi lag rahi........yahi maa baap khud bhukhe rehke apne bacho ko khana khilate the.........lekin humne kya kiya........aaj is umar me humne apne haath se apne maa baap ke muh se khane ka nivara chin liya............ab unke budhe pairo me utni taqat nahi rahi lekin sahara banne ki waje haath me chadi pakadake use raste pe nikal diya............aur yeh sab ki waje kya hai...........ghar me aanewali nayi bahu.......beta kyun ek naye rishtey ke liye apne pachis saal ke rishtey ko bhool jata hai..............kya yeh hum apni aanewale bacho ko sikhana chahte hai..........agar aisa hai to hume bache paida karne ka bhi koi hakk nahi kyunki kisi din aisa aayega jab aanewale bache ko dada dadi ya nana nani ka matlab hi pata nahi hoga..........lekin aaj yeh baat aapko samaj nahi aayegi lekin aaj se pachis saal bad jab aap log yaha mere gahr aaoge tab ehsaaas hoga..........lekin tab tak bahot dair ho gayi hoti hai..........Mr. Sharma pichle saat saal se har roz apne bete ke khat ka intzaar karte hai lekin unka beta to unhe bataye bina hi dusre seher chala gaya..............Mrs. Kapoor pichle teen saal se har roz apne bete ki manpasand kheer banati hai taki use lage ki isi bahane woh shayad apne bete ko dekh sake..........Mr. singh woh to apne kamre se bahar nahi nikalte kyunki unhe abhi bhi darr lagta hai ki kahi unke bahu ke dosto ke samne unki bahu ki beinzzati na ho jaye...........Mrs. Kaur jise sabse jyada maza TV dekhne me aata usne pichle che saal se TV ke ek zalak nahi dekhi kyunki unke TV dekhne se unke bete aur bahu me takrar hoti thi..........agar tumhare maa-baap tumhare liye apne aap ko badal sakte hai to kya tum use sirf thoda sa pyaar do waqt ki roti aur ek kamra nahi de sakte..........muje aaj bahot sharam aa rahi hai ki aap log aaj is function ke bahane apne Maa-baap ko milne aaye lekin jab woh hospital me bimar hote hai to aap log business ki meeting me hote hai...........lagta hai aap sab ko maa-baap se jyada paise se pyaar hai........lekin aap log ghabariye mat kyun ki main kal bhi in logo ke saath thi aaj bhi hoon aur aanewale kal me bhi rahungi...........

yeh kehke Kashish waha hi rone lagti hai jab sab Old Age House ke log upper aate hai........

Mr. Sharma: Kashish hum aaj jee rahe hai to kiski waje se...........tumhari waje se........kyunki ab tu hi hamara sahara hai..........

Mrs. Kaur: aur putar tu kyun roti hai rona to un logo ko chahiye..........humne to man liya ki hamari koi aalud hi nahi.........meri to ek tu changi si beti hai.........

Mrs. Kapoor: nahi Kashish.........tumhare papa aaj bahot khush honge........unka sapna tumne pura kiya hai..........aur agar aaj hamare bache hume wapas lene aaye tab bhi hum wapas nahi jayenge kyunki yeh ab hamara ghar ban gaya hai aur hum ek dusre ki bigar nahi reh sakte................

Mr. Singh: aur tere bigar to rehne ki baat hi nahi hoti..............tere pyaar ki aur lad ki aadat jo hum sab budho ko lag gayi hai......aur phir tujse khubsurat muje GF kaha milegi...............

yeh sunte hi sab ke chehre pe hasi aa jati hai............Kashish un sabse excuse karke apne Parivar ke pass aati hai aur Malika ke gale lagkar rone lagti hai................

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Malika: Kashish beta tu ro kyun rahi hai..........

Kashish: Mama.........aaj Papa ka sapna pura hua lekin woh mere saath nahi........

Malika: kisne kaha woh tere saath nahi.........woh hamesha tere saath hai....tere dil me..........

Prerna: aaj agar tere papa yaha hote to use tuj par naz hota........Maa hamari kismat kitni achchi hai ki hume Kashish jaisi bahu mili....

Dadi: wake me Malika hum to dhany ho gaye aisi bahu pake jo ghar ke bado ki izzat karti ho aur jiski soch itni uchi ho.........

Kashish: nahi dadi bache apne Maa baap ka khayal nahi karenge to aur kaun karega................aur yahi dekh ke hamare bache bade hone chahiye.......agar hum hi aapka khayal nahi rakhenge to hum Ved aur Ria ko kya sikhayenge..........dekha maine aap sab ko rula diya..........Mama main bus do minute me wash room hoke aati hoon..........

Kashish waha se washroom ki aur jati hai............Sujal bas Kashish ko dekhe hi ja raha hota hai ki kitna pyaar karti hai woh apne dono parivar se........ab thodi dair hoti hai lekin Kashish abhi tak wapas nahi aayi hoti hai is liye woh dekhne jata hai........Kashish abhi bhi washroom me roti hoti hai jab kahi se kuch girne ki aawaz aati hai.........kashish ek dum se ghabra jati hai...........

Kashish: kaun hai waha.............maine kaha kaun hai....saamne kyun nahi aate...............

Kashish darwaza kholke dekhti hai lekin koi nahi hota lekin waha pe seesha tuta hua hota hai.....Kashish ghabra ke bahar jane lagti hai.......woh itni dari huyi hoti hai ki bar bar piche dekh rahi hoti hai........jab woh Sujal se zor se takrati hai.......Kashish apna sir upper karke Sujal ko dekhti hai aur phir uske gale lag jati hai darr ke mare..........

Sujal: kya hua........tum itni dari huyi kyun ho.......

Kashish thik se saans bhi nahi le pa rahi thi aisa lag raha tha ki abhi attack aayega......

Sujal: relax.......aur dheere dheere saans lo......

thodi dair bad Kashish thik hoti hai........

Sujal: ab batao kya hau.......

Kashish: woh main wash room me thi to achanak se sheesha tuta aur muje aisa laga ki koi mera picha kar raha hai.........

Sujal: tumhara picha......chalo chal ke dekhte hai........

Kashish: nahi Sujal jane do.............main thik hoon chalo wapas party me jate hai sab intzaar kar rahe honge.............

Sujal: lekin........

Kashish: shayad woh mera wahem hoga...chalo bhi................

Kashish Sujal ko leke chali jati hai........

jab piche se Swayam bahar aata hai.............

Swayam: Kashish........main janta tha ki tum pehle se hi Sujal se pyaar kari ho aur isi liye tumne mere pyaar ko dhoka diya...........main tumhe aur Sujal dono me se kisi ko nahi chodunga...............

******this part is specially for vandu(togepe30)*******

Edited by goodkashish - 17 years ago
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wow kashish.really i m speechless...........too goood👏.brillaint...............look i don't av more words to xplain wat a beautiful part u av written...........i m totally flat👏.finally ab sach me khuch acha hone laga hai........sk falling in love wowi😳..........aur ab to sujal kashish ko miss bhi karne laga hai.......aur use kabhi laga bhi nahi ke kashish uska kitna khayal rekhti hai.gabo ke pronthe............beechare ek din bahar gaye aur use aloo ke pronthe kahane pare...........aur use bura laga ke woh use bina bate chali gayi.oh so ab mr sujal ko apni wife ke bahut yaad aa rahi th😳😳😳.sahi me kisi cheez ke importance tab hoti jab wo pass nahi hoti.................and kashish sujal ke kahi hui sari pehni.kya baat hai...........lovely..chalo thoda sa hi sahi romace to kya.......😳..........aur wow kya hug scene raha hoga.main inagibne kar sakti hoon😳.bt ye swayam hai kya😡.aur kashish sujal se phele se pyar karti.....main yahan thoda confuse...u mean ki london me bhi kashish is in ove wid sujal......😕😕😕.......bt plz ab jaldi se continue karo main wait nahi kar sakti
👏.kashish ye sari claps us speech ke liye jo tumne lekhi.i mean that speech jo kashish old age home . abt d old age people. and how their children treat them.............yaar sach me that isd most emotional part of ur story ever
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Posted: 17 years ago
heheheheehe!! Tum sachi me meri twino ho..........Humare birth dates bhi isiliye same hain........lolzzz...

Lubbb u loadzzz for this part....!!

And i think the best compliment to a writer is when people react to the writing and you have a right to know that i actually wept tears when kashish said the last part of her speech about how the old people have limited themselves so that their kids are not embaressed coz of them...

U know i think the most heinous crime in life is neglecting your parents......how dare people do that.........kal tak jiski ungli pakadke chalna seekha aj ussi ko khai me dhakka dete waqt ek baar bhi nahi sochte..........I hate such people u know........Jinka zameer marr jata hai only they can put their parents in old age homes.....This is one cause which i very strongly feel about.........I luvvvvvv my grandparents and parents soo much that in a heart beat i'd take all their pains on myself.........How can people do this yaar....!!

Anways...........Mindblowing part !! U made me cry !!

And swayam ki jaan le lungi main.....but im sure thode time baad mereliye ye kaam sujal hi kar dega !!
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey dear kool part
sorry commenting aftr a long time lekin kya karun was busy wid clg project
i gt confused in the last pasrt thoda
was kashish in luv wid sujal rite frm london😕
keep up the gr8 gud wrk
wil b w8ing 4 the next part eagerly plzzz post phataphat👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
wooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwww awesome part👏............................mery pas words he nai hai....................kia likh ko i m speechless.......................................kashish ney sujal se dosti karna chati hai.................sujal plz plz tum kashish se dosti karlo😉......................undono ki batoon se lag tha hai dono eik dusray se buhat pyaar karty hai.......................................kashsih ny kia speech de hai hum sab ki bhi asie he soch huni chaiye..............................im very happy dono mein lari ky alawa thora romance tu hua😳........................aur plz swayam ko kick karo is fic se jaldi😡.................................con't soon

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